by Lime Class https://padlet.com/class3sheriffhales/bgnzphgb8shj en-us 2015-11-04 07:44:52 UTC 2023-03-15 03:37:30 UTC hello@padlet.com Which Alan Peat sentence type should we use to start our letter home from a WWI soldier in the trenches? Why? class3sheriffhales https://padlet.com/class3sheriffhales/bgnzphgb8shj/wish/79159588 2015-11-04 07:45:24 UTC https://padlet.com/class3sheriffhales/bgnzphgb8shj/wish/79159588 https://padlet.com/class3sheriffhales/bgnzphgb8shj/wish/79185000 Lucia Amelia

Broken sentence

Because it's a powerful way to start your letter. E.g.

Damp. Tiring. Lonely


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Very descriptive

It's very powerful and useful

Deppressed, worried, scared, we are trudging through the muddy, soggy labyrinth for you and people alike.

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Eg. Wrapping this blanket around me, all I can think is about you.

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Trailing off because it adds impact

Eg The trench is a grave yard full of bodies including...

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Because it has a lot of description.

Eg. Depressed and heartbroken, worried and terrified I let go of a single tear.

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Example: Tired and weary ,uncomfortable and terrified I rested my legs in the trenches of France.

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Because I would want to compare what I was living through with something my wife would be able to picture.

For example:

The mud is as thick and cold as school dinner porridge and I am sick of the sight of it.

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