Narrative Writing by Donna Chung https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l Shared and contributed by RmD7 en-us 2019-01-10 03:53:01 UTC 2019-01-15 22:05:22 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021026 Interesting problem with a solution.]]> 2019-01-15 21:53:21 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021026 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021307 Begining, Middle, and End don't connect good/smoothly]]> 2019-01-15 21:54:15 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021307 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021352 2-5 errors including capitalization and spelling]]> 2019-01-15 21:54:18 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021352 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021354 writing unclear]]> 2019-01-15 21:54:18 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021354 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021356 Little or no transitions.

]]> 2019-01-15 21:54:18 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021356 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021357 3-5 figurative languages. ]]> 2019-01-15 21:54:18 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021357 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021370 All correct gramer and correct punchation]]> 2019-01-15 21:54:20 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021370 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021372 Incorrect punctuation, like: little or no transition]]> 2019-01-15 21:54:21 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021372 Correct problem with very good understanding https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021377 2019-01-15 21:54:22 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021377 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021379 Interesting problem and soultion

]]> 2019-01-15 21:54:22 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021379 11008065 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021382 Little to no details.]]> 2019-01-15 21:54:22 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021382 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021393 Not writing in complete sentence also no problem middle and end

]]> 2019-01-15 21:54:27 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021393 bad grammer https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021418 2019-01-15 21:54:34 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021418 No problem https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021435 2019-01-15 21:54:37 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021435 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021456 No details does not make sence

]]> 2019-01-15 21:54:44 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021456 In order, for criteria met you need to have a problem, soloution, and a middle with all the steps you need to get to the soloution. https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021468 2019-01-15 21:54:47 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021468 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021475 1-0 erorrs including capitalization and spelling

]]> 2019-01-15 21:54:48 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021475 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021483 Doesn't make sense

]]> 2019-01-15 21:54:49 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021483 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021484 Story has a flow or a twist to it.]]> 2019-01-15 21:54:50 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021484 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021508 The Story is clear and makes since to the reader]]> 2019-01-15 21:54:54 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021508 11008065 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021510 Interesting problem with twists, and excels at driving the attention of reader.]]> 2019-01-15 21:54:55 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021510 0-2 errors https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021567 2019-01-15 21:55:09 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021567 did not follow the graphic orginizer https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021616 2019-01-15 21:55:20 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021616 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021622 Problem needs to connect with the middle and end.]]> 2019-01-15 21:55:21 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021622 i https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021647 did not do dietail

]]> 2019-01-15 21:55:26 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021647 Figurative Language https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021695 2019-01-15 21:55:37 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021695 Good transitions. https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021698 2019-01-15 21:55:38 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021698 Natural transitions. https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021787 2019-01-15 21:55:51 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021787 has problem middle end https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021788 2019-01-15 21:55:51 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021788 Hook and conclusion grabs and concludes https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021810 2019-01-15 21:55:58 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021810 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021812 6-9 figurative languages. ]]> 2019-01-15 21:55:58 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021812 barely no arrors https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021839

]]> 2019-01-15 21:56:03 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021839 11008065 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021845 0-2 errors.]]> 2019-01-15 21:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021845 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021849 Good spelling]]> 2019-01-15 21:56:05 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021849 most wrong cannot understand at all !! https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021868 2019-01-15 21:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021868 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021882 doesn't have a hook. ]]> 2019-01-15 21:56:10 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021882 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021912 good come alive box, good problem, nice plot and a solution at the end


]]> 2019-01-15 21:56:16 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021912 Understandable https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021937 2019-01-15 21:56:22 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021937 Has great transtions https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021946 2019-01-15 21:56:24 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021946 little arrors https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021948 2019-01-15 21:56:24 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021948 0 mistakes https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021981 2019-01-15 21:56:32 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321021981 problem that makes sence and has a solution https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321022024 2019-01-15 21:56:41 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321022024 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321022077 First sentence hooks

]]> 2019-01-15 21:56:58 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321022077 Good hook https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321022079 2019-01-15 21:56:58 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321022079 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321022087 No plot.]]> 2019-01-15 21:57:00 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321022087 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321022099 0-3 wrong and a clear understanding ]]> 2019-01-15 21:57:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321022099 following the organizer and come alive box https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321022105 2019-01-15 21:57:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321022105 11008065 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321022156 Problem that does not completely derive the attention of reader, 0-2 errors, and plot twists that readers will like (a little bit).]]> 2019-01-15 21:57:15 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321022156 https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321022185 correct grammar. ]]> 2019-01-15 21:57:23 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321022185 A great story and problem. https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321022332 2019-01-15 21:57:55 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321022332 good transitions https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321023953 2019-01-15 22:05:12 UTC https://padlet.com/dchung2/bl43na5w6q2l/wish/321023953