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         <description><![CDATA[<div>&nbsp;Kevin and his brother Eric was trying to climb on the dinosaur bones their mother trying to stop them but she was Sorce&nbsp; throat so she can shout out. Although they was Kevin and Eric was light but the bones was putting here for I thousand years already. Therefore the bones was falling down with Kevin and Eric. There mum feel very mad。 &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;Pius</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>When Kevin went inside the museum, he was very happy to see many dinosaur bones. But there are a lot of people blocking his way, so he rudely push other people away, then he ended up standing in front of a tyrannosaur Rex bone. He was shocked and climb up the bone and pretend that is was riding the dinosaur. A few minutes later, many people said that this children was very brave but they are worried that he will fall. Luckily, one of the staff saw it and ordered him to gO down. But when he got down, he fall down and injured himself.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-05-28 07:26:18 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Kevin’s personality</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Kevin’s personality<br>Kevin was a very curios boy, he was interested in a loads of stuff. He was a boy who wanted to try anything he could do. But you will never guess that he was a naughty child who wouldn’t listen to people warning at all. Every time he did anything wrong his teacher would be as frustrated&nbsp; as a hedgehog bouncing his spikes everywhere.<br>SK Lui</div>]]></description>
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         <title> Kevin is a handsome boy who is curios about everything. His likes green,red and blue which seems like it’s so adventurous. He was so nervous when he goes to the museum because he can finally make his dreams come true! Which is meeting old dinosaur bones</title>
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         <pubDate>2021-05-28 09:03:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <author>EtonHung</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Kevin is a smart boy, so he is handsome. He is beautiful, has long fluffy hair, big nose, small eyes... Kevin had a dream, his dream was he could visit the museum. Finally, his dream became true.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-05-28 09:12:25 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Kevin ’s appearance Kevin was a fat boy. He had two sparkling eyes which were as shimmering as stars. He had a big nose and a red mouth. He got a black short hair. </title>
         <author>201710425</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Meela (27)<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Kevin climbed up to the dinosaur bone, his teacher was scared because he was about to fall down! At that moment, he fell down. But someone catches him, it was his teacher,”Kevin!please don’t do that again!” Kevin said”I learned my lesson, I won’t do anything dangerous anymore.”</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Kevin&#39;s Appearance </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Kevin was a 12-year old boy.He had short,silky black hair. His skin was as dark as black chocolate. His face was as round as a basketball. He had big eyes which was as blue as the ocean. His red lips were the color of blood.&nbsp;<br><br>Aidan Wong (28)</div>]]></description>
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         <title>The story’s setting                                                By Haylie(1)</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; The Natural History Museum was presenting a popular exhibition “Legends of the Giant Dinosaurs” . The Natural History Museum was as big as a castle. Inside the Museum, there were many huge materials which were bigger than you thought, but the site there was very beautiful and tidy. Many people loved to explore the Museum, so it was quite nosy.<br><br>By Haylie Chan (1)</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The setting Marcus 30&nbsp;<br><br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Kevin and his classmates were walking into the dinosaur section and the&nbsp; guard locked on the door so no one could stole anything from outside .Moreover there was tour guide&nbsp; to explain about what kind of dinosaur was it . Inside ,there were a lot of&nbsp; antique and beautiful stuff ,&nbsp; ,so everybody said “Wow! This is very beautiful and noble, it is really a rich man's museum !”</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Krystal Chan (03) Kevin&#39;s Appearance</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Kevin was a cute little boy who likes to mess around and play. He had a big round face with a happy smile on it. He was tall and slim. His hair were short and dark. His two eyes were as bright and shiny as a diamond.&nbsp;His skin were as dark as an ant.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-05-29 02:03:38 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>The Story of the setting</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; The History Museum<br>  The History Museum has a lot of history stuff like famous people pictures, the the cool inventions made for the old days, one of the most exciting things to  see in The Historyy</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Kelvin’s personality is a very naughty boy. He won’t listen to anyone he loves to destroy everything, anyone who become friends with Kelvin become naughty as well</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>&nbsp; When Kevin and his classmates was walking in the huge museum, he saw many precious and expensive items like bracelets and other jewelleries. Suddenly, he went to a huge dinosaur room that is fulled with dinosaurs sculptures . Candice&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <title>The setting of the story</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In a huge and poplar&nbsp; museum, there was a lot of people in it, lot of the cute children liked to play and see the broken dinosaurs bones, cracked and brown foot prints with dried mud on it.<br>Jayden&nbsp;(29)</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-05-29 06:31:42 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>The personality of Kevin </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Kevin was a naughty boy, he won’t listen to anyone including his parents, he was brave in the same time. And he was selfish, some times his family bought a pizza for lunch, and the selfish Kevin ate all of the pizza by himself.<br>Jayden (29)</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Kevin was a fat boy, he likes to&nbsp; eat and sleep. His eyes was as blue as a blueberry, his nose was as big as a table tennis ball ,his head was as big as the moons, his mouth was as big as a black hole, his ears was as small as a button.<br>Jayden (29)</div>]]></description>
