Literacy Writing by Ms.Bea Hive

Realistic Fiction Writing

beatricequattlebaum1 — 2023-03-08 06:13:33 UTC

Each Storyteller will publish thier story in padlet please dont forget to add a cover picture.

The lost puppy.(part 1)

2023-03-09 09:08:39 UTC

Hi my name is Sally. I have a little brown dog named Lilly."woof woof" Lilly barked at the window. "Good girl good girl Lilly" said sally. Then Lilly barked even more. Sally noticed that Lilly wanted to go out."No no you are not going out in the early morning to disturb other people in their sleep." Said Sally with a angry voice. Lilly went slowly but sadly to a couch and fell asleep. Lilly dreamed of the pretty flowers, the green grass, and the fresh air. Meanwhile,Lilly were asleep Sally made lunch because when Lilly woke up it was already eleven o`clock. "Lilly" called a voice. "are you coming with us"? Asked another voice.It was Rasberry and Sally.You might ask who Rasberry was. Okay let me tell you who Rasberry is. Rasberry is Sally`s friend. Rasberry has a dog named Coco. Coco and Lilly were best friends.Coco were cute so were Lilly. Lilly ate her lunch so quickly. And ran out the door to Coco.

The best friend for a bully P1!

2023-03-10 01:19:56 UTC

One day on a sunny morning.At the hallway waiting for spanish class.There was a very scary bully in our school.Also all of us were scared of him .Plus we had a test today.All of us were scared for the test including the bully.

The Lost Of Little Corn (part 1)

3726426 — 2023-03-10 01:30:53 UTC

Today, was a sunny morning.Charles woke up “yawn” he said with a sleepy voice, he sat on his bed wearing his clothes. After a while he came downstairs to the dining room to eat breakfast. His parents made pancakes with syrup and some toast at the morning. “Delicious” he said when he is taking the first bite of the pancakes.

When he’s done feeding his snake named Little corn, he is getting ready for school. “Dad I’m ready for the school bus” said Charles. Then his dad said “okay so let’s go.” “Slam!” They closed the front door as they start walking towards the bus stop.Charles got on the bus number 14 and the driver drove Charles and the other kids to school.

Halloween in School

2023-03-10 01:34:11 UTC

Part 1

Do you have a twin sister that it is your best friend? I have a twin sister. I am Caly, and this is my twin sister Smely. Let me tell you about our funny things. This thing happen in last fall when it is Halloween. The school build a new part.That part is for a Halloween party. That is a great party. This is how the party become not so great.

The lost puppy.(part 2)

2023-03-10 01:36:45 UTC

Coco were so happy that Lilly came. Rasberry and Sally had planned to go to the park witch is on the side of dog -park. Why did Rasberry and Sally go to dog park? Because Lilly and Coco loved dog-park. Coco and Lilly also loved to play with other dogs too. Rasberry stopped while Sally stopped. "What is it Sally"? asked Rasberry. "I think of my old cat that got lost and never came back". said Sally with a dark and sad voice. "Sally" said Rasberry,"actually I had a cat too". "It got killed by a guy named Harsy Fale"!.said Rasberry and tears came."It`s okay now" said Sally. When Sally and Rasberry came up Lilly was gone! One strange thing was that Coco asked for Lilly."yes Coco we will search for Lilly" said Rasberry softly. Everyone got worried. Even Coco got so worried.

The mystery lock p1

2023-03-10 01:37:30 UTC

In a quiet corner of Shenzhen was a treehouse. Inside was Rasberry and Sally. Rasberry and Sally were best friends forever. Their parents have gone to another country to work. Sally and Rasberry built a treehouse together.

Where is my ball![part 1]

2023-03-10 01:38:43 UTC

On a windy day Jerry and his dog Tom wanted to go outside.”WOOO!”’Wow it is frigid outside”said Jerry”I need to wear my jacket.

The Bully. (part 2)

2023-03-10 01:43:34 UTC

And boom the door opend it was very scary the bully was walking down the hallway.every body cleared his path.and everybody was hoping that the bully wasnt gonna bully them.but sadly he chosed me and I would see him at 10:00.
exactly i was shaking as much as dried ice touching metal.And to make it worse he chosed my friend jhon as well. it was very sad and shakey.

