Persuasive Writing by Amra Gaffoor

By Ms.Amra

amra_gaffoor — 2018-11-18 17:53:41 UTC

First -the title
1.Taking Care Of Your Teeth
2.Brush your teeth
Introduction
Reasons- At least 3

Do not forget to add
Sentence openers , rhetorical questions, statistics ,emotive language , examples and
conclusion

Taking Care of Your Teeth

Looking after your teeth is very important. You will only ever get two sets .We need to keep them healthy, so that they can last a lifetime. Do you like a smile with rotting, discolored teeth? Personal hygiene is a major part of your everyday life. It includes brushing your teeth.

Reasons:

It goes without saying that you should brush your teeth at least twice a day. For an instance , a failure to brush your teeth will lead to tooth decay. However, regular brushing will give you healthier teeth and saves your money too.

Further, brushing your teeth helps protect against diseases.
A bacterial infection of the gums that can lead to tooth loss. It’s true. Did you know that more than 70% of UAE adults have gum disease?Probably you would have brushed your teeth this morning and brush them tonight. Good !Continue to do so.

Floss between your teeth at least once a day to remove food particles that your toothbrush did not reach.

Undoubtedly using the mouth washer helps to have a fresh and clean breath. Did you ever wonder why people have bad breath in the morning?

Finally, just remember that poor oral hygiene and tooth decay increases your chances of heart problems later on in life. You cannot escape it all.

Your teeth are important in many ways. If you take care of them, they'll help take care of you. Strong, healthy teeth help you chew the right foods to help you grow. They help you speak clearly. And yes, they help you look your best.

Remember: The gum and mint won’t solve everything.
Brush, floss and wash .

Laith-

amra_gaffoor — 2018-11-18 18:00:05 UTC

Flashy Smile

So I hear you want a one of a kind smile 😁,haven’t you noticed that when yo smile in a picture your teeth show up 🤔.And you don’t want them too dirty so follow these steps to get that smile👹👹👹👹👹🤑🤑🤑

Brush brush don’t you rush

So you want white teeth😬, beautiful breath🤭,your mom thinking that you mouth washed 999999999999999999999999999999 times follow these breathtaking steps to get that amazing breath and teeth but you don’t want to be disgusting. 🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮👍

Teeth teeth keep them clean

Have you ever took a picture? Haven’t you noticed that your teeth show up and you don’t want them to know your teeth are dirty?S.o follow these fascinating steps .So you can’t be poor 😭Alphie

Fresh gums fresh breath

You want your breath to be as beautiful as a rose 🌹 and you definitely don’t want to get gum diseases if you don’t want that bad thing to happen to you then follow these cool 😎 steps so your breath smells good like a rose.

Teeth teeth keep em clean

I heard that you wanted your teeth to be as white as snow. Do want your mouth to smell beautiful? so I’m here to make that happen for you so follow the following steps to get that beautiful smile so you can look 👀 good in pictures and your breath will smell as beautiful as a butterfly garden🦋☺️

Avani

amra_gaffoor — 2018-11-18 18:00:19 UTC

Brush Brush Until The Germs Flush

Do you like it if people see your smile with rotten teeth?You have to brush your teeth at least twice a day.😁😁😁😃😀.take good care of your teeth.

amra_gaffoor — 2018-11-19 07:03:55 UTC

Zaid R
Brush brush don’t rush😂

No one wants to smell your stinky smelly breath🤢

amra_gaffoor — 2018-11-19 07:10:32 UTC

Brush,brush don’t you rush Victoria

Do you want a rotting discolored teeth ? If you smile 😀in a photoboth the people will see your teeth. So keeping your beautiful teeth clean you have to brush your teeth twice a day. Brushing your teeth every day you will have to brush your teeth to have a mace white pearl teeth

amra_gaffoor — 2018-11-19 07:12:21 UTC

Sumayya
Why do we always
Why do we need to brush your teeth?

amra_gaffoor — 2018-11-19 07:13:10 UTC

Teeth teeth keep them clean

Teeth is one of key features of a beautiful smile and if don’t have clean teeth people can make fun of you.
For example you are in high school and have a year book photo. It goes all around the school and people can laugh or you might get humiliated. Remember to brush and floss to keep away from tooth loss .