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         <title>The complication of the story</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Kevin was walking in the museum of the dinosaurs, suddenly the naughty Kevin find a big dinosaur that is made out of bones, so he want to climb onto the dinosaur. When Kevin’s mum found him it was too late, Kevin’s mum pointed on to a sign and said ”It says no climbing!” Then in a sudden the bones started to shake and all of them broken in the same time so Kevin also dropped on the floor.&nbsp;<br>Jayden (29)</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Kevin is a naughty and active boy who likes to climb. He always wear a yellow coat with him. He had dark skin, long arms and short legs, although his legs were short, but he was very good at climbing, he also had a pair of black eyes that were on top of his little nose.</title>
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         <title>Complication </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><br></div><div><strong><mark>One day when Kevin was in the History Museum, he saw a great big dinosaur’s bones. He thought that it was so cool and wanted to climb on that dinosaur. Then he started climbing on it carefully and he reached the back of the dinosaur. When he got up there, he said, “Wow! I’m on the dinosaur now! It’s so cool!” When Kevin shouted out, everyone’s eyes got up to him. And his mom was so frightened and scared, because she is scared that his son, Kevin will fall of the dinosaur and get hurt. So Kevin’s mom shouted, “ Kevin! Get down of that dinosaur! Or else you will get hurt! Quick!” But even though mom shouted to Kevin and said go down,&nbsp; he was still sitting on the dinosaur and giggling.</mark></strong></div><div><strong><mark><br><br>Jinius Chan MIT4 (2)&nbsp;</mark></strong></div>]]></description>
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         <title>Natalie Kiang (15) Kevin’s appearance </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Kevin was a fat boy with a big tummy as round as a basketball. He wore a bright green shirt and two fat little hands stuck out of the sleeves. He also had short, dark hair along with a pair of sparkling brown eyes. Under his little bean sized nose, there was a smile that never faded away.</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The museum was massive. The blue brick wall added mysterious atmosphere to the gigantic bone of a dinosaur. The bones were very dusty due to the long years of staying at the museum. The dinosaur’s&nbsp; pointy and sharp tooth made people shudder by the terrifying sight of it.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Kevin was extremely naughty and did everything he wanted to. He didn’t care about other people’s feelings and just let naughtiness take over him. The hurtful words coming out of his mouth were like pointy spikes, hurting and damaging other people’s hearts. He didn’t listen to anyone, not even teachers and his own parents. It was not a wonder he got into detention every single day.</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Many bone dinosaurs stood majestically under the bright lights. Kevin scrunched his nose all the way and murmured under his breath,” Ugh......all of these stupid dinosaur bones doesn’t look mighty enough....” Just then, the T-Rex bone caught his eye, a sly grin appeared on his face. Without warning, Kevin charged towards the T-Rex bone, pushing people out of his way and climbed through the barriers and sat himself on the T-Rex. He laughed as he wobbled his feet and looked down at the horrified people. Suddenly, the tail of the T-Rex bone let out a loud crack and fell down on the floor of the museum as the crowd of people screamed frantically. Staffs held up their walky talkys and started talking to it. Some news reporter carried a mic and started reporting .....</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Kevin is a fancy boy, his handsome face was very alluring. He had a blond brown hair. His face was as round as a apple pie, he also had a sparkling yellow huge eyes, he had a straight tiny nose adding a red cheek, moreover he had a thin lipped mouth set off a neat white teeth</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The Famous Dino Mueseum full of amazing and realistic Dino’s.<br>Kelvin jumped on a tall Dino which was made of skeletons everyone was worried for him.He was scared.<br><br>(Joy MIT4 22)</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><br>Kevin’s personality is funny.&nbsp; He face was as round as a ball, and his eyes were just like two small dots.&nbsp; His has a quite big nose.&nbsp; When he smiles, his mouth was just like a banana.&nbsp; He is quite short and he is very thin.</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><br>Kevin’s personality is funny.&nbsp; He face was as round as a ball, and his eyes were just like two small dots.&nbsp; His has a quite big nose.&nbsp; When he smiles, his mouth was just like a banana.&nbsp; He is quite short and he is very thin.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Matthew Chu(10)                                                                     When Kevin saw the T-Rex Skeleton,he was very suprised as he never saw one before.He climbed on one and pretend to be a dinosaur rider,laughing and jumping around.He looked down on the horrified crowd under him.All of a sudden,the tail let out a loud crack  and the majestic skeleton tumbled down onto the ground.there were dust everywhere and people were screaming.Kevin was buried under the pile of bones.He was hurt badly and to make matter worse,no one know that he is still buried.        </title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>&nbsp; The museum was huge, gigantic and magnificent like the hall in Hogwarts! There a lot of models and bones of dinosaurs displaying. Although the place was huge, it took many space because of the visitors and displays, therefore it also smells like rotten eggs and dirty socks!<br>Tim</div>]]></description>
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