https://padlet.com/26bdoyle/baz2d83jf5zx Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 19:28:49 UTC 2019-12-12 19:19:59 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-uploads.storage.googleapis.com/438993807/3e5e6abb89c861b9e3d485eb101c5903/4012e6a0c54c8bf4c61ae2ec2d67a4b7.png https://padlet.com/26bdoyle/baz2d83jf5zx/wish/421699595 I like that in the end the change was very big, it showed how now Eli was confident and he was proud of himself for doing the best he could on his artwork. I also like that he didn’t care anymore about what Hunter said, he just tried to make his artwork the best he could. In the end when he acknowledeged Mr. Doyle I thought that was good of you to put in the story because Mr. Doyle was a big help to Eli. I think that you should slow down the story a bit. I think the story and the events are happening a bit to quickly. When he is looking at his artwork then he just goes to winning and going on the stage. I think you should give a bit more detail and slow down.

]]> 2019-12-09 16:40:11 UTC https://padlet.com/26bdoyle/baz2d83jf5zx/wish/421699595 26bmitchell https://padlet.com/26bdoyle/baz2d83jf5zx/wish/421817415 A strength to your story is the hook. I like how you described how he looked at the beginning, with showing he is nervous. Another strength on your story is  how he thought he was bad but actually won an art contest, the plot was interesting. But one of my wishes are that you should try to look more into your story with the word spacing. Sometimes,  there are double spaces in between words in a sentence.]]> 2019-12-09 19:28:38 UTC https://padlet.com/26bdoyle/baz2d83jf5zx/wish/421817415