Mahnoor chughtai.

2018-11-19 13:08:14 UTC

Give your teeth a smile:
Tacking care of your teeth is important.We need to keep them healthy, so that they can last a lifetime. Do you like a smile with bad breath and yellow teeth?Brushing your teeth is major part of your everyday life.
Reason:
Brush your teeth twice a day. It is certain that if you do not brush properly breath will stink . Brushing your teeth prevent gum diseases . Did you know 80% of UAE adults have gum diseases.?
You can use floss between your teeth to clean small particles.A good mouth wash is great for fresh breath.
Finally, your teeth are important in many ways.if you take care of them they will take care of you.

David -

2018-11-19 13:13:54 UTC

Healthy Teeth
If our teeth are unhealthy our whole health suffers.

We may have ugly looking teeth
We may have bad breath
We may have toothaches
We can’t eat pizza anymore

Hana

2018-11-19 13:50:43 UTC

Brush to Keep Healthy

Brushing your teeth is so important because if you don’t brush them they will break.And you won’t be able to bite anything you just have to drink and some of the words you won’t be able to say them properly.

Why should we brush our teeth?
Would you like to have clean teeth?If you do, you have to brush your teeth at least
2 times a day. And don’t forget that sometimes you get a gum disease . It may lead to have a heart attack if you do not take care your teeth. So remember to have clean teeth every day.
The cleanest the teeth the better the smile
If you take care of your teeth your teeth will take care of you.When you take a picture with your friends or family everybody will say (say cheese). And when they
see the picture with your bright shiny smile..😀

By: Athan De Leon

athancedricd_gfs — 2018-11-19 14:55:18 UTC

Title: Don't waste time, Brush your Teeth!

I feel that you keep the teeth clean.
Firstly, tooth brushing remove the germs on your teeth.
Secondly, it makes your smile nice.
Thirdly, it makes you have a good breath.

In fact the dentist told you to brush your teeth at least twice a day.

For these reason it is important to brush your teeth.
Don't waste your time, brush your teeth!

Flourishing Teeth by Zaid A

great_sanad — 2018-11-19 15:24:45 UTC

Iam sure that everyone like to have healthy teeth with beautiful smile .of course you should follow some steps to get a beautiful and healthy teeth. Firstly you should brush your teeth twice a day at least. Secondly use dental floss once aday at least to remove any food particles between your teeth.Finally :To keep your mouth clean and your breath fresh use the mouth washer daily. In fact healthy teeth is an indication to healthy,strong body without diseases . Be cousious and take care of your teeth .

-LORINE

2018-11-19 15:30:29 UTC

Brush your teeth to have a clean smile!

Why should we brush our teeth?We need to brush our teeth because we need to have clean teeth without any problems.
Firstly have you ever took a picture?First thing you see in the mirror is your smile,.You can see that there are cavities and plaque. Like to find more about teeth?

Benefits of brushing teeth:
-Brush your teeth twice a day to prevent cavaties.
-Go to the dentist to remove plaque.
-If you do not brush your teeth on a daily basis this can cause you gum disease.

You have to elaborate your reasons.- Ms. Amra

2018-11-19 15:35:34 UTC

Shina
Brush brush until they shine

Have you ever taken a picture with
your family and notice their smile is better than yours.

Then this reminds you that you need to brush brush brush your teeth, brush them everyday.

Why should we brush our teeth?
- To make your teeth clean.
- To prevent cavities.
- To prevent bad breath
- To have a good beautiful smile
What happens if you don''t brush your teeth twice a day?
-You'll get gum diseases
- You'll get cavities
- You won't remove the plaque in your mouth
- You'll have yellow teeth

By:Suhana - I like your persuasive text. You have included Rhetorical questions, emotive language , elaborated points,exaggeration and repetition. Well done!. Ms Ms.Amra

2018-11-19 15:50:51 UTC

Yellow Makes You a Dirty Fellow,White Makes You Fly Like a Kite!