Where is my ball![part 2]

2023-03-10 01:44:30 UTC

When they went outside Jerry decide to play soccer ball.Jerry looked all over the house to find his soccer ball but Jerry still can’t find his soccer ball.

One freezing night,Carlene was playing video games.”hey”said mom.Don’t you want to do the WHO CARVES THE BEST PUMPKIN RACE ?”Oh,I forgot to night is Halloween.Can we go now?”Yes sure,just put your shoe’s on and let’s go.

2023-03-10 01:45:21 UTC

Part 1 pumpkin race

The Mystery lock p2

2023-03-10 01:49:51 UTC

Meanwhile, Rasberry was packing her stuff for school.She was getting her library book’s ,Spanish, French and german folders.She love to speak different launguage’s.

The Lost Of Little Corn (part 2)

3726426 — 2023-03-10 01:55:59 UTC

But Charles forgot to close the cage door! “Sss” as Little corn slithered out. He hide underneath the bed. And now Charles were still at first period of school! First period of school was math.

Charles were still practicing multiplication equations. “Ring ring!” “Okay it’s time to clean up.” Said Charles math teacher Mr.Robbie.” “It’s time for recess.” Said Mr.Robbie again.

“Yay,recess” said Charles as he ran to the gym to play soccer.
“I’ll be the defender” said Charles friend named Andrew. “I’ll be the goalie” said Charles another friend named Jeremy. “ Then I’ll be the attacker!” Said Charles in a excited voice.

The hated bully (part 3)

2023-03-10 01:56:16 UTC

Everybody hated hi so much.everybody pored him with slime on april fulls.Also they pored with water to clean him up.and i bet he bullied more than 1 person.the whole school hated him.even the princapal.

The mystery lock p3

2023-03-10 01:56:17 UTC

Sally was packing too.She was packing her pencil box ,English, Math and fractions folder.She like math.Sally favorite number is six.

The girl who was lost in the city part 1

2023-03-10 01:56:19 UTC

Milk just move in a new city, Milk is a cute little girl. She was not comfortable with the area, she want to have a walk to be more comfortable

Where is my ball![part 3]

2023-03-10 01:59:44 UTC

Jerry decide to ask his mom Jerry run into his as fast as he can and said”Mom do you know where is my soccer ball is?””I don’t know where is your soccer ball is but I think yesterday you took your soccer ball to the park”said mom”go to the park and find it””Okay”said Jerry”Lets go to the park Tom.”

PUMPKIN RACE part 2

2023-03-10 02:03:28 UTC

They walked and walked and here there are, at their old house.The host spoke up he said “lady’s and gentleman’s welcome to WHO WILL CARVE THE BEST PUMPKIN RACE.Will have five minutes to prepare.”Carlen asked his mom for his big pumpkin,but his mom said she don’t have his pumpkin.

Halloween in School

2023-03-10 02:04:39 UTC

Part 2

One day on a sunny morning a twin are going to a Halloween party in school.The twin are Caly and Smely. They walk on a big street. When they are in front of the door of the school.they Heard a Boom! “This sound was coming from inside the school!”Smely shouted. Then she ran inside the school. When Caly went inside she did not saw Smely. When Caly realize that Smely is lost in the new part of the school,she feel a little worried. But she think that Smely are playing a joke on her. So she yelled “You win in this round, Smely. You win win.” but there was no answer . then now Caly really know that Smely is lost in this halloween party. "I do not know where to go. I need to becaleful" Caly said to herself. Then she decide to find Smely.

Tom’s cast 1

2023-03-10 02:04:42 UTC

‘’Ding ling ling!’’ The alarm clock rang, Tom sat up from his bed and go to wash his face and brush his teeth, then he started to change his clothes, he ate his breakfast slowly, ‘’ding dong dong ding!’’ ‘’Oh no!’’ Cried Tom ‘’fast fast!’’ ‘’No time!’’ Shouted Tom’s mom! Tom grabbed his backpack and ran out the door.

