Thesis Statement Part 1 by Adibah Mutalib https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/bm22ihl10abj Characteristics of a good thesis statement. en-us 2016-10-11 18:36:21 UTC 2017-07-06 05:05:37 UTC hello@padlet.com Writing Task adibahmutalib https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/bm22ihl10abj/wish/129938078 1. Read the statements below:
  • a) The way our society treats elderly people is unbelievable.
  • b) Enrollment at Star College increased by 10 percent.
  • c) Penang has much to offer the tourist.
  • d) I failed my Math course.

2. Post up your answers by:
  • Writing “Too Narrow” or “Too Broad” based on the statements given.
  • Revising the statements and make them effective thesis statements.


For instance:
a) Insects are fascinating creatures.
- This statement is too broad.
- Strength, organization, and communication make the ant one of nature’s most successful insects.
]]> 2016-10-11 18:38:33 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/bm22ihl10abj/wish/129938078 https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/bm22ihl10abj/wish/130008754 2016-10-12 01:42:04 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/bm22ihl10abj/wish/130008754 Ian Goh Hong Ming https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/bm22ihl10abj/wish/151743409 1. A) Too Broad
- The way society treats its elderly is unacceptable as they are treated poorly and without respect. 
2. B) Too Narrow
- Enrolment at Star college has increased significantly and up till 10% as it is picking up in popularity.
3.) C) Too Broad
- Penang city has a lot to offer tourists when they visit as they have strong cultural heritage embedded in their roots and signature Malaysian delicacies while showcasing how beautiful Malaysia is.
4.) D) Too Narrow
- I failed my Maths course because I did not study and revise enough therefore not scoring in the exam. 

]]> 2017-02-06 08:44:33 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/bm22ihl10abj/wish/151743409 Shiely Quah Sue Yie https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/bm22ihl10abj/wish/151744084 A) too broad 
The society are not respect to the elederly and for the unbelievable are means the elderly impossible to believe. 
B) too narrow
Enrollment at Star College increased by 10 percent. There already specific the 10 percent.
C) too broad 
D) too narrow]]> 2017-02-06 08:48:52 UTC https://padlet.com/adibahmutalib/bm22ihl10abj/wish/151744084