https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6 en-us 2018-09-27 11:52:22 UTC 2025-04-22 15:29:49 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286506840 2018-09-27 13:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286506840 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286507553 The story was very very well written,and i like 
how she made you think you where right next to her crying with her.  ]]> 2018-09-27 13:43:03 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286507553 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286507773 It felt like it was to me it was so emotional and it was such a good story.]]> 2018-09-27 13:43:21 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286507773 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286507774 How they show back then and now and how they made you feel like you were there.]]> 2018-09-27 13:43:21 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286507774 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286507881 One thing that the author did good was putting the good details in it like the part where they said, my whole body was shaking as i put the dirt over her casket ]]> 2018-09-27 13:43:29 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286507881 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286507920 The story was ritten well but it almost mand me cry. The spelling is good]]> 2018-09-27 13:43:33 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286507920 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286507959 It was very sad with all the details in it mad more sad.]]> 2018-09-27 13:43:36 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286507959 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286508088 For a sxith grader it was very well written and very sad but also a amazing story i loved it but sad 👍🏻]]> 2018-09-27 13:43:46 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286508088 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286508094 It was good it made me remind me of my grandpa]]> 2018-09-27 13:43:47 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286508094 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286508187 The one thing the author did good was, they had good punctuation ]]> 2018-09-27 13:43:54 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286508187 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286508226 The story was a good writen story and it was emotional ]]> 2018-09-27 13:43:58 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286508226 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286508665 Put lots of details

]]> 2018-09-27 13:44:29 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286508665 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286508858 The details in the story]]> 2018-09-27 13:44:47 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286508858 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286508901 Spelling
Detail 
Feeling 
The mode]]> 2018-09-27 13:44:50 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286508901 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286509031 😭😭😭😭]]> 2018-09-27 13:44:57 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286509031 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286509417 The story was ritten well but it was vary sad]]> 2018-09-27 13:45:29 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286509417 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286509722 It was@]]> 2018-09-27 13:45:59 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286509722 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286509750 It was a good story.

]]> 2018-09-27 13:46:01 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286509750 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286509770 It was just a good store

]]> 2018-09-27 13:46:02 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286509770 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286510272 2018-09-27 13:46:46 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286510272 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286510806 It was a good story amd good punctuation

]]> 2018-09-27 13:47:36 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286510806 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286510846 It was made with alot of detail

]]> 2018-09-27 13:47:40 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286510846 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286511648 I like it❤️]]> 2018-09-27 13:48:50 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286511648 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286513740 2018-09-27 13:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286513740 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286548641 The 
put good details]]> 2018-09-27 14:40:16 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286548641 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286548697 Things the author did well. Thing the author did well was explaining what was going on.]]> 2018-09-27 14:40:20 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286548697 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286548934 I thinnk the athour made the transitions in the story really good i also think the aouther did an outstaning gob with the details.]]> 2018-09-27 14:40:39 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286548934 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549016 Put lots of details]]> 2018-09-27 14:40:47 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549016 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549107 Made you think how lucky you actully are and good details]]> 2018-09-27 14:40:57 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549107 ronnywilson https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549108 Nothing

]]> 2018-09-27 14:40:57 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549108 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549287 It was good but sad.]]> 2018-09-27 14:41:14 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549287 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549391 That the author told us everones names]]> 2018-09-27 14:41:25 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549391 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549435 He made the story interesting ]]> 2018-09-27 14:41:30 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549435 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549469 Brianna
I think the author did very well on writting about how she felt and it ws kind of discripted.]]> 2018-09-27 14:41:33 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549469 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549500 This story was emotional and really good with all the detail, and desciption. ]]> 2018-09-27 14:41:37 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549500 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549580 The story was sad but the author did a good job staying on track with the story i think the author could have put more detail because it makes everthing more interresting]]> 2018-09-27 14:41:45 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549580 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549609 The over all story was very well writen.I liked how the person was explaning it, how it made you feel like you were right there]]> 2018-09-27 14:41:48 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549609 ronnywilson https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549762 Yeet ]]> 2018-09-27 14:42:03 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549762 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549765 Making people cry 😭😭]]> 2018-09-27 14:42:03 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549765 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549941 It was kinda sad when he was writing]]> 2018-09-27 14:42:22 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549941 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549947 Mood 
  Detail
Feeling

]]> 2018-09-27 14:42:22 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286549947 ronnywilson https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286550062 it was trash ]]> 2018-09-27 14:42:34 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286550062 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286550100 The author did ok stuff]]> 2018-09-27 14:42:38 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286550100 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286550750 Making people cry😭😭]]> 2018-09-27 14:43:37 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286550750 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286550774 The author gave really good  description.]]> 2018-09-27 14:43:39 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286550774 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286550992 Brianna
I  think it was written well.

]]> 2018-09-27 14:43:57 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286550992 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286551089 2018-09-27 14:44:05 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286551089 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286551518 The story was well constructed]]> 2018-09-27 14:44:41 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286551518 ronnywilson https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286552502 Gavin hey]]> 2018-09-27 14:46:07 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286552502 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286552647 He did very good

]]> 2018-09-27 14:46:20 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/286552647 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/288221038 A lot of detail]]> 2018-10-02 16:03:00 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/288221038 https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/288390979 She explained the story really good of what had happend.]]> 2018-10-02 21:29:10 UTC https://padlet.com/harpsterj/bfug7iv3sbk6/wish/288390979