https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o en-us 2019-04-17 02:40:18 UTC 2025-12-01 20:11:11 UTC hello@padlet.com natasharafiq1 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352181882 Your response]]> 2019-04-17 02:43:35 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352181882 natasharafiq1 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352181962 Your response]]> 2019-04-17 02:44:03 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352181962 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352470910 All 3 introductions have clear background informations on the context of the questions, giving the reader an overview.
The argument/stand of the author are also clearly stated in the last few sentences.
Both sides of arguments given (balance): all 3 introductions also demonstrated how technology has improved/ impacted (negatively/positvely) people's lives/skills.]]> 2019-04-18 02:43:11 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352470910 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352470995 All of the three examples have shown how technology has helped enhance our quality of life. Despite showing it in three different scenarios of how tech has helped improve our lives, the gist of the three intros shows the improvements made to the human life due to the presence of tech. 
Also, all three intros have presented their stands and arguments for the various questions.  ]]> 2019-04-18 02:43:55 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352470995 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471186 haziqah 

there is a stand in every sample]]> 2019-04-18 02:45:33 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471186 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471211 every intro sample has shown the impact of technology]]> 2019-04-18 02:45:43 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471211 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471318 While all 3 introductions have an overview, balanced argument and stand, Sample B has quoted a famous computer scientist's view, further supporting that technology has brought upon benefits to the health of people ]]> 2019-04-18 02:46:52 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471318 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471339
All 3 of the Introductions provide examples of the points that can be used

Additionally, all 3 provides the author's stand at the end of each paragraph]]> 2019-04-18 02:47:02 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471339 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471342 there is an opposing view against technology in every ]]> 2019-04-18 02:47:03 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471342 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471373 Sample A and C have not included an example to back their viewpoints, while Sample B has done so. 

]]> 2019-04-18 02:47:14 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471373 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471384 A brings opposite point
B set condition and context
C brings opposite stand but still agree to the question ]]> 2019-04-18 02:47:19 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471384 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471402 All 3 arguments are valid and relevant to their questions. All also did mentioned both these and anti-thesis, making it balanced.

]]> 2019-04-18 02:47:29 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471402 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471458 Sample B has a quote that grabs the attention of the reader 

]]> 2019-04-18 02:47:52 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471458 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471478 hillary 

all 3 samples provide background information on technology ]]> 2019-04-18 02:48:00 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471478 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471577 sample b has a different hook approach]]> 2019-04-18 02:48:40 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471577 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471581 All three of the essays provided a background information with reference to context before making their stand


]]> 2019-04-18 02:48:42 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471581 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471671 Every intro is short enough and adequately addresses the stand, points, and background info]]> 2019-04-18 02:49:19 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471671 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471674 All 3 introductions start off by introducing technology in a good light, giving an overview with many benefits to technology. Furthermore, all the paragraphs show balance in terms of the alternate view points. ]]> 2019-04-18 02:49:24 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471674 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471699 simi: stand,rebut and e.g
diff:sample A starts with a definition, sample B starts with a quote and sample C starts with background info. 
sample B and C use extreme words like only and completely.
sample A and B provides various e.g of modern tech and heath tech but sample C gives a very specific e.g which narrow down the category of tech.]]> 2019-04-18 02:49:34 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471699 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471721 The way these 3 start off in their Introduction differs (Different Hook styles)


]]> 2019-04-18 02:49:46 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471721 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471735 Sample B has an interesting way to start the intro by quoting from a known computer scientist. ]]> 2019-04-18 02:49:57 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471735 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471755 Different kinds of hooks. Different ways to attract the marker's attention ]]> 2019-04-18 02:50:05 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471755 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471787 Sample B started with a quote from the professionist first while sample A and C started with the background information.
Not all essay agree with the question]]> 2019-04-18 02:50:26 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471787 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471795 All 3 paragraphs make use of an opener to their intro (statement/quote)

All 3 para state the impact/current situation of technology in today's context.

All 3 have a balanced stand mentioned in them.]]> 2019-04-18 02:50:31 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471795 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471796 Sample C has a very clear stand ]]> 2019-04-18 02:50:31 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471796 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471802 Jeremiah

All three introductions begin with the anti-thesis of the writer's stand and then transition smoothly into his/her thesis which supports his/her stand. For example if the writer's stand is to disagree to the statement of the question, he/she would begin by exploring the possibility of the validity of the statement in the question and then proceed to challenge it. This was the case for the first two introductions. 

For the last introduction the writer's stand was to agree with the statement in the question. Although he is not disagreeing like in the previous two introductions the argument of his structure is exactly the same. He explores the anti-thesis of his stand and then proceeds to challenge it with his thesis. Specifically here, he starts by exploring the invalidity of the question's statement which he agrees with and then proceeds to validate it using breaks such as '' while some. May argue'' and' 'I believe overall that.... Has indeed' ']]> 2019-04-18 02:50:38 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/bcjqi7bpz28o/wish/352471802