https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/b7ce385hiz0cl563 Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 19:04:21 UTC 2021-06-17 15:34:25 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png 27ahagopian https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/b7ce385hiz0cl563/wish/1067047753 I liked how before you shanked yourself with a pencil you said there was pencil that was sharp. I also really like the beginning how you described everything as you woke up like how you said the birds was chirping and cars were roaring. But it felt like you could have add a lot lot lot more descriptions everywhere. ]]> 2021-01-08 14:13:51 UTC https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/b7ce385hiz0cl563/wish/1067047753 27gpentlicky https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/b7ce385hiz0cl563/wish/1080142419 I liked you 1st metifor Lit up the room like a Christmas tree. epically cause it was so close to Christmas  i like how it was really descriptive . Lastly  my wish is a little more thought and a little more metifors but other wise it was awsome good job bub]]> 2021-01-12 18:51:40 UTC https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/b7ce385hiz0cl563/wish/1080142419 https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/b7ce385hiz0cl563/wish/1177180391 Hi hello its me I’m Alan I liked the part when you stabbed yourself with a pencil]]> 2021-02-08 14:42:36 UTC https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/b7ce385hiz0cl563/wish/1177180391 27adavis2 https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/b7ce385hiz0cl563/wish/1177197787 I liked how you got stabbed with a pencil but you just sat there like everything was fine. Good Job Dude]]> 2021-02-08 14:45:34 UTC https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/b7ce385hiz0cl563/wish/1177197787 https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/b7ce385hiz0cl563/wish/1502896065 2021-05-07 15:51:00 UTC https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/b7ce385hiz0cl563/wish/1502896065 27jau https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/b7ce385hiz0cl563/wish/1502922217 I liked how you talked about violent games because were both positive that when a person plays GTA they won’t committee a crime in real life. I also like how you said “Don’t hate on video games because they might not be clean or bloodless” because it is not a very big problem if they kill a person in a video game. But I wish that you would talk about some other games that are not for kids.]]> 2021-05-07 15:56:12 UTC https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/b7ce385hiz0cl563/wish/1502922217 https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/b7ce385hiz0cl563/wish/1513024776 I liked how you were being as honest and you weren’t like video games are good no matter what is in it. I also really liked how you said “don’t hate on video games because they might not be clean or bloodless. But for my wish I kind of think the end could have been a little longer but other than that great job.]]> 2021-05-11 12:34:24 UTC https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/b7ce385hiz0cl563/wish/1513024776 27ahagopian https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/b7ce385hiz0cl563/wish/1612519441 I liked how creative your story is with all these mythical beast. I also liked how the beast are in the “park dungeon”. My wish is how your story was mostly about how to kill these beast and that’s all you story basically was.]]> 2021-06-17 15:34:22 UTC https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/b7ce385hiz0cl563/wish/1612519441