B3 Persuasive Writing Examples by Julie Stauffer https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe Below are examples of each of the seven potential persuasive writing categories you could choose for your portfolio project. With your group, read your assigned examples and following the directions. This will also be available to you as a resource throughout this project. en-us 2019-05-02 13:21:51 UTC 2019-05-06 16:28:45 UTC hello@padlet.com Movie Speech: "We Are Marshall" jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/356185553 Watch the following clip from the movie "We Are Marshall".  List THREE APPEALS that the coach uses in his speech, with text evidence. Why would he choose those specific appeals for his audience? ]]> 2019-05-02 13:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/356185553 Awareness Campaign Video: "Know the Signs of Human Trafficking" jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/356185554 *use headphones* Watch the video below. Comment TWO APPEALS that this video utilized in order to get their message across. Explain how each appeal is used, whether or not you thought they were effective, and why. ]]> 2019-05-02 13:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/356185554 Song: "Farmer Refuted" from Hamilton jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/356185555 *use headphones* This song has two sides being presented. Give two rhetoric devices that each side uses, and explain who you think was more effective in their argument and why. ]]> 2019-05-02 13:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/356185555 Open Letter: "Letter from a Birmingham Jail" by Martin Luther King Jr. jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/356185556 Reading the section from the letter given to you. As a whole class, decide what two appeals King uses most effectively in this passage. Then, each group must identify two additional rhetorical devices in the paragraph and LIST THEM BELOW this column. ]]> 2019-05-02 13:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/356185556 Article: "The Argument Against Headphones" jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/356185558 Read the following article and identify two things that made the author's argument strong, and two things that made it weak, citing text evidence to prove your point. ]]> 2019-05-02 13:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/356185558 Short Story: "The Story of an Hour" by Kate Chopin. jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/356185560 Read the following narrative and comment below what the focus statement behind this piece could be. Provide three pieces of text evidence that backs up your predicted focus statement. ]]> 2019-05-02 13:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/356185560 SW: "Explaining My Depression to my Mother" jstauffer10 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/356185562 *use headphones* Watch the following spoken word and comment below THREE PERSUASIVE STRATEGIES about this spoken word that were effective. Think beyond just the words that are being said. ]]> 2019-05-02 13:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/356185562 leanna annie and laura https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357214226 amplification- repeats "when" when he describes the situations at which he felt segregation
personification- "ominous clouds of inferiority"


]]> 2019-05-06 14:50:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357214226 CJ, Coby https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357214915 Hyperbole- He says twenty million Negro brothers. This is an exaggeration because they is most likely not 20 million Negroes in that area. This was effective because it emphasized it.
Alliteration- He says "find your tongue twisted and your speech stammering." This affected the statement because the alliteration it made the sentence stand out.]]> 2019-05-06 14:51:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357214915 Devonte, Jacob, Parker https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357215123 Personification- "They have carved a tunnel of hope through the dark mountain of disappointment"
Epizeuxis - "We should never forget that everything Adolf Hitler did in Germany was "legal" and everything the Hungarian freedom fighters did in Hungary was "Illegal." It was "Illegal" to aid and comfort a Jew in Hitler's Germany."]]> 2019-05-06 14:52:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357215123 Elliott, Colby, William, Ethan https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357215814 Martin Luther King uses the 🤬 party as an example of how the police in the south were rude to all African american people.  "We should never forget the thing that Adolf Hitler did in Germany and all of that was legal." some rhetorical devices in the paragraph metaphors and simile because they all describe the passage how they are being mistreated like others in the past and a simile because King explains how the police and whites would mistreat African american people.]]> 2019-05-06 14:53:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357215814 chrissy and victoria https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357215887 Allusion: "We should never forget that everything Adolf Hitler did in Germany was "legal" and everything the Hungarian freedom fighters did in Hungary was "illegal"
Metaphor: "It rings in the ear of every negro with piercing familiarity" ]]> 2019-05-06 14:53:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357215887 Matt, Nate, Carso https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357216393 2019-05-06 14:54:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357216393 Matt, Nate, Carson https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357216400 MLK uses most effectively Epizeuxis, which means to repeat one word for emphasis.  He uses this the most when he is talking about segregation and slavery.  

