https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig • Use your name to identify yourself. • Be polite, friendly, and encouraging. • Feel free to ask a question to the author. • If you have a suggestion, don’t be rude about it; give constructive (helpful) feedback. • Aim for correct spelling, punctuation, and grammar. en-us 2018-02-17 15:15:30 UTC 2018-05-01 18:46:40 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/233037076 That was a really AWESOME story, Hannah! Why did you're papa Carlo name him Defender?]]> 2018-02-19 19:38:06 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/233037076 https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/233039508 That was AWESOME because you really explainsyour feelings ]]> 2018-02-19 19:46:41 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/233039508 https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/235596093 great story!the dog was really big]]> 2018-02-26 19:48:20 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/235596093 https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/236106338 I like all of the details and how much effort you put into this story.I like the dog part but mostly the effort. ]]> 2018-02-27 19:26:40 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/236106338 https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/236115229 i like the part where you said A PUPPY.amazing story.]]> 2018-02-27 19:39:49 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/236115229 https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/236635093 2018-02-28 19:45:41 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/236635093 https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/237147738 Were you scared when you saw the dog oh just wondering how old were you when you got your dog oh that is a really good name i love it you told a lot of things about your dog really good story
 ]]> 2018-03-01 19:42:04 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/237147738 https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/255791974 The title was a very good but you wrote three paragraphs about safety. If you would have wrote about three different things your story would have been awesome. I try to stop myself from tipping back in my chair. I like that all three paragraphs were long and made sence

]]> 2018-04-26 18:38:49 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/255791974 https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/256128346 I really like how in paragraph 3 you explained what would happen if you did tip back in your chair(and in the other paragraphs) but I think that instead of saying that "you would feel bad," you should have said "you would feel guilty"  other than that I am convinced and you won't see me tipping in my chair.]]> 2018-04-27 18:24:18 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/256128346 https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/256128649 I agree with you when you said...it can lead to bad  injuries and when you tip back you do not see what you are doing and you injured some one badly what would you do if you did that Hannah.

]]> 2018-04-27 18:25:02 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/256128649 https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/256135367 I agree with you because I do not want my friends to get hurt.]]> 2018-04-27 18:40:17 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/256135367 https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/256994772 Hannah, I don't know how you do it. THAT WAS AMAZING!!!! I agree with you 99%. Okay, okay, 100%!! How come you always have the best essays?! You always have true reasons. One reason I agree with you is that you CAN get hurt tipping back in your chair.  
                Your friend,
Kloey]]> 2018-05-01 18:38:52 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/bedw3nt2fwig/wish/256994772