https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v en-us 2022-08-26 11:42:26 UTC 2022-08-26 16:02:46 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/270d.png https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272847518 Putting commentary in my own words and not repeating my evidence ]]> 2022-08-26 15:58:58 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272847518 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272847795 How to explain the rhetorical devices, the why and how ]]> 2022-08-26 15:59:14 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272847795 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272847892 How to successfully differentiate the how and why of the thesis. ]]> 2022-08-26 15:59:20 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272847892 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848090 How to connect commentary to evidence.]]> 2022-08-26 15:59:32 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848090 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848251 using and creating commentary]]> 2022-08-26 15:59:41 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848251 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848338 The difference between the Why and How in the thesis. ]]> 2022-08-26 15:59:47 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848338 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848420 Thesis, working on no repetition throughout. ]]> 2022-08-26 15:59:53 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848420 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848440 The specifics of the rhetorical triangle (what they are exactly)]]> 2022-08-26 15:59:55 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848440 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848441 Haylee Baker
How to find and think of what to write for commentary, the how and why.]]> 2022-08-26 15:59:55 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848441 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848463 Giving sophisticated context ]]> 2022-08-26 15:59:56 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848463 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848536 Learn how to make my commentary correctly flow with my evidence]]> 2022-08-26 16:00:01 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848536 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848565 Forming and connecting strong commentary.]]> 2022-08-26 16:00:02 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848565 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848664 how to write the why and how without sounding repetitive ]]> 2022-08-26 16:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848664 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848739 Trying to come up with commentary that relates to the evidence and makes sense.]]> 2022-08-26 16:00:12 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848739 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848787 Line of reasoning, structure of essay]]> 2022-08-26 16:00:15 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848787 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848888 Using sophistication and connecting the evidence to the overall point]]> 2022-08-26 16:00:20 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848888 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848890 Writing the how in my commentary ]]> 2022-08-26 16:00:21 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272848890 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272849067 Commentary can be confusing for me because it can be difficult to differentiate between what is and isn’t considered commentary. ]]> 2022-08-26 16:00:31 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272849067 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272849456 Commentary and how to make it not repetitive ]]> 2022-08-26 16:00:48 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272849456 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272849538 Using correct commentary that effectively relates to the evidence and prompt.]]> 2022-08-26 16:00:52 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272849538 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272849559 how to make commentary less repetitive.]]> 2022-08-26 16:00:54 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272849559 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272849609 Shaping the commentary in a way that makes it flow smoothly, all while supporting the evidence nicely.]]> 2022-08-26 16:00:58 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272849609 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272849715 not having repetitive commentary ]]> 2022-08-26 16:01:04 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272849715 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272850033 i think the hardest thing for me to write is probably commentary. sometimes i feel as though it’s a bit hard to expand on specific pieces of evidence without including personal anecdotes or addressing the reader using “you” or other specific pronouns. ]]> 2022-08-26 16:01:23 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272850033 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272850157 Writing a good thesis, and less repetitive commentary. ]]> 2022-08-26 16:01:33 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272850157 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272850266 Knowing how to make clear and different body paragraph topics ]]> 2022-08-26 16:01:40 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272850266 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272850485 Writing the why and how for commentary. And making them clear and different.]]> 2022-08-26 16:01:53 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272850485 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272850635 trying to not make it repetitive and using good transitions ]]> 2022-08-26 16:02:02 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272850635 abbiehorton070706 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272850684 How to make commentary longer without being repetitive while still being connected.]]> 2022-08-26 16:02:06 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272850684 https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272851329 Writing commentary in a way that sounds less repetitive. I want it to flow with my writing. ]]> 2022-08-26 16:02:46 UTC https://padlet.com/teresa_lamar/b6i4sa1nqdhqo9v/wish/2272851329