https://padlet.com/23mho1/bnb1pr86vequ Hello and welcome to my padlet! Thank you for reading my comment. Please provide positive and constructive feedback. en-us 2018-02-01 15:43:12 UTC 2025-12-09 16:52:31 UTC hello@padlet.com 23theadrick https://padlet.com/23mho1/bnb1pr86vequ/wish/237525036 Hello Max I am here to review your suspense narrative. I will give you 2 stars and 1 wish, so Im going to start off with the bad part first. The wish that I have is that you explained some things a little better, for example you say, "the vault holds the diamond thats worth $100,000,000" but then you dont talk about it for a while. Next the two wishes are one, your word choice, and lastly I liked how you said "the password is 1234 (JK im not telling you it)" I thought that was funny.]]> 2018-03-02 17:54:24 UTC https://padlet.com/23mho1/bnb1pr86vequ/wish/237525036 23rdamania https://padlet.com/23mho1/bnb1pr86vequ/wish/246927929 Hello Max! I really liked the word choice you used throughout the piece. But I thought your article was a little too choppy. And you could have made some periods into commas.
-Rushil Damania]]> 2018-03-28 14:45:30 UTC https://padlet.com/23mho1/bnb1pr86vequ/wish/246927929