Alejandro Villalobos Narrative Writing Project: My Unjust Society by Alejandro Villalobos https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC 2023-02-27 05:58:56 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png Point of View 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283197 The point of view in "Theo's Song" is 3rd person because the narrator is not involved in the story and there is no "I" or "me". ]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283197 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283199 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283199 Characters 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283200 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283200 Conflict 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283201 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283201 Plot: Sequential 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283202 Event #:
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-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283205 Prompt 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283206 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283206 Theo's Song 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283207 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283207 Rubric 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283209 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283209 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283211 My story will be in 3rd person so the narrator is telling the story. I want the reader to see everything that is happening and will happen.]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283211 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283212 My story is gonna take place in a rain storm so it could have that sad story vibe. It takes place  in an unfair city. The governments put chips in their brains so they can control their minds. All of their names are numbers like P. 1005.]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283212 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283213 There are 4  main characters, two boys and two girls(antagonist). They are not one of the robots (bacicly). They are trying to be posotive but they can't be. And the government(protagonist).]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283213 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283214 The government is making everyone into slaves. The 4 kids don't want that to happen so they try and shut the dhips down.]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283214 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283216 They try to hack their coms and  destroy the chips and they do but they have another problom that they have to deal with which is the government. They were inraged and they knew that the government wanted to take them down so they fight back.]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283216 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283217 They learn more skills like expert hacking. They also learn fighting and parkour skills. They also build more gadgets and learn more about each other]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283217 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283219 They find out that the slaves were done building a huge robot and they get to control it because of the hacking skills but the gonverment had other bots]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283219 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283220 Do not let something bad go on.]]> 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283220 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283222 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283222 Rough Draft 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283223 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283223 Final Draft 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283225 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283225 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283226 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283226 What are Human Rights? 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283229 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283229 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283230 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283230 30 Basic Human Rights 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283232 2017-12-14 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/216283232 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/217056519 Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 18:29:38 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/217056519 Plot Diagram Example 200900921 https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/217056794 Use my plot diagram as an example of what I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 18:30:21 UTC https://padlet.com/200900921/bk6x8a3i4rdb/wish/217056794