Meanwhile, Tom ran fast as he could to school and he was breathing heavily and while he was running to school, he passed the trees and the flowers and every thing he could see and hear.’’I‘m not going to stop.’’ Tom told him self.

Suddenly, Tom tripped on a rock and flew into the sky, and he fell back to earth ad hurt his arm, it was very painful. He cried loudly and he lay down on the ground, his backpack flew away. Tears came from his eyes.

Mary lost her rainbow bracelet (Part 1)

2023-03-10 02:04:43 UTC

One winter evening a girl name Mary. Who alway wear her rainbow bracelet.She love her rainbow bracelet so much.Her mother brought it for her 8th birthday.

When she was playing hide and seek with her friend name Tammy. They have so much fun. They play until evening.When Tammy and Mary was hungry Mary said “I will get some snacks i will be back”. When Mary went to the kitchen.She realize her bracelet was missing.

Mary told Tammy to find her rainbow bracelet.Tammy and Mary’s looked in the bathroom, living room and the back yard.

The president’s son story part 1

2023-03-10 02:05:42 UTC

In a sunny morning, A kid name Harold went to his school.Harold is the president’s son. He was going up the stairs.He reached to his classroom.His class ended.He went to his next subject math.He learned fractions and number lines.Next is recess.

The problem (part 4)

2023-03-10 02:06:20 UTC

the problem for the story is.that he got hurt and.also bullyed hard.he couldnt go to school for months.or also for a long time.
he was very sad.and the bully realized what he did

The solution part 5/the ending

2023-03-10 02:11:14 UTC

Finnaly the solution is that he realized what he did. and he was sad.and he knew that if he was bullyed.it would hurt to.and it would hurt alot .and by the end.they became friends .and he never bullyied enybody ever again.and they lived hapilly ever after

The lost bunny 1

2023-03-10 02:11:29 UTC

One snowy day, Chloe and her pet bunny Furry watched outside.Boom! a bunch of snow covered up there window. ‘Wow’, said Chloe ‘looks like we better stay home’ said Chloe. Furry also agreed they watched the horrible blizzard.Crash! The car crashed to a wood house and broke.Chloe curled herself to her blanket and went back to sleep.

At afternoon ,Chloe woke up and went to play with Furry.But Chloe never think of that Furry can blend in the snow so Furry is lost in the snow.Chloe shouted ‘Furry’ but no one answered.Because Furry is covered up in the snow.Chloe cried but still Furry didn’t answer.

Meanwhile,Chloe cried but she knew that Furry is completely lost.Chloe put out papers of Furry’s picture but no one saw Furry.But one day Furry escaped and found food at the dump.But Furry is still sad because she is lost.Everyday Chloe tried to find Furry in the snow but Furry’s not in the snow.

The mystery lock part 4

2023-03-10 02:12:23 UTC

When they are done packing up. They went to school.sally rode her bike and Rasberry walked. At the end of the street was their new school. Sally was having her bike stopped and when they came to the end Sally and Rasberry was shocked! Their new school was beautiful! Sally was so proud and happy that she had fell down from the bike and landed on the floor. Rasberry examined the school and said in a proud voice “this is what I like “!

The girl who was lost in the city part 2

2023-03-10 02:12:30 UTC

On a dark and windy night Milk was walking in the city.Suddenly she heared a strange voice called:little girl what are you doing? Milk turn around and screamed:AAAAAAAAAA!And run away.When she stop and cried:oh no! I am lost!

The lost puppy(part 3)

2023-03-10 02:15:14 UTC

"Lilly come back" cried Sally."Where are you"? Asked Rasberry worried. Coco sniffed around and see if Lilly were near. "Noooooooo" cried Sally. Sally,Rasberry and Coco looked everywhere in the park. The swings, behind trees everywhere. But no Lilly. Coco walked to dog-park.There were Lilly in dog-park. "My goodness I thought you were gone"!Said Sally "Thank you so much Coco"said Sally happily ."Next time I will put on the leash on youLilly". "At least we found you Lilly" said Rasberry. "And from that day on Lilly always had her leash on. THE END.