He also used enumeratio which means to make a point with details. ]]> 2019-05-06 14:54:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357216400 Mikey, Evan https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357216878 Amplification-"For years now i have heard the word "wait"!It rings in the ear of every Negro with piercing familiarity. This"wait" has almost always meant "Never". He repeats the word Wait in parenthesis over and over again including later in the next paragraph.
Metaphor- " Who have never felt the stinging darts of segregation"

]]> 2019-05-06 14:55:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357216878 Brett Ferguson, Bradley Varner https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357222034 Enumeratio - "Hence segregation is not only politically, economically, and sociologically unsound, it is morally wrong and sinful."
Metaphor - "Let us hope that the dark clouds of racial prejudice will soon pass away and the deep fog of misunderstanding will be lifted from our fear drenched communities."]]> 2019-05-06 15:04:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357222034 Victoria, Chrissy https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357224029 1.) Sabrina Benaim never stopped talking, almost as it was all one sentence and just a constant flow. Similar to depression that never takes a break and will always be there. 
2.) She also displayed a great amount of emotions through her facial expressions and tears which helped show the realness of what she was talking about.
3.) He repetition was used as a cry for help. Throughout the poem she repeatedly called for her mother in hopes that she would answer but they were never answered. ]]> 2019-05-06 15:07:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357224029 Laura, Leanna, Annie https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357225837 1. she keeps addressing her mom making an emotional appeal as if she's a little girl.
2. She repeats her statement of her depression makes it unforgettable.
3. She compares her anxiety to her being held hostage. Creating a Metaphor. ]]> 2019-05-06 15:11:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357225837 Jacob, Devonte https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357227871 2019-05-06 15:14:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357227871 Jacob, Devonte, Parker https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357227899 nm]]> 2019-05-06 15:14:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357227899 Jacob, Devonte, Parker https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357227901 Appeal to emotion- "were buried here, six teammates six sons of marshell." 
Appeal to trust- "and if you do that, if you do that we cannot lose."
Appeal to reason- "more experienced on paper they're just better and they know it to."

