https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz Focus your energy and work time! en-us 2017-09-21 15:33:19 UTC 2017-09-28 19:39:33 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Dartstarget.png https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189805713 Tomorrow I want to try : 
1. Why a character does something 
2. Try to use flash forward/back]]> 2017-09-21 15:35:16 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189805713 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189805716 1.  write a story that makes the reader think of whats happening
2. show not tell

]]> 2017-09-21 15:35:16 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189805716 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189805816 1)to make the story make you feel you are there
2)to make the story detail and make it long ]]> 2017-09-21 15:35:27 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189805816 2025_agarnier https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189805821 Tomorrow I'm going to work on 
1.Dialog with feelings 
2.Show don't tell.



]]> 2017-09-21 15:35:27 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189805821 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189805829 1)show not tell
2)write more]]> 2017-09-21 15:35:28 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189805829 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189805897 Tomorrow I want to add more dialog to my new writing piece, thoughts, and show, not tell. Also, making it more like a movie, not a summary and write a page and a half or two.]]> 2017-09-21 15:35:37 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189805897 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189805957 1) Show not tell.
2) Be focused on my work!!
3) I want to put the other characters perspectives.
4) Write as much as i can!!]]> 2017-09-21 15:35:44 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189805957 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189805997 1) Write 1 and a half pages or more
2) Showing not telling how the character is feeling.
3]]> 2017-09-21 15:35:48 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189805997 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189806008 sowing not telling 

rivising]]> 2017-09-21 15:35:49 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189806008 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189806433 1. Show how the characters feelings 
2 show the way other characters act]]> 2017-09-21 15:36:34 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189806433 nirelharmon https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189806500 1. Show not tell
2. Make the reader(s) picture the story.
3. Describe the story a lot.
4. WRITE EVEN MORE!!!!!!!!!!!]]> 2017-09-21 15:36:40 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189806500 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189806502 1) I am going to work on show don't tell 
2) focus on my writing ]]> 2017-09-21 15:36:41 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189806502 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189806644 1)dialogue
2)Show not tell


]]> 2017-09-21 15:36:57 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189806644 2025_vblohm https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189807903 1.show not tell
2.write more pages]]> 2017-09-21 15:39:18 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189807903 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189808849 tomorrow i want to put more show not tell ]]> 2017-09-21 15:40:53 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189808849 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189855568 For tomorrow, I would like to wright...
1. Explain more about how I was feeling in a moment (Show not tell).
2. Let the reader(s) picture my story.
3. Let the reader(s) feel what I'm feeling.]]> 2017-09-21 17:16:20 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189855568 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189855848 1) I wan to add a lot os detail into my story 
2) I want to explain whats happening   around me ]]> 2017-09-21 17:16:47 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189855848 2025_cowens https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189855849 1 I want my story to be detailed.2 I want to show my setting.3 I also want it to be mostly word spelling correct.]]> 2017-09-21 17:16:48 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189855849 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189855930 1) Show don't tell.
2) Describe (specifically)
3) Get readers hooked in the story.

 ]]> 2017-09-21 17:16:54 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189855930 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189856056 1) I want to write fast and furious  and really try to make my story about what we learned. 
2) I want to my meaning noticeable for the readers.
3) I want to add more dialogue:):):)
4) I want the reader(s) to feel what I feel.
5) I am going to try to add a flashback or flash forward.

 ]]> 2017-09-21 17:17:06 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189856056 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189856127 Tomorrow I want to put a lot of action and a lot of dialog.  ]]> 2017-09-21 17:17:13 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189856127 2025_egarnier https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189856378 1)Make my entry longer
2)Show don't tell.]]> 2017-09-21 17:17:36 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189856378 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189856605 Add  more flash backs
Add more puntuation
Show don't tell]]> 2017-09-21 17:17:56 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189856605 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189857157 I should show my stories what it is about, Because if I make a list of what things are cool in the interesting parts. So I should it my reading skills.]]> 2017-09-21 17:18:53 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189857157 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189857252 my big goal is to try and do what the author of eleven did and SHOW dont tell :/:P👍]]> 2017-09-21 17:19:04 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189857252 https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189857824 1- I want to make my story interesting.]]> 2017-09-21 17:20:06 UTC https://padlet.com/erica_woodson/b6648ge8c3bz/wish/189857824