Padlet Link - Week 10 by ISC all users https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/bh17d7d7e37437zy Made with good vibes en-us 2021-08-04 12:37:47 UTC 2024-11-21 09:34:09 UTC hello@padlet.com Plan for Writing Exam (Wiseflow) sussex_isc1 https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/bh17d7d7e37437zy/wish/1668857233 Intro: Background to the topic ////// thesis: Tech Neg. on health

MB1 (Counter Argument):  Pos. 

Nelson (2017) –  SmartWatch (Fitbit) 

-        Track pulse rate 
-        Sleeping patterns 
-        Info about physical fitness goals 

MB2 (Thesis): Neg. 

Nelson (2017) – Less face-face comm.

-        Being online can make us aggressive / isolated 
-        Issues relationship – lead to depression 
-        Social skills not developed – poor comm

Conclusion: 

]]> 2021-08-04 12:46:00 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/bh17d7d7e37437zy/wish/1668857233 Updated Bokier Main Body sussex_isc1 https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/bh17d7d7e37437zy/wish/1668904744 Some people claim that technology has a positive impact on our mental and physical health. According to Nelson (2017), advance technology helping individuals to enjoy their life with more knowledgeable understandings such as using a  smartwatch. Smartwatch is useful for daily basis. It can track and detect heartbeat or pulse rate. It is also known for maintaining the sleeping conditions or the sleeping patterns. At present, people are using the smartwatch because they can make physical fitness goals and add reminders. Therefore, Individuals can know the condition of various aspect of body and stay on track.
 
Though technology has huge advantages but it has more disadvantages. Nelson (2017) argues that the invention of modern technology reduces people’s face to face communication which can impact our mental health. Most of the adults and children’s using smart devices and playing games instead of reading books or playing football in the ground and this lack of activity effects our health. Because of these incidents, many are facing trouble with their sleep. Due to this technology some of adults are failing in relationships as a lack of physical contact which can lead to depression. In summary, it has been argued that this technology is having a detrimental impact on mental health of many lives. 
]]> 2021-08-04 13:33:57 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/bh17d7d7e37437zy/wish/1668904744 Sania sussex_isc1 https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/bh17d7d7e37437zy/wish/1669818324 Many people think that technology has positive impact on our physical and mental health. According to Nelson (2017), modern electronic items such as smart watches can have a positive impact on your physical health. Smart watches are useful for daily routines and are a great way of monitoring our physical progress. It can offer fitness services such as running, tracking heart rate and monitoring our sleeping patterns.  Therefore, these gadgets can provide us with an effective means to progress our physical health. 

If technology has many advantages but it has more negative effects on human life. Nelson (2017) argues that technology gives huge negative effects like people have less face t face communication they deal their work on mobile phones and unable to see the face impressions and spend time with others. Students and many employees work at home they feel lazy and still isolate, it can be harmful for mental and physical health because they have no opportunity to go outside and meet others. Mainly usages of electronic items kill the human skills and they lose their communication with othe

]]> 2021-08-05 08:32:54 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/bh17d7d7e37437zy/wish/1669818324 Refutation sussex_isc1 https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/bh17d7d7e37437zy/wish/1670938842 ¢  It may be true that {summarise and acknowledging the counter argument}; however, we need to consider …{present your thesis and reject the counter}. ]]> 2021-08-06 10:16:37 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/bh17d7d7e37437zy/wish/1670938842 It may be true that the technology has numerous advantages in our life. However, we should consider the negative impact of the technology in our physical and mental life https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/bh17d7d7e37437zy/wish/1670941339 abid ]]> 2021-08-06 10:23:41 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/bh17d7d7e37437zy/wish/1670941339 boktiar https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/bh17d7d7e37437zy/wish/1670943387 ome people claim that technology has a positive impact on our mental and physical health. however we should be aware of the negative impact of the technology that may have in our life]]> 2021-08-06 10:29:01 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/bh17d7d7e37437zy/wish/1670943387 Reading sussex_isc1 https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/bh17d7d7e37437zy/wish/1670948311 2021-08-06 10:42:17 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/bh17d7d7e37437zy/wish/1670948311 abid https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/bh17d7d7e37437zy/wish/1670952006  | There is growing evidence of the negative effects of air pollution on the community. A key approach to addressing this is to raiseawareness of the problem to the public (Loxham, cited in Carrington, 2019). | a) Acceptable paraphrase
| Loxham (cited in Carrington, 2019) claims that a significant approach to confronting the issue of air pollution is to inform the public of the increasing levels of air contamination identified. | b) Incorrect meaning
| In 2019, Prof.Loxham argued that ensuring that the public were better informed of the increasing problem of air pollution was key to solving it (Carrington, 2019). | c) Incorrect citation
| Loxham (cited in Carrington, 2019) suggested that people would cause less air pollution if they were aware of the risks to their own health caused by pollution.  | d) Incorrect meaning
| A key step to solving the issue is raising public awareness of the increasing evidence of the negative effects of air pollution during a human’s lifetime (Loxham, cited in Carrington, 2019). | e) Plagiarised]]> 2021-08-06 10:52:15 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/bh17d7d7e37437zy/wish/1670952006 https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/bh17d7d7e37437zy/wish/1670953455 Read the following quotation from paragraph 6.
‘Prof Matthew Loxham, a toxicologist at Southampton University, said:“There is ever-increasing evidence for the effects of air pollution across the life course. A key step in addressing this is raising public awareness of the problem.’’
 
Sentences a) to e) below are paraphrases of the above sentences.  Fourare unacceptable, one is acceptable. Label the one acceptable paraphrase and add the reason why the others are incorrect from the box below.One reason will be used more than once.  
 
 
 | Plagiarised | Incorrect meaning | Incorrect citation | Acceptable paraphrase
 

 | There is growing evidence of the negative effects of air pollution on the community. A key approach to addressing this is to raise awareness of the problem to the public (Loxham, cited in Carrington, 2019). | a) acceptable 
 | Loxham (cited in Carrington, 2019) claims that a significant approach to confronting the issue of air pollution is to inform the public of the increasing levels of air contamination identified. | b) incorrect citation
 | In 2019, Prof.Loxham argued that ensuring that the public were better informed of the increasing problem of air pollution was key to solving it (Carrington, 2019). | c)incorrect citation 
 | Loxham (cited in Carrington, 2019) suggested that people would cause less air pollution if they were aware of the risks to their own health caused by pollution.  | d)incorrect meaning 
 | A key step to solving the issue is raising public awareness of the increasing evidence of the negative effects of air pollution during a human’s lifetime (Loxham, cited in Carrington, 2019). | e)plagiarised 
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