The Lost Of Little Corn (part 3)

3726426 — 2023-03-10 07:25:21 UTC

Meanwhile,Little corn was hiding underneath Charles bed. After a few hours the bell rang. “Ring ring” “It’s time to go home” said Andrew. All the student grabbed there backpack and ran outside to their line up spot. At the same time they got outside, Charles mom was there, Charles picked up him and drove him home.

When he got home he noticed he did not close the cage door! “Oh no!” Cried Charles, “Jeremy was right I do have a bad luck today.” Charles put his back pack onto a shelf and he start searching for I Little corn.

Tom’s cast 2

2023-03-10 07:32:43 UTC

One classmate named sally saw him fell and decided to help him up. When Tom is awake, he founded him self in the hospital and he was having a X-rays,then the doctor said “I will help you reset your bone back and then in a cast, okay?” ‘’okay’’ said Tom softly.

Tom felt better and said ‘’thank you!” “no problem! “said the doctor.‘’ I promise I won’t ran again!’’ said Tom , when he walked out of the hospital, his mom was waiting for him. Tom said to his mom “I know I will be more careful when I go to school,and I will go to school and let my classmate draw on it!”
The End

The president’s son story part 2

2023-03-10 07:35:52 UTC

Second,In recess he played football.Harold scored a hat trick. Then the opposite team scored four goals.Then Harold scored a header.Then the goalkeeper saved a goal.The game ended. Harold is the man of the match.The game ended in 4- 4.

Halloween in School

2023-03-10 10:10:24 UTC

Part 3
Caly ask many teacher to help. The teacher are happy to help. They find in the trick or treat place, candy swich game,draw on face area. But they just can not find Smely. So they find it over and over. They still can not find Smely. Then one teacher name Mr. Harmle said, "You can go home to check if your little sister is at home." So Caly got out of the school. She walk on the street. When she is at home she saw her sister Smely are telling all the games in the halloween party to her mom. And Caly ran to her.She ask, "Where did you go?" "When I got inside the school I saw the Boom sound are just from a coming from a game.And a girl is old as me invted me to play with her. And I say yes.So we play in the party until mom came and pick me up." Smely said “And I forget you" "Oh my little sister. I am finding you all day"Caly said. Smely said "I am sorry sister." "It is OK" Caly said. And they hug together.

Pumpkin race part 3

2023-03-11 01:55:30 UTC

He ran back home to find his pumpkin.Carlen forgot to tell his mom about this .After a while Carlen’s mom couldn’t find him.She was very worried about Carlen.Then suddenly Carlen’s mom saw Carlen.She hugged Carlen as tight as she could. Carlen said “okay okay,that’s enough.”the pumpkin race starts in five,four, three,two,one,go!

Pumpkin race part 4

2023-03-11 02:58:18 UTC

He carved his pumpkin as fast as could.He carved two eyes, a mouth, a nose, now he just some decorations.The host says that there only five more minutes. “hurry up”Carlen gave the pumpkin to the host.After about ten minutes the host said”first prize goes to Carlen!Second prize goes to Jonny!Third prize goes to Saran!”Oh yeah cried Carlen, I won first prize.

Pumpkin race part 5

2023-03-11 03:22:22 UTC

“Next time you need to remember your things.”said mom joyfully.FUN FACT(Carlen loves pumpkins). THE END

Halloween in School

2023-03-11 03:54:42 UTC

Part 4
Now I think that Smely act a little weird. Like before she like strawberry and hate blueberry. But now she love blueberry and hate other berries. She also talk less and she are a little bit shorter.And she even play with other person and not me. She is not right. So, do you think the problem really solve?

The president’s son story part 3

2023-03-11 08:13:32 UTC

Meanwhile,it is literacy Harold were learning dialogues.Harold saw a video about it.He did a activity about dialogues.The teacher started to tell the instructions.Then Harold started.After some time someone was done and got a sticker.He was done and gave it to the teacher.The teacher graded it and he got the sticker.

The Mystery lock part5

2023-03-12 23:52:25 UTC

When Sally and Rasberry walked in the new room they were shocked . Sally was happy for the new school but Rasberry is moreover happy than Sally. They walked past the book shelf, many books are now laying on the floor waiting Rasberry and Sally to look at.

