https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca SWBAT: Apply elaborative techniques to create effective commentary. CLAIM: “Harrison Bergeron” and our society have a lot of similarities and differences when focusing on the government’s control. en-us 2020-11-18 08:02:57 UTC 2021-12-01 09:27:06 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4d3.png jyoshimi https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/935803019 2020-11-18 09:36:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/935803019 jyoshimi https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/935806627 2020-11-18 09:37:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/935806627 jyoshimi https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/935812704 2020-11-18 09:39:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/935812704 jyoshimi https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/935816092 2020-11-18 09:40:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/935816092 jyoshimi https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/935818587 2020-11-18 09:41:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/935818587 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939184196 The text demonstrates that if Harrison Bergeron is taken away, then the government would be able to control families. This connects to government control because their society's authorities are using their power to mold who stays in a family and who doesn't.]]> 2020-11-18 22:58:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939184196 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939184480 If they were good looking then the government would make them be required to wear unnecessary items and change the way they look by the government  since everyone had to obey the rule of not looking better than each other. Those who are better looking are forced to change their whole apperence.]]> 2020-11-18 22:58:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939184480 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939185178 Clearly,  Harrison wore these things to become equal with everyone else. Being over the average handsome meant that he is to be made more ugly. This shows how much the government wishes everyone to be the same. If you're way more beautiful or handsome, you are made ugly to fit in with others.]]> 2020-11-18 22:58:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939185178 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939185322 If George reflects on something, then the radio in his ear will make a noise to distract him to prevent him from thinking. Due to George's critical thinking, he has to be handicapped because he has a higher level of thinking and being above average is not tolerated. This shows how the government would come up with anything, to prevent differences. In this case, if someone's above average in intelligence then you are forced to have the same level of thinking like everyone else. ]]> 2020-11-18 22:58:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939185322 jyoshimi https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939185495 Student commentary (Elaborative technique + connecting back to the given claim)]]> 2020-11-18 22:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939185495 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939185576 For example, people in the society were given things, by the government, to make them the same as everyone else. Such as in the real world, people want to fit in with people so they don't stand out too much.]]> 2020-11-18 22:59:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939185576 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939185672 If, Harrison was taken away then, that means he had done something very wrong. Going back into the text the H-G man had been eager to to take the boy. Demonstrating government control Harrison was taken away because their government didn't think it was right for someone to go against them.]]> 2020-11-18 22:59:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939185672 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939185682 Clearly, Harrison has good looks so the H-G men require him to look ugly or his worst. This piece of evidence shows government control because it says that he has to wear all of the gadgets at all time. This means that the reader can infer he has no choice or say in what is going on.]]> 2020-11-18 22:59:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939185682 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939185712 Clearly, he is forced to wear something that is connected to the government. This is a difference when focused on government control because they are forced to wear something daily, and we can wear whatever we want.]]> 2020-11-18 22:59:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939185712 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939185922 If George thinks about things like the ballerina and how she shouldn't be handicapped then he will get a shock transmitted to his brain which will prohibit him from doing that. This is done because Harrison's society uses government control to take advantage of his brain and what he thinks.]]> 2020-11-18 22:59:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939185922 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939186154 The legible definition for citizens being handicapped can be defined as "controlling" within the government policies that comply within our society comparison to theirs. This act as shown within this piece of text that overall the gifted nor talented, is given "materials" which can slow/prevent a gifted person from using their known talent.]]> 2020-11-18 22:59:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939186154 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939186158 Due to having wearing a handicap connected to a government transmitter he would always be suppressed, however are government doesn