https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul English class en-us 2021-09-01 19:06:08 UTC 2024-12-04 10:19:42 UTC hello@padlet.com Mwanapwani https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul/wish/1710695776 2021-09-01 19:10:20 UTC https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul/wish/1710695776 Mwanapwani https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul/wish/1711775581 The cartoon is a portrayal of domestic violence as both the man and woman have a black eye and the plasters on their faces, also the bag gloves that both are wearing indicate that they are fighting. Additionally, the child in between them heightens the tension, that these two have a child and undoubtedly they have a relationship.]]> 2021-09-02 04:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul/wish/1711775581 Mwanapwani https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul/wish/1717486049 1st formative essay]]> 2021-09-05 14:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul/wish/1717486049 Mwanapwani https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul/wish/1754738552 Bildungsroman in 'Purple Hibiscus'
Character of Mama to display the bildungsroman.
Mama is first seen as an innocent character that is submissive towards Papa.

Despite the cruelty Papa has on the family, Mama stays compassionate to her family and Eugene's as well.

Later on in the chapters, Jaja and Kambili stay at Aunty Ifeoma's house, Papa still beats Mama she had an abortion and got injured several times.

When Ade Coker is bombed by the government, Mama learns that Papa would soon be next after government officials reached the house severally.

To prevent a merciless and brutal murder like Ade's, she acts savage, Mama decides to mix poison in Papa's coffee, and that way Mama finds it peaceful for Eugene's death. Also ensuring that Jaja and Kambili are not threatened or hurt.

Right here, we see Mama's smart move on the game. Her silence is worth it, she confesses that she was the murderer but no one listens because she appears too innocent. Jaja sacrifices to stay behind bars instead, during his stay in the prison, Mama gets to be a sensible person, considering her family's well-being in the 
future via her decisions for the children Eugene left.

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Incomplete introduction meaning 'TAGSYT' was not completely utilized in the intro.

Comparative essay on 'Purple Hibiscus' and 'Rob your Kids'

Feedback from sir:

1. You should always consider the impact on the reader.
2. You need to invest in the structure of your comparative response. Reach out for support.
3. You are encouraged to be perceptive in your identification of the theme /social issue. Both texts examine the relationships between fathers and their children (teenagers)

]]> 2021-09-20 17:18:53 UTC https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul/wish/1754783434 Mwanapwani https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul/wish/1789084731 Question:
Authors often write fiction as a means of social commentary . compare how the authors of two works that you have read have written works of social commentary.

two paragraphs one of a similarity and the other of differences.

Feedback from Sir:
Based on the my response of the comparative essay, I realized I should structure my response precisely. It should be the proper structure of a comparative essay. like including the impact on the reader should always be there

Also, sir told me to give an insight (deep understanding)  in identifying themes, since both texts explore the same theme/ social issue  of relationships between fathers and their children.

]]> 2021-10-04 09:51:25 UTC https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul/wish/1789084731 Mwanapwani https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul/wish/1790305394 Analyzing style(authorial choices ) and effects of an editorial cartoon.]]> 2021-10-04 16:45:56 UTC https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul/wish/1790305394 Mwanapwani https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul/wish/1856388228 Write 10 bullet points focused on the following Key question.]]> 2021-10-31 09:17:34 UTC https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul/wish/1856388228 Mwanapwani https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul/wish/1986130723 According to the teacher's feedback I need to work on the following things.
Firstly, my essay was more of a decriptive writing , it seemed like I was informing the reader on just what the text is about . In all of my body paragraphs, I was far from persuading the reader in my understanding and interpretation of the text. The requirements were to convince my views of the texts indepth.
Secondly, I need to work on my sentence structure. I had several unfinished sentence, which was as a result of both syntax and a little bit of a mistake.
Thirdly, I need to work on commenting on the effect of authorial choices in conveying the message. Evaluating critically the effectiveness of authorial choices in purpose.
Lastly, I also need to work on the focus and evaluation of the guiding question. The focus of the guiding question helps in being specific.]]> 2022-01-11 14:23:31 UTC https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul/wish/1986130723 Mwanapwani https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul/wish/2187311417 2022-05-17 09:32:15 UTC https://padlet.com/Mwanapwani/bkgxe63it3wbr5ul/wish/2187311417