The Lost Of Little Corn (part 4)

3726426 — 2023-03-13 01:28:25 UTC

Charles looked in the closet, under the night stand, in his backpack, and even in the kitchen! “Oh no, where is little corn?” Cried Charles with a sad voice. “Ssss, hey what’s that sound?’’ “I think it’s coming from my bedroom.’’ Said Charles as he walk towards his bedroom.” “Mom, I find him he’s under my bed this whole time! “Said Charles.

“Mom, but I can’t reach it!’’ “Let me try.” Said his mom.’’ Nope I can’t reach its too!’’ Then Charles remembered that king snake eat live mouse. “Mom, take out the mouse that it is in the box and put that in Little corn’s cage.” “Whats’ that
For?’’ “You’ll see.” Suddenly, Little corn slithered out.

The president’s son story part 4

2023-03-13 01:49:23 UTC

It’s lunch time and Harold got a sandwich.He ate his sandwich and it was time to line up.They left the cafeteria.When he was walking down the hallway to get to his next class.When he was walking he fell down. It hurts a lot said Harold.A kid help him to get to the nurse.The Nurse said call your parents.He called his parents and they picked him up.After some weeks he recovered and he can go school again.

The president’s son story part 5

2023-03-13 01:55:08 UTC

In conclusion, Harold is happy again.If someone will hurt always help them.Because helping is nice and kind.If they are happy we will be happy too.If we help someone we feel proud of ourselves.

The Lost Of Little Corn (part 5)

3726426 — 2023-03-13 01:58:23 UTC

Little corn start moving towards his cage. When little corn was in his cage eating the mouse Charles closed the door. Charles were exhausted. “Next time I’ll be be way more careful than this time.”

Where is my ball![part4]

2023-03-14 01:09:45 UTC

“Wait”said mom “before you go to the park eat your lunch””okay”said Jerry.After lunch,Jerry go to the park and started to find his soccer ball but he still couldn’t find his soccer ball.

The lost bunny 2

2023-03-14 09:45:01 UTC

But one day, Chloe saw Furry’s white fur.She followed it until she see Furry’s tag.Chloe knew that she was close to Furry so Chloe kept walking.Furry stop walking and rested.

At night, Chloe couldn’t see so she got out a flashlight and kept going.While Chloe’s walking she heard Furry crying so she used her ears and went closer to Furry.

In the morning, Furry heard Chloe’s steps and raced towards Chloe.But still she is not beside Chloe and Furry’s farther and farther.Furry still couldn’t know how to get back home.So as Chloe.The two people kept going but lost and lost.

But one day,Furry is hungry.So Furry went to find food except for Chloe .Furry searched and searched but she couldn’t find food.

The lost bunny 3

2023-03-14 11:59:35 UTC

But one day,Furry found an apple under an apple tree.So Furry ate the apple and kept finding Chloe.

At the night, Chloe saw the apple that Furry ate.Chloe have a clue that the apple is found in east .So she went east to find Furry.Furry thought “I miss Chloe I must find her “.Chloe went to east and found a which is Furry’s fur.Chloe know that snow wouldn’t get down to this forest so she kept finding Furry.

At the morning, when Furry is sleeping Chloe kept going.Until she couldn’t find one clue and there is Furry.When Furry woke up she found herself on her home and Chloe sleeping at her bed .

         Furry felt happy and safe.So everyday Chloe took Furry to play.At winter they will stay at home.Furry knew that she is relieved now.So Chloe knew she need think before we do.

The girl who was lost in the city part 3

2023-03-14 12:24:20 UTC

She called her mom and send the location.When her mom came and said:are you okay?Yes said Milk.Let’s go home said Milk’s mom

Girl who was lost in the city

2023-03-14 14:08:29 UTC

The lost bunny

2023-03-15 01:44:47 UTC

2023-03-15 01:57:06 UTC

The president’s son story

2023-03-15 13:50:21 UTC

In a sunny morning, A kid name Harold went to his school.Harold is the president’s