Developing a paragraph using PEEL by Nguyen N' Ngoc https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu Click the ADD button to contribute your ideas en-us 2022-03-13 10:09:04 UTC 2022-03-13 12:28:18 UTC hello@padlet.com An https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092276766 follow the topic sentence 

]]> 2022-03-13 12:23:54 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092276766 MAI NGUYEN https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092276855 clear]]> 2022-03-13 12:24:01 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092276855 Bich Ngoc https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092276877 clarify the main points 

]]> 2022-03-13 12:24:03 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092276877 focus on one main idea only (Nghiem) nghiemnguyenulis https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092276878 2022-03-13 12:24:03 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092276878 Phong https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092276915 have a clear meaning]]> 2022-03-13 12:24:08 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092276915 Mai Dương https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092276963 direct and fairly short]]> 2022-03-13 12:24:12 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092276963 Minh https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092276983 We should show the idea directly]]> 2022-03-13 12:24:14 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092276983 have more than one main point nghiemnguyenulis https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277172 2022-03-13 12:24:34 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277172 Quynh https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277207 Active voice
Simple words

]]> 2022-03-13 12:24:38 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277207 Phung Khanh Linh https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277253 focus on main point ]]> 2022-03-13 12:24:42 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277253 Lan https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277368 straight-forward to the main point]]> 2022-03-13 12:24:45 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277368 Đại https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277466 briefly express your idea

]]> 2022-03-13 12:24:52 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277466 An https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277575 can use figure, numbers
right evidence ]]> 2022-03-13 12:25:02 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277575 Bich Ngoc https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277681 have more than one main points
Too long]]> 2022-03-13 12:25:11 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277681 Minh https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277821 Too long]]> 2022-03-13 12:25:27 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277821 Đại https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277863 too long]]> 2022-03-13 12:25:32 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277863 Phung Khanh Linh https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277974 too long

]]> 2022-03-13 12:25:40 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277974 Phong https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277987 To be specific,
 ]]> 2022-03-13 12:25:42 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092277987 https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092278032 Hoa - A good topic sentence should be clear and express your main topic.

]]> 2022-03-13 12:25:46 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092278032 MAI NGUYEN https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092278050 have more than one main points & unclear]]> 2022-03-13 12:25:48 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092278050 Quynh https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092278136 too complicated

]]> 2022-03-13 12:25:56 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092278136 mhai https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092278222 focus on the idea that u wanna analyse in the paragraph

]]> 2022-03-13 12:26:01 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092278222 Bich Ngoc https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092278265 To clarify your main points, make it clearer and narrower]]> 2022-03-13 12:26:05 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092278265 stastitics from studies or researchs (nghiem) nghiemnguyenulis https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279049 2022-03-13 12:26:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279049 Phong https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279096 unclear]]> 2022-03-13 12:26:32 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279096 Lan https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279101 paraphrase the topic sentence]]> 2022-03-13 12:26:32 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279101 Bich Ngoc https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279147 Giving figure, names, locations...]]> 2022-03-13 12:26:38 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279147 numbers, events https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279344 2022-03-13 12:26:59 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279344 Give example to explain the point of give the statistic to confirm the topic https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279384 2022-03-13 12:27:04 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279384 restate the main points of the paragraph (nghiem) nghiemnguyenulis https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279533 2022-03-13 12:27:18 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279533 Mai Nguyen https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279574 Specific evidence]]> 2022-03-13 12:27:22 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279574 BIch Ngoc https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279694 Paraphrase the topic sentence 

]]> 2022-03-13 12:27:35 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279694 Đại https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279720 summarise your idea
paraphrase your topic sentence]]> 2022-03-13 12:27:38 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279720 Ngọc Mai https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279726 restate your position

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specific and clear
follow the main point]]> 2022-03-13 12:27:48 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279817 Mai Nguyen https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279977 fingers, events,...

]]> 2022-03-13 12:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092279977 HOA https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092280028 A good topic sentence should not too hard to understand and shouldn't talk about something that doesn't relate to the topic sentence]]> 2022-03-13 12:28:12 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092280028 Quynh https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092280047 - Put in the context
- ]]> 2022-03-13 12:28:14 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092280047 Minh https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092280080 Use words: thus, in conclusion to inform we start to write this]]> 2022-03-13 12:28:17 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092280080 Thái https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092280086 Number]]> 2022-03-13 12:28:18 UTC https://padlet.com/nguyennhungoc3010/b9y96nt0bdf1yjyu/wish/2092280086