Climax by Angela Merici https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb en-us 2025-07-02 14:40:05 UTC 2025-07-11 02:59:58 UTC hello@padlet.com Group 7 https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3509176078 The neighbours found it disturbing and complain about the incident.after jake realizing that he has been disturbing the neighbours he changed and be more consederate to other living around him.And revolded the problem.moving forward,he will be more consederate to people.

]]> 2025-07-03 03:48:27 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3509176078 Group 8 https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3509179278 The mother complain and confiscate his drum Jake that is too noisy and the neighbour's baby might wake up and cry.Jake should stop playing drum during dinner so that the his neighbour's won't get affected by the sound he should play during afternoon

]]> 2025-07-03 03:50:56 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3509179278 Group 4 https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3509184674 After maya is going to sleep,the next day mayas parents found out and told maya to clean it and wanted maya to learn her lesson so that she will not do it again.

]]> 2025-07-03 03:56:24 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3509184674 Group 6 https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3509185170 Maya will ask jake to play the drums softly. He didn't listen and roll his eyes. started to play the drums loudly but the neighbour did not care and he slept peacefully. so Maya shouted at him.

]]> 2025-07-03 03:56:51 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3509185170 Grp 1 https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3509186020 Maya friends stop her and told her to put the plate in the tray return . Maya igonre her friends and just go to the class room .

Her friends tell the teaher that is did not return the plate and when is igonre us and just go.The teacher called the parents of maya and got scolded.


]]> 2025-07-03 03:57:34 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3509186020 Grp2 https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3509186161 The neighbor called Jake parents because Jake was making alot of noise and the neighbor told him to stop but he did not listen,because he played the drum too loud.Jake parents grounded him for playing the drum.

]]> 2025-07-03 03:57:44 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3509186161 Group 5 https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3509188280 Insects and birds come to the seat where Maya and her friends left their plates and the seat became more dirty.No one could sit at that seat and the worker had to work hard to clean that seat.

]]> 2025-07-03 04:00:10 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3509188280 Syamil https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516626750 I use Facial expression like his mother give jake his drum back jake was happy

]]> 2025-07-11 02:49:03 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516626750 Nazifah https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516627211 I used the fast strategy by using face experssion,it was very helpful.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:49:18 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516627211 Qaaid https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516628328 I use action like the old lady grab my hand

]]> 2025-07-11 02:49:55 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516628328 Navisha https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516628701 i think i can use fast stratergy on my story and climax

]]> 2025-07-11 02:50:07 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516628701 Ryan https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516628803 Look up at the sentence.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:50:10 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516628803 Aafiyah https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516629146 By practising and understanding the story.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:50:21 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516629146 alqais https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516631098 I can use fast strategy by showing the facial expression describing the action writing a direct speech and describing the characters thoughts

]]> 2025-07-11 02:51:20 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516631098 Navisha https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516631449 i think i can write my climax better and use more better words






]]> 2025-07-11 02:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516631449 Hari https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516631689 I use Facial like jake did not care about his mother and play the drum very loud dum dum dum

]]> 2025-07-11 02:51:38 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516631689 Nazifah https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516632367 I think that my draft two was absouloutly great!i think that my introduction was the best and that i can improve more.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:52:02 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516632367 Syamil https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516632464 I think i wrote my climax and ending better

]]> 2025-07-11 02:52:06 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516632464 Aaqil https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516632724 By practising using the F.A.S.T strategy and finding my mistakes.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:52:14 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516632724 Nazifah https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516633840 I think that my friends draft two can improve alot.and i liked the falling part.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:52:51 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516633840 Navisha https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516634537 I think aariel wrote a intersting and long compo and she used alot of words from fast

]]> 2025-07-11 02:53:17 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516634537 Ryan https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516634553 I felt good because i write it very slow and it took around 3 hour.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:53:18 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516634553 Qaaid https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516634822 I think i wrote the climax better and write more words

]]> 2025-07-11 02:53:28 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516634822 Syamil https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516635718 I think Hari and Qaaid did a very good job in their climax

]]> 2025-07-11 02:53:57 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516635718 Kayden https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516635762 I csn use fast strategy on introduction


]]> 2025-07-11 02:53:59 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516635762 Ryan https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516635920 It is nice .

]]> 2025-07-11 02:54:03 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516635920 Kayden https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516636639 I can improve on my grammer

]]> 2025-07-11 02:54:27 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516636639 Aisha https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516636757 The strategy i use was facial experssion.It was helpful to me.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:54:30 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516636757 Aedly and Yakshitha https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516637017 1.By using snapshot.

2.Understand the pictures.

3.By using the facial expression.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:54:40 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516637017 Aafiyah https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516637050 I think that i can use new words.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:54:41 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516637050 Kayden https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516637315 Not bad she has to fix on her grammer and spelling

]]> 2025-07-11 02:54:51 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516637315 Qaaid https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516637661 I think hari and syamil wrote better in their climax

]]> 2025-07-11 02:55:04 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516637661 Aariel https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516639196 I think l can use that teacher teach us at the compo lesson,and use the fast strategy.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516639196 Eldriyana https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516639476 I use the fast strategy to help me with action

]]> 2025-07-11 02:56:02 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516639476 Umar https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516640132 I can use fast energy for introduction

]]> 2025-07-11 02:56:24 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516640132 Hari https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516640231 I did a very good job on my ending

]]> 2025-07-11 02:56:26 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516640231 Aafiyah https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516640330 I think that Aaqil can use a better climax.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:56:29 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516640330 Firas https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516640528 She was a good thingking and writing

]]> 2025-07-11 02:56:36 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516640528 Aariel https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516640815 I think l can use more intresting word and make the story more intresting .

]]> 2025-07-11 02:56:46 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516640815 Aisha https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516640965 I think that my climax was better

]]> 2025-07-11 02:56:51 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516640965 Aedly and Yakshitha https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516641051 (Draft 1)

I think that i can write better climax and improving my grammer.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:56:55 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516641051 Hari https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516641707 I think syamil and qaaid did a very good job for their climax and ending

]]> 2025-07-11 02:57:10 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516641707 Eldriyana https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516641925 I felt good because i use better words.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:57:18 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516641925 Aaqil https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516641999 I did better than my draft 1 and i write more words, more ideas and climax.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:57:20 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516641999 Eldriyana https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516643300 Good .because he improve and use good words.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:57:58 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516643300 Aariel https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516643400 I think my friend draft 2 can make it more intresting to the story that my friend write.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:58:00 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516643400 Aaqil https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516644539 I think the introduction of Aafiyah was good because she write better ideas.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:58:24 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516644539 Aisha https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516644612 It was ok and i think that it was better than draft 1.The climax was better.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:58:26 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516644612 Umar https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516644709 I can think about draft two when i can do the climax better

]]> 2025-07-11 02:58:29 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516644709 Aedly and Yakshitha https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516645620 Not bad.Aedly's compo is a fun read.But he can improve his climax and grammar.

]]> 2025-07-11 02:58:57 UTC https://padlet.com/angela_merici_john/bcw8z4agjgdfgzgb/wish/3516645620