https://padlet.com/27kchaves/b6158a88hxivyi1c Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 18:44:33 UTC 2025-12-27 18:59:38 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png 27dharmer https://padlet.com/27kchaves/b6158a88hxivyi1c/wish/1074888763 One thing that I like in your story was how you described certain things in good detail. You described the little things and I thought that was really good. Another thing that I liked was how you included a good quote at the end that was a lesson learned about your family. One thing I think could have been better was how there was more than one moment included. Other than that I thought it was a great story overall!]]> 2021-01-11 16:35:14 UTC https://padlet.com/27kchaves/b6158a88hxivyi1c/wish/1074888763 27arebuth https://padlet.com/27kchaves/b6158a88hxivyi1c/wish/1514007507 Hi,Kim! I liked the essay you wrote on uniforms, A star I have for you is that I like that you showed a lot of detail that students get upset when they wear uniforms like when you were showing detail in all the warrants in your 3 body paragraphs.Another star I have for you is that I like how you used a lot of persuasive words that really fit into the paragraph like when you said in body paragraph one that it would be a reality if school uniforms were not a thing. I think the word reality really fits into the sentence. One wish that I have for you is I think that in body paragraph 2s anecdote you probably should have added why the girl was getting bullied by the girls. But I still figured out because you said it at the end after you said “this reveals that”. Good Job Kim! You did a great job!]]> 2021-05-11 15:56:50 UTC https://padlet.com/27kchaves/b6158a88hxivyi1c/wish/1514007507 27dharmer https://padlet.com/27kchaves/b6158a88hxivyi1c/wish/1612445710 Hey Kim! I really enjoyed reading your piece and thought it was so funny! I loved your pictures too! One thing I really liked about your piece was how you described the three different dinner monsters. I thought that was so creative and I loved it. Also I really liked how you made up a story about Tammy and referred to Tammy looking back on the article she read about the monsters. I haven’t seen a story like that yet and I love the idea and I think it was very creative and funny! I don’t have any wish for you! Great job! I loved reading your piece!]]> 2021-06-17 14:59:11 UTC https://padlet.com/27kchaves/b6158a88hxivyi1c/wish/1612445710 27callen1 https://padlet.com/27kchaves/b6158a88hxivyi1c/wish/1612522427 I like throughout the story you described this happening to a child and how the child prevented which really displayed how to get rid of the dinner-monster. I also liked how you clearly described what is the monster with elaborate details. Something you can work on would be grammar and punctuation. ]]> 2021-06-17 15:35:59 UTC https://padlet.com/27kchaves/b6158a88hxivyi1c/wish/1612522427