Do you want a perfect smile?
I am sure that you want a perfect smile.

If so,brush twice in a day-early morning and before going to bed.Furthermore,brushing twice keeps your mouth healthy and clean. In fact, it prevents gum diseases,cavities and many other oral diseases. Almost 80% of children have cavities and tooth decay. Mostly due to consumption of sugary food. Therefore visit your dentist regularly for a complete oral health care.

As you can see there is no doubt that brushing twice is as important as bathing,eating healthy food and drinking water.
So what are you waiting for?
Start from today!

Sofia- Well Done!

2018-11-19 16:42:01 UTC

Brush your teeth for a beautiful smile.
Of course , with having clean and shiny teeth, you will have a beautiful shiny smile on your face.
You need healthy and strong teeth throughout your life to enjoy the taste of you favourite and yummy foods. So, It is enough important to brush your teeth twice a day to watch out cavities and plaque.
When you take a picture everyone can see your rotten teeth or your shiny teeth🤔. You should take a good care of your teeth because if you don’t clean your teeth daily, germs will grow and can make you sick with gum diseases, bad breath, may cause bad throat and stomach infections also.
Besides using a teeth brush you can use mouthwash too.
You should protect your teeth by avoiding certain foods for example Ice creams, Cold drinks 🍹 or very Hot drinks and chocolates ,candies,🍫 and any other Sweets 🍭 . Or we need to brush our teeth after taking these foods otherwise surely ,they will ruin our healthy teeth.
On the whole, we need to clean our teeth right after having food and especially before going to bed at night.

Brush brush..Don't rush

2018-11-19 16:44:30 UTC

By Abdulrahman

I think we will get a healthy teeth if we brush our teeth two times daily. In fact, taking care of our teeth reflects how healthy we are.

Here are few simple steps to keep our teeth clean and healthy:

- Firstly, we have to brush our teeth in morning and before bedtime.
- Secondly, we have to brush our teeth for two minutes to remove the extra food that stuck between the teeth.
- Thirdly, brush your teeth gently until become shinny.

In addition, we brush our teeth after eating sweets to avoid the teeth decay.
Following the previous steps you guarantee a shinny and healthy smile.

Without a doubt, brushing teeth will keep the dentist away.

Brush brush don’t rush or your teeth won’t be that clean

2018-11-20 02:22:50 UTC

Do you want a perfect picture with a perfect smile ?
I’m pretty sure that you want that to happen so brush your teeth like your life depends on it but if you don’t brush your teeth you will have rotten teeth.
Do you agree with me?

Ali Badawy

2018-11-20 02:36:42 UTC

Brush brush don’t rush
Do you want the perfect smile?

If you want to have a perfect picture with a perfect smile I am pretty sure that you want that to happen. so if you want that to happen then brush your teeth like your life depends on it but if you don’t brush your teeth you will have rotten teeth
And stinky smell.

AVANI.BALASUBRAMANYA

2018-11-20 12:24:31 UTC

BRUSH YOUR TEETH

Do you want a dirty smile?
I am sure you don't want a dirty smile.

If I am right,brush your teeth at least twice a day once in the morning and once in the night.Brushing your teeth twice a day ,keeps your teeth clean and healthy.It also keeps you away from geting GUM DISEASE,CAVITIES and other diseases.

REASONS:

You should brush your teeth to prevent gum disease,stop bleeding gums and stay healthy.

Floss between your teeth at least once a day to remove food particles that your tooth brush did not reach.

Did you know 80% of America adults have gum disease?

As you can see there is no doubt that brushing your teeth twice is as important as eating healthy food,drinking water and bathing.

2018-11-20 13:42:46 UTC

Ariv

Yellow yellow dirty fellow ...brush brush don’t rush

Firstly, I think we should brush our teeth everyday because then we won’t get rotten teeth and we won’t have to get fillings from dentists.
Secondly when you get pictures taken everyone says,”say cheese”! Smile so you do-you open your mouth and show your teeth.When you see the picture ,you see a happy person looking back to you.
The healthier those teeth are, the happier you look.
Why healthy teeth are important?

