Naomi P's Writing Project: My Unjust Society by Naomi Papaqui https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC 2025-03-30 22:06:37 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png What are Human Rights? 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020100 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020100 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020102 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020102 30 Basic Human Rights 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020103 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020103 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020104 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020104 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020105 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020105 Rough Draft 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020106 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020106 Final Draft 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020107 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020107 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020108 A girl named Lucky is telling the story. She is a character in the story  and she is also telling the story.]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020108 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020109 The story takes place in a slavish/ military boot camp. It takes place in the 1900's. This is an unjust society because if you are an orphan, you are taken to the military boot camp when you are just 7-10 years old.]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020109 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020110 Character#1: Sammy
* 8 year old boy
* orphan
* parents went on a cures and never came back
* he is taken to boot camp 
* works on weapons
Character#2 Bella
* 9 year old girl
* orphan
* parents went to the store and never came back
* taken to boot camp
* gets every you in shape
Character#3 Jon
* 7 year old boy 
* orphan 
* went on a date and never came back to the house at 11:00 pm
Character#4 Lucky 
* 10 year old girl
* orphan
* she was at the store with her parents and was left at the store
]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020110 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020111 The problem in this story is that Bella, Lucky, Jon, and Sammy are so young and have to find a way to survive this boot camp.]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020111 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020112 Ten years later when Lucky is 20, Jon is 17, Bella is 19, and Sammy is 18 they finally had enough of it. After the World War One had ended (and their team won), the 4 of them had made an escape plan that night. The next night after training they made their move, they were so happy because they finally escaped that horrible place for good.]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020112 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020113 How my characters change is because after they escape they go to college, and then after college they become what they wanted to be before they were taken away.]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020113 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020114 The most exciting part in my story is when Jon, Sammy, Lucky, and Bella escape from the boot camp and get to live a normal life]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020114 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020115 The message that I want readers to find out is that no matter how old you are, you can always find a way to do what you love.]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020115 Due Dates 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020116 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020116 Prompt 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020117 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020117 Theo's Song 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020118 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020118 Rubric 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020119 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020119 Point of View 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020120 The Point of View in the story "Theo's Song" is that Theo wants to become a songwriter and a musician. "His desire to become a songwriter and how his greater wish was to share his music with the Community." Student Model paragraph 3.  But after his interview with the lady that chooses his job for him, he becomes a blacksmith instead.]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020120 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020121 What makes this story an unjust society is because you are given a job on what you do not want to do. Usually after an interview with the decider lady you are given a job no mater how old you are. The basic human rights that are being denied are that you are not allowed to pick your own jobs. ]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020121 Characters 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020122 1. Nanny 
2.  Theo
3. Authorities
4. Decider (the person that decided what job you get)]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020122 Conflict 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020123 The decider assigned Theo to be a black smith when he wanted to be a songwriter. Theo believes that the decider lady is choosing every ones job, so she can have control over everyone.]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020123 Plot: Sequential 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020124 Event #1: Theo is living with his Nanny because his parents died.
Event #2: The  Authorities come to the Nanny's house and takes Theo away for an interview and the Nanny does nothing to stop them.
Event #3: Theo is in the interview room and he is with this woman that has to decide what job Theo is going to have for the rest of his life.
Event #4: After the interview he is given the job of a blacksmith.
Event # 5 (Climax): Theo wants to become a songwriter but instead he is given the job of a blacksmith.
Event #6: The next day Theo went to the blacksmith work shop to begin his new job.
Event #7: It is so loud in the work shop that no one can hear any one You can not even hear some one talking really loud.
Event #8(Resolution): After a little while everyone that was a blacksmith, did not want to be a blacksmith any more. So the blacksmiths put up a fight with any one who forced them to be a blacksmith]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020124 Theme 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020125 The theme in this story is that no one is really a free citizen.]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020125 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020126 What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write. 

What makes an unjust society is that no one is fair to each other. There are a lot of robberies and no one is really doing any thing about it. There are really no rights to any thing (example you do not get to pick your own jobs.) No one can accomplish their dreams, and can not accomplish their goals in life.]]> 2017-12-14 01:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216020126 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216380182 (All of the characters are taken to the boot camp.)
Character#1: Sammy (he is an orphan that is 8 years old.)
Character#2 Bella (She is an orphan that is 9 years old.)
Character#3 Jon(He is an orphan that is 7 years old)
Character#4 Lucky (She is an orphan that is 10 years old.)]]> 2017-12-15 04:47:43 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/216380182 Plot Diagram Example 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/217039784 Use my plot diagram as an example of what I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 17:47:09 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/217039784 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201000437 https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/217040241 Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 17:48:09 UTC https://padlet.com/201000437/bcq56tvjj6iq/wish/217040241