Remake of Catering cooking up a storm by Beverley Mutala https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB Made with whimsy en-us 2018-11-19 10:34:11 UTC 2025-03-18 03:04:59 UTC hello@padlet.com beverley_mutala https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846210 2018-11-19 10:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846210 Tip 4 beverley_mutala https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846211 Focus on your feelings 

Describe how you feel? 

Hyperbole]]> 2018-11-19 10:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846211 Tip 3 beverley_mutala https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846213 Focus on the exam paper and pen
 
touch 

What does this paper mean?..

Personification
Alliteration]]> 2018-11-19 10:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846213 Tip 2 beverley_mutala https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846215 Focus on a character

Describe them:
  • What do they look like?
  • What do they sound like?

  1. Metaphor

]]> 2018-11-19 10:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846215 beverley_mutala https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846216 Exam question]]> 2018-11-19 10:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846216 Simlie beverley_mutala https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846219 2018-11-19 10:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846219 Metaphors beverley_mutala https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846220 2018-11-19 10:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846220 Adverbs beverley_mutala https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846221 2018-11-19 10:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846221 Senses beverley_mutala https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846222 2018-11-19 10:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846222 Assessment beverley_mutala https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846223 2018-11-19 10:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846223 Tips beverley_mutala https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846224 .
Focus on what you can see around you. 
Start the paragraph with an interesting statement. 

Don't say it was a cold day/ the hall big.

  • Focus on the surrounding.
  • Start at least two sentences with an adverb
  • Present tense.
  1. Repetition
  2. Smilie


]]> 2018-11-19 10:34:11 UTC https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/305846224 character beverley_mutala https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/310337990 Glancing over to my left a young girl sat over in the corner staring into space. She could feel her heart pounding faster and intensively as she keeps picturing negative thoughts in her head. her palms were hot and sweaty...But as time passes by it got worse she starts to feel sweaty around her cheeks feeling very flushed out during that  minute.
Looking at the clocking didn't help so much what so ever, it just felt like it got slower and  slower. Her mouth starts to feel extremely dry and had lost its moisture. That's when she starts to feel a little nauseated, with a light headed vision. 
Redraft
This shows she's not doing not doing so great in the next feeling so unwell, am guessing the  the girls nerves to the best out of her.

Beverley]]> 2018-12-03 10:35:03 UTC https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/310337990 Paragragh 3 beverley_mutala https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/315096062 The crimson red paper had just beeen set on fire after i chuckd it away out onto the woods, as it was very crispy and crinkled staring right back at me, gradually dying into pieces. 
As i grabbed the inky stiff pen it tried to escape from my hands leaving a strong charcoal smell.

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]]> 2018-12-17 10:17:50 UTC https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/315096062 fear/anger beverley_mutala https://padlet.com/beverley_mutala/DescripB/wish/315100672 I could feel my stomach churning and tightening with a shooting sharp pain. Helplesssly my hands are shaking uncrotrallably coming to the point when I could no longer feel them no more, thats how numb and abnormally cold they were.


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