https://padlet.com/27kmirzwa/bnrk6oxr4gqppvv1 Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-04 16:45:27 UTC 2025-11-13 22:50:00 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f363.png https://padlet.com/27kmirzwa/bnrk6oxr4gqppvv1/wish/1067048225 Small moment snapshot 

Hi Kaiden i liked how you described the place as a mini White House and how big it was. I also like how much emotion u put in there it was great 👍🏻. I wish you could add a bit more on the house. ]]> 2021-01-08 14:13:58 UTC https://padlet.com/27kmirzwa/bnrk6oxr4gqppvv1/wish/1067048225 https://padlet.com/27kmirzwa/bnrk6oxr4gqppvv1/wish/1067754111 I liked how you were focusing on the main part in your small moment. I also liked that you wrote about when you were emotional about when your grandpa passed because it made me feel like he was very important to your life. I also wish that you would talk about more of when you were looking at memories of him in a book.]]> 2021-01-08 16:42:14 UTC https://padlet.com/27kmirzwa/bnrk6oxr4gqppvv1/wish/1067754111 27tsmeltzer https://padlet.com/27kmirzwa/bnrk6oxr4gqppvv1/wish/1067848502 “We were in the funeral home in Maryland where my grandparents live and the room was filled with sorrow, the air smelt like fresh saltwater since we were near the beach and the house was white and looked like the mini white house the size of a house. We felt the ocean breeze blow against us, I thought to myself “nothing can make this moment better.” I love how you describe this. “ As i looked at my grandpa i felt like his soul was flying through me as I shivered in shock As I walked away on the sand-colored carpet I started to cry” I also love how you described this. I really wish you were describing more stuff]]> 2021-01-08 17:01:38 UTC https://padlet.com/27kmirzwa/bnrk6oxr4gqppvv1/wish/1067848502 https://padlet.com/27kmirzwa/bnrk6oxr4gqppvv1/wish/1612841303 Hi Kaiden I like how you you put a lot of detail. I also liked how you put that he had a shovel. But i didn’t really get the ending part.]]> 2021-06-17 18:22:40 UTC https://padlet.com/27kmirzwa/bnrk6oxr4gqppvv1/wish/1612841303