https://padlet.com/24eruiz/bfc5fr0uyed What's good Dude or Dudette. Keep my comments clean like Gods Minecraft server en-us 2018-12-05 17:13:30 UTC 2018-12-07 17:09:51 UTC hello@padlet.com 24dresnicoff https://padlet.com/24eruiz/bfc5fr0uyed/wish/312317806 I liked the detail that you added to your piece. I also liked that you used some show not tell. Something that you could work on is to make sure the grammar is correct becuase you have some grammatical mistakes. Overall, you did a good job.

-Diane R.]]> 2018-12-07 17:02:09 UTC https://padlet.com/24eruiz/bfc5fr0uyed/wish/312317806