DO NOW Padlet: How Can You Make A Thesis Claim More Complex? by Dario Sulzman https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0 We've talked about this in a previous class, but you may have some of your own strategies that you've learned in other classes. Today we're going to work on revising our Rhetorical Analysis claims. Specifically, to make them more interesting. So, what are some techniques or strategies that you have to make your thesis statements complex and interesting, as opposed to simplistic and obvious? en-us 2024-11-13 22:00:24 UTC 2025-08-18 04:26:30 UTC hello@padlet.com Charly Huinac https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3217172565 You can make it more engaging by having it be over a controversial/argumentative topic.

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  • you can weave together 2 or more related concepts to make your thesis more layered.

  • approach your topic from a less obvious perspective.

  • show that the topic has different sides and avoid making it sound too simple.

    • ]]>     2024-11-14 14:20:51 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3217173259     Unique 1135042 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3222285435 you can make a thesis statement more engaging by asking like questions that foreshadow what your audience will read but also gets them thinking and having their own opinions

    ]]>     2024-11-18 14:17:28 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3222285435     Brenda Quintanilla https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3222287589 By questions and a tone through the writing

    Also explain or make a situation where that happens in real life

    ]]>     2024-11-18 14:18:35 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3222287589     Bella Gomez-stafford 1085785 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3222288605 You can make it more engaging by adding humor and making it argumentative like stating a opinion.

    ]]>     2024-11-18 14:19:08 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3222288605     lia a https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3222290414 You can make a thesis claim more complex by considering different angles/perspectives and by adding other strategies that could help strengthen your writing, such as humor.

    ]]>     2024-11-18 14:20:01 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3222290414     David Rivetta https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3222290838 You can make it more engaging by making a controversial statement that will invite the reader to think a little more about your topic.

    ]]>     2024-11-18 14:20:14 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3222290838     Julian https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3222290842 Writing in certain ways, like using certain words or phrasing, to make you feel certain ways about what your reading. For example writing in like a story telling way compared to like argumentative way.

    ]]>     2024-11-18 14:20:14 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3222290842     Keylly Vinan https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3222291288 You can make it more engaging if there are questions being ask so you get the person reading really thinking and also the tone and adding humor.

    ]]>     2024-11-18 14:20:29 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3222291288     Inigo Gonzales https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3222293398 You can put rhetorical questions that foreshadow what you're going to analyze, include something somewhat controversial and put in different opinions.

    ]]>     2024-11-18 14:21:38 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3222293398     Jaylee Martinez https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/bo3m9zqkygk2q1u0/wish/3222294995 you can make a thesis claim more engaging by thinking about a more complex approach than just the obvious meaning behind the text.

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