EdU_S1_Writing by Wah-chun Marco WONG

Task

marcowong — 2025-03-06 02:25:32 UTC

Groups 1-3: Pets help people make friends.

Groups 4-6: Pet owners are more likely to have good moods.

T, E: Statistics

A, M: Personal Experience

Useful expressions

marcowong — 2025-03-06 02:27:33 UTC

Expressions for personal experience:

1."In my own experience, SVO."

2."I remember a time when SVO.“ (Use the past tense)

3."Let me share a personal story about Noun."

Expressions for statistics:

1."Research shows that X(number)% of SVO."

2."Studies have found that X(number) SVO."

2025-03-10 02:06:20 UTC

A study found that 80% of pet owners are more likely to hang out with their friends.

Personal experience

s1155096 — 2025-03-10 02:07:29 UTC

Last month, I hanged out with my pet dog in the community. Neighbors felt interested in my lovely pet, so that they came to me and said hi to see whether they could make friends with my pet and me.

Student T

2025-03-10 02:07:34 UTC

Research shows that 79% of pet owners said that they met their neighbors through their pets.

2025-03-10 02:07:40 UTC

Studies have found that 70% of pet owners interact with strangers during walking the dogs, leading to new friendship.

student T &E

s1154835 — 2025-03-10 02:07:41 UTC

Studies have found that 85% of pet owners are more likely to have good and stable moods because they tolerate the damage from pets daily due to their damage behaviors at home.

Research shows that 99.99% people who keep a pet have less arguments with other people.

Statistics + personal experience

s1154817 — 2025-03-10 02:07:43 UTC

Research shows that 78% of pet owners report experiencing reduced anxiety and increased daily happiness, with stress level significantly lower than those without pets.

Let me tell you a story about myself. When I get cold, I can hold the kitty. It will help me become warm mentally and physically. When I touch the kitten soft hair and play with it, I feel my heart melted.

Student E

2025-03-10 02:08:00 UTC

Studies have found that 80%of the pets owners are more likely to make friends with others and have more topics to share.

marcowong — 2025-03-10 02:08:07 UTC

Let me tell me a story about coco, 5 days ago, she cried for some reasons. The dog just came to her and licked her tear off. That was a comfort for her.

2025-03-10 02:08:58 UTC

In my own experience, my friend Candy and I met and became good friends because we often walked our dogs in the park.

In my own experience, I know a girl whose father bought a pet for her and made her walk the pet with her neighbor, later on they fell in love and married, they live a happy life now.

2025-03-10 02:08:58 UTC

Let me tell you a story. One of my friend Yang, who has changed a new job which has a big workload , she feels so depressed. But when she gets home her dog is coming for her and comfort her with the love then they go out for a walk. She felt much better after that. The bad mood are going away.

Personal experience

2025-03-10 02:09:04 UTC

Let me share my story.A week ago, I went to climb Damao Mountain and saw two lovely dogs. At first, they seemed to be fear to come up with me without the owner’s admission. After permitted, I played with them and so engaged. Finally, I made friends with the owners and dogs.

Research show that 80% people who keep pets are more easily to feel relaxed than those who don’t.

marcowong — 2025-03-10 02:09:37 UTC

(Pet owners usually go out to meet their friends, so they can get more relaxed.)

2025-03-10 02:10:18 UTC

China: Although there is no specific data on the proportion of people making friends while traveling with their dogs, the trend can be seen from some indirect data. The big data of a survey conducted by Tujia shows that the proportion of families that own pets and are willing to travel with their pets reaches 66.7%.

Student A and M

2025-03-10 02:12:20 UTC

In my own experience, pet can enhance communication with others. Last month, I have met some strangers who also have pets. we could share the pictures and interesting stories of our own pets with each other. We had lots of words to say. Eventually, we all became friends together.

Personal experience

2025-03-10 02:13:07 UTC

Let me share a personal story from my self. I have a dog named Black. One day when I was walking my dog, he wanted to play with another dog. So me and that pet owner have to wait them by the grass while chatting with each others. Under this situation I must talk with someone even i am a introvert person.

2025-03-10 02:14:34 UTC

4-3 feedback:supports are thoughtful can convince otherwise to keep a pet especially the numbers,story can also be convincing and help others make friends.

Comment on Group 4

2025-03-10 02:17:49 UTC

Provide detailed analysis and examples to support the study, very convincing.

Moving and touching story make us listen carefully and more willing to trust the speakers statements.

Feedback

2025-03-10 02:17:59 UTC

We appreciate you have shared a good story and extra statistics. It is suggested to supplement where you got the data.