 He wants to get the team emotionally ready for the game while bringing them into what happened. He next wants the team to trust him in order to beat their next challenge. 
Lastly he brings in statistically that the other team is better but then says how they need to trust him In order to win.]]> 2019-05-06 15:14:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357227901 Elliott, Colby https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357228609 this video is about how she went through the depression and what it felt like. With her facial expressions of sadness,fear and being scared of life. She even states "I'm not afraid to die". This is powerful because it shows how she fears everything except death because depression builds up. It also happens because her life has been tough since then. ]]> 2019-05-06 15:15:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357228609 CJ and Coby and Evan https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357231049 1. She used a lot of emotion when she was speaking by speaking very loud and changing tones.
2. She used facial expresions and gestures to to express the speech
3. She was constantly speaking and did not pause the entire time, therefore keeping the audience's attention.]]> 2019-05-06 15:19:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357231049 Laura,Leanna,Annie https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357231438 1. He used appeal of emotion to make you feel sympathetic and scared it might happen to you.
2. He appealed to normality showing it can happen to anyone making it ]]> 2019-05-06 15:20:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357231438 Elliott,Colby https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357232009 The man in this video explains human trafficking and controlling people in a certain way.  He states how they might have cuts or unexplained bruises and could be in a relationship with someone extremely older than the other person or partner.   The appeals are used in order to support the movement if you see something say something.  He supports the message that it only takes a few seconds to save a life. ]]> 2019-05-06 15:21:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357232009 Jacob, Devonte, Parker https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357233138 Two things that made the authors argument strong are the use of Appeal to reason and Appeal to normality. The appeal to reason is "One in five teenagers in America cant hear rustles or whispers" This quote brings in reason behind their motive. Next the appeal to normality is he says "John C. Koss invented a set of headphones" then says "middle class men" Showing how everyone uses the headphones and a every day guy created them.
Two things that made the essay weak was the lack of more recent information. They say "The Walkman appeared in 1979" They then continue to talk about the Walkman and don't necessarily bring up much current information. The lack of appeal to authority is also weak for this essay. He says "Keir Keightly, a professor of media" but they never brought in his insights on headphones. If they did have a doctor truly say against headphones then it would be more persuasive.]]> 2019-05-06 15:23:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357233138 Cj, Coby, Evan https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357233284 .]]> 2019-05-06 15:24:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357233284 Chrissy, Victoria https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357234076 At first, freedom seems like a terrible thing to Mrs. Mallard, who's restricted in lots of ways: through her marriage, by her bad heart, and even inside her home, which she doesn't leave.  Once it arrives, though, it fills her with an overpowering joy. 
1.)  " When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease--of the joy that kills,".
2.) "And yet she had loved him--sometimes. Often she had not. What did it matter! What could love, the unsolved mystery, count for in the face of this possession of self-assertion which she suddenly recognized as the strongest impulse of her being! "
3.)  "She was young, with a fair, calm face, whose lines bespoke repression and even a certain strength. But now there was a dull stare in her eyes, whose gaze was fixed away off yonder on one of those patches of blue sky. "]]> 2019-05-06 15:25:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357234076 Cj Coby Evan https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357235393 1.) He used the appeal of emotion, because he made people feel something when he was talking. This was effective, because it hit people in the heart.
2.) He uses appeal to normality by comparing a normal life to someone that might be included in human trafficking]]> 2019-05-06 15:28:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357235393 Matt and Nate https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357235541 1. She used a lot of expressions and didn't stop talking until she was done.
2. She also kept changing her tone of voice and showed a lot of emotion about depression.
3.  As she was talking about depression in the beginning she showed little emotion but toward the end, she was showing a lot of emotion.
]]> 2019-05-06 15:28:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357235541 ethan, william thatguywilliam1 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357237224  
emotion- "were buried here, six teammates six sons of marshell." 
 trust- "and if
you do that, if you do that we cannot lose."
 reason- "more
experienced on paper they're just better and they know it to."
 
  He wants to
get the teams emotional status ready. 

He wants the team to trust him to help tem overcome their challenge
 Last he brings in
that the other team is better but then if they trust in him they can win 

]]> 2019-05-06 15:31:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357237224 Brett, Brad, Mikey https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357237421 Strengths:
1) The author uses fear tactics, warning the reader of the potential danger of earbuds.
"One in five teenagers in America can’t hear rustles or whispers, according to a study published in August in The Journal of the American Medical Association ."
2) The author shows a deep understanding of her topic.
"According to some accounts, modern headphones were the brainchild of Nathaniel Baldwin, a tinkerer from Utah who grew frustrated when he couldn’t hear Mormon sermons over the noise of the crowds at the vast Salt Lake Tabernacle ."

Weaknesses:
1) The author essentially commands the reader, which will result in retaliation from said readers.
"Make it a New Year’s resolution, then, to use headphones less."
2) The overall message of the article is the danger of earbuds, yet the author goes off on a tangent to discuss the history of the earbud, taking away the impact of the article.
"Headphones were invented more than a century ago."]]> 2019-05-06 15:32:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357237421 Chrissy, Victoria https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357237455 Appeal to normality:  to try and make the predator think that this was ok.
Appeal to authority: The people that created the ad put a way for any possible victims to be able to contact help. ]]> 2019-05-06 15:32:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357237455 Matt, Carson https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357259918 emotion- "we are buried here, six teamates, six tons of marshell trust."
reason- "more experenced on paper,  they're just better and they know how to do it." The coach wants to get the team to be ready for the game.
trust-"and if you do that, if you do that we cannot lose."]]> 2019-05-06 16:08:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357259918 leanna annie laura https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357260056 " "Free! Body and soul free!" she kept whispering."
" But she saw beyond that bitter moment a long procession of years to come that would belong to her absolutely. And she opened and spread her arms out to them in welcome. "
" When the doctors came they said she had died of heart disease--of the joy that kills."
 ]]> 2019-05-06 16:08:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357260056 CJ Coby Evan https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357260068 Strong: The author warns the audience about possible dangers due to the ear buds. This gives fear to the audience, because they do not want to experience these things. Also the author sounds very experienced on the topic and seems pretty wise in what he is talking about.
Weak: The authors lack of the use of appeal to authority. This makes the argument weak, because he does not make the connection to the people. Also, the lack of recent information makes it very weak because it seems that the information is less accurate.]]> 2019-05-06 16:08:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357260068 Carson, Matt https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357261576  strong - One in five teenagers in America can’t hear rustles or whispers, according to a study published in August in The Journal of the American Medical Association.
weak -  Under these circumstances, headphones are extremely useful — and necessary for sound professionals, like intelligence and radio workers — but it’s a strange fact of our times that this rarefied experience of sound has become so common and widespread.
weak -  The Medium column on Jan. 9, about headphones, referred incorrectly to their origin.  
strong -  When an audio current passes through the device’s voice coil, it creates an alternating magnetic field that moves a stiff, light diaphragm. ]]> 2019-05-06 16:11:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357261576 Jacob, Devonte, Parker https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357263628 Seabury is arguing against bloodshed and he uses appeal to authority by saying "free thoughts on the proceedings of the Continental Congress." and "I pray the king shows you his mercy." He then uses Epizeuxis by repeating "For shame" throughout the essay. Hamilton uses Epizeuxis as well, by sayinh "For the revolution!" throughout the song. He then uses appeal to reason by saying "Chaos and Bloodshed" then "Already haunt us" This shows his side that they are already in war. Seabury argus the better side because he uses reason, authority and other rhetorical devices better than Hamilton does.]]> 2019-05-06 16:15:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357263628 Matt and Nate https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357263843 1. He uses appeal of emotion because he is trying to get people to do the right thing and try to make people feel the same about this video.
2. He uses appeal of trust because he is trying to get people to do the right thing and do positive things/stay positive.]]> 2019-05-06 16:15:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357263843 Evan, Cj, Coby https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357265256 The coach uses appeal to emotion in his speech he stays very serious throughout the speech and describes what is possible. He makes the players believe in themselves.
The coach also uses appeal to reason. The coach tells them what he has seen from them and what they are capable of doing based off of what he has seen.
The coach also uses appeal to trust . The coach uses what he has seen and the players trust him with what he has seen. He was there watching them.]]> 2019-05-06 16:18:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357265256 Elliott,Colby https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357266871 She copes through her husbands death from crying and this helps her cope and get through it as it is for compassion for him as his death was hard and she dreads this moment for this 

(didn't finish)]]> 2019-05-06 16:21:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357266871 will, ethan thatguywilliam1 https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357266964  1. she addresses her mom making an appeal to emotional as if she's a child
2. She repeats that she has depression and makes it unforgettable for whoever hears it.
3. She compares her anxiety to her being held hostage. by doing this she is creating a Metaphor. ]]> 2019-05-06 16:22:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357266964 Brett, Brad, Mikey https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357268133 Appeal to Emotion -
"They don't know your heart."
This quote appeals to their emotion by strengthening them. The coach is telling his players that their strength comes not from statistics and papers, but their drive.
Appeal to Trust - 
"I do."
After telling his players that their opponents do not know their truest strengths, the coach assures his players that he knows, as he has trained them and raised them up.]]> 2019-05-06 16:24:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357268133 Matt Smith https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357269060 2019-05-06 16:26:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357269060 Will,Ethan https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357270331 2019-05-06 16:28:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jstauffer10/bl8g9a6tlmhe/wish/357270331