If you don’t take care of your teeth, cavities and unhealthy gums will make your mouth sore and you feel difficult to eat your meal and you won’t feel like smiling.
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How you can keep your teeth healthy?
1. Brush at least twice a day.
2.Brush all of your teeth not just front one.
3.Spend at least 2 to 3 minutes each time you brush.
4.Be sure your toothbrush has soft bristles.

Just brushing is not keep your teeth healthy you also need to be careful about what are you eat and drink so eat always fruits and vegetables and don’t FORGET TO SMILE.

amra_gaffoor — 2018-11-20 15:05:25 UTC

Brush Do Not Rush!- by Areeba

2018-11-20 15:35:29 UTC

Have you ever took a picture? The first thing you notice is the teeth,so if you have good teeth they’ll notice the teeth and they’ll like the teeth and if you have rotten,discoulered and disgusting teeth they will say "UGH!Disgusting teeth".You also need to brush your teeth because your oral health start’s from there and goes on your whole life.

BY:ADAM EMAD NADA

2018-11-21 11:03:46 UTC

Brush Brush Do Not Rush. Introduction:
I feel that brushing your teeth makes you healthy.
Reasons:
surely if you did not brush your teeth you will have gum diseases.
details:
For example if you ate candy and did not floss your teeth you will have bad smell.And you will go to the dentist a lot.The tools of the dentist will hurt.Plus your teeth will be as shiny as a star.
Endings:
you have learned a lesson now brush those teeth and make them shin.at least twice a day.

Marc Matta

2018-11-21 12:13:09 UTC

Well done ! Ms.Amra

by Sumayya

2018-11-21 13:56:25 UTC

Brushing Your Teeth
Why do we have to brush our teeth?
Do you like rotting teeth in a picture ? If you don't, then brush your teeth left , right,up and down for 2 minutes everyday and floss and use mouthwash. Your teeth will be pearly white! 80%of adults have gum disease and 70%kids have tooth decay!A visit to the dentist is expensive but buying a tooth brush is cheap. Remember to brush twice a day.

BY:MAHIKA

2018-11-21 14:11:32 UTC

Do you want flashing clean teeth?
I am sure you do.
if so,brush your teeth at least twice a day.
For example,if you have ever taken a picture ? First thing everyone will notice is your smile .
What do you have to do? Just
brush your teeth at least twice a day. In addition,it is very important to floss your teeth.So after you brush your teeth your teeth will smell as lovely as roses and it will be shiny as a small, yellow flashing stars.
Brush Brush everyday to keep the germs away.

By Arya

2018-11-23 07:10:04 UTC

Brushing Your Teeth

Brushing your teeth is one of the most essential thing to do daily. It is important to brush your teeth not only in the morning but also at night before you sleep. Healthy teeth gives you confidence to have a beautiful smile all day.

Will a smile with some rotten teeth make you happy ?
If you avoid taking care of your teeth , Plaque will start forming on your teeth. Eventually it will lead to bacteria start functioning on your teeth and causing cavities, gum disease and finally tooth loss if it is not controlled.
85% of the children and 64 % of adults fight from tooth and gum disease due to improper care of teeth.

Hence good oral hygiene might look like a struggle but it is a simple 10 minutes job a day. Which otherwise you'd waste on watching television.
Don't waste your time !Start brushing your teeth twice a day from today.

Brush your teeth to crush all your cavities!!

By Yousuf

2018-11-24 04:52:56 UTC

Brushing Your Teeth
Brush your teeth to prevent gum diseases and you will have a nice smile. You need to brush your teeth twice a day because when you take a picture the first thing you notice is your teeth.You could also use mouth wash to prevent tooth decay and cavity.

As we age, our teeth becomes weaker, if you don't take care of them as an elderly there is a high possibility to loose all your teeth and they will never grow again.