1st Macro- Improvements by Kathleen Gallagher https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta In my Of Mice and Men essay, I felt I could have improved on... en-us 2016-11-09 12:13:20 UTC 2018-06-29 12:38:41 UTC hello@padlet.com My essay could have had 1 or 2 better pieces of evidence and connected to the thesis better than the claims https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136373930 2016-11-09 13:17:06 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136373930 https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374513 counterexample.]]> 2016-11-09 13:18:57 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374513 Actually finish my essay https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374541 2016-11-09 13:19:01 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374541 https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374544 I felt like I should have had a longer and better analysis]]> 2016-11-09 13:19:01 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374544 https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374546 I could've worked on more in depth analysis's]]> 2016-11-09 13:19:02 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374546 https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374548 I could've related the topic of the essay to euthanasia more. Also I could've improved on my transitions.]]> 2016-11-09 13:19:02 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374548 https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374562 I could have improved on transitioning sentences
 and paragraphs ]]> 2016-11-09 13:19:04 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374562 Im in improved in my grammar https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374571 2016-11-09 13:19:06 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374571 Punctuation https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374602 ! I thought that i could improve in my punctuation placement]]> 2016-11-09 13:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374602 I felt that I could work on make sentences less choppy and make them flow better. https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374679 2016-11-09 13:19:29 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374679 kierrawaterman https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374681 i need to not procrastinate 

]]> 2016-11-09 13:19:29 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374681 https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374715 I could have gone into more detail and I could have tied the research and the book together better. ]]> 2016-11-09 13:19:35 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374715 https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374754 I feel like I can improve on going more in depth with my analysis 

]]> 2016-11-09 13:19:43 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374754 Putting more depth in on My intro paragraph to catch the readers attention https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374799 2016-11-09 13:19:50 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374799 NAV https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374845 I could have had a more in depth analysis and could have linked it to euthanasia better

]]> 2016-11-09 13:19:59 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374845 https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374863 I need to improve putting 
the intro together better]]> 2016-11-09 13:20:02 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374863 https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374864 i forgot to change the page numbers in the works cited ]]> 2016-11-09 13:20:02 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374864 Connect the book with a modern issue https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374967 2016-11-09 13:20:23 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374967 I had an easier time finding good quotes https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374982 2016-11-09 13:20:26 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136374982 https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375007 I need to improve on how to introduce my quotes]]> 2016-11-09 13:20:31 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375007 I wanted to improve on how long my speach was because it was kinda short https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375021 2016-11-09 13:20:33 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375021 I needed to work on it more but i procrastinated so my essay was sucky. kierrawaterman https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375049 2016-11-09 13:20:38 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375049 I feel I could have gotten better at not being so repetitive https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375074 2016-11-09 13:20:43 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375074 https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375079 I could have improved on fluidity between sentences and a better conclusion

]]> 2016-11-09 13:20:44 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375079 https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375086 I could have improved more on the analysis and evidence after I typed my quotes. ]]> 2016-11-09 13:20:46 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375086 I need to improve on essays https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375107 2016-11-09 13:20:49 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375107 Five star  https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375114 what we did to think about in life is very important this is why we the class should stand up and protest against essay, book talks and papers]]> 2016-11-09 13:20:50 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375114 I didn't write down the page numbers for my OMAM evidence https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375115 2016-11-09 13:20:51 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375115 Intro https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375136 I thought that my intro was a little choppy and could have been smoother. ]]> 2016-11-09 13:20:54 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375136 https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375148 word choices

]]> 2016-11-09 13:20:56 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375148 https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375162 I could have connected sentences to make them longer]]> 2016-11-09 13:20:59 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375162 https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375351 i procrastinated way to long and could have had a better essay]]> 2016-11-09 13:21:36 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375351 I need to make my paper flow more https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375470 2016-11-09 13:22:03 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375470 gotten better at using commas and pucuation https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375578 2016-11-09 13:22:28 UTC https://padlet.com/gallkath/bl681udcdfta/wish/136375578