Historical Fiction Writing Celebration by Esther Kim https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh Please write an encouraging and specific comment for the brave souls for sharing their work! en-us 2021-05-28 15:03:53 UTC 2021-05-28 16:34:19 UTC hello@padlet.com Eric's positive comment ericl0301 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568771177 I love how you added a lot of action and also i love how you showed us what they thought or says, instead of telling us it.]]> 2021-05-28 15:12:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568771177 I like how u made that Cheng and Chen help other people escape while they were escaping koenn0309 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568771231 2021-05-28 15:12:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568771231 Osacr https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568771477 I like how you made SHOW the readers what's happening you didn't TELL them.]]> 2021-05-28 15:12:23 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568771477 Eddie https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568771507  I like that you included lots of dialogue.]]> 2021-05-28 15:12:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568771507 Nicholas https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568772225 I like how you made details and dialogue ]]> 2021-05-28 15:12:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568772225 I like how you Showed the setting and how the character was helpful and caring to save the other people angusl3886 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568772264

]]> 2021-05-28 15:12:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568772264 I like how you made the story realistic solangee5251 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568772266 2021-05-28 15:12:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568772266 I like how you mentioned that Chang and Chen’s feet’s were hurting when they were being dragged! catherinez0911 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568772508 Catherine]]> 2021-05-28 15:12:44 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568772508 good job https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568772522 2021-05-28 15:12:44 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568772522 alessiah https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568772883 I liked how you included what the characters were feeling.]]> 2021-05-28 15:12:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568772883 Edwin https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568774397 I like the story because there a lot of drama in in it.]]> 2021-05-28 15:13:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568774397 i liked how you told the emotions of the characters trianah7515 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568776587 2021-05-28 15:14:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568776587 i like how are so much detail arianap0457 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568778927 2021-05-28 15:14:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568778927 Eric I like how you used dialog and the movement of the character and it was really interesting of the character falling to the water also I like how you read with suspence angusl3886 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568806889 2021-05-28 15:23:22 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568806889 OSacr https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568807287 Eric the king of writing I like how you included a lot of action. And I like your picture. I also like how you made your character traits. Overall this book was sooo much better than mine. :)]]> 2021-05-28 15:23:29 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568807287 i like how you made so many action and how bravely you read you story your cover was also very nice trianah7515 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568807292 2021-05-28 15:23:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568807292 I loved everything but my favorite part was that used dialoge to show what the characters were doing and feeling https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568807496 Jason M]]> 2021-05-28 15:23:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568807496 Nicholas https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568807541 Wow! I like how you add pictures and add a lot of action!]]> 2021-05-28 15:23:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568807541 I like how you made a picture of a man in the water when he needed help. solangee5251 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568807658 2021-05-28 15:23:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568807658 alessiah https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568807786 I liked the pictures that you included on the bottom of each page!]]> 2021-05-28 15:23:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568807786 I LOVE THE DIALOG AMAZING ALSO I LIKE THE SUSPENSE WHILE THE SHIP WAS SINKING koenn0309 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568808010 2021-05-28 15:23:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568808010 ayham https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568808325 good job

]]> 2021-05-28 15:23:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568808325 I like how you showed that he was panicking instead of just saying he was panicking! catherinez0911 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568808367 2021-05-28 15:23:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568808367 Eddie https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568808382 omg so good you were really sounding out the actions and how they were meant to be said!

]]> 2021-05-28 15:23:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568808382 Eric's positive comment ericl0301 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568841836 THIs is just BRaVo because there is so much dialouge and action and some tragedy. I could easily picture this in my mind!]]> 2021-05-28 15:34:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568841836 I like how you made the scream so real. solangee5251 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568865211 2021-05-28 15:40:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568865211 AMAZING!!! I like how you showed the relationship with your parents but not your sister LOL I can relate to angusl3886 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568876123 2021-05-28 15:44:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568876123 I loved your story I would differently read it again. the cliff hanger made me still want to read more! (love the action!) trianah7515 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568876218 2021-05-28 15:44:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568876218 Nicholas https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568876470 I like how you add feelings to the story ]]> 2021-05-28 15:44:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568876470 Edwin https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568876483 I like it because it had a lot of details.]]> 2021-05-28 15:44:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568876483 Eddie https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568876487 I like how your story was long and ended with a very good ending]]> 2021-05-28 15:44:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568876487 More dialog than me in real life , and I liked how The sister Olivia said "it was a joke ok." koenn0309 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568876504 2021-05-28 15:44:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568876504 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568876563 I like how you put SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSooooooooooooooooooooooo many details like when left the cliff hanger]]> 2021-05-28 15:44:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568876563 alessiah https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568877001 I liked that you added lots of action and dialogue!]]> 2021-05-28 15:44:35 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568877001 I like how you added so much dialogue and action! catherinez0911 https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568877026 2021-05-28 15:44:35 UTC https://padlet.com/ekim292/bafu52nfi7bup8nh/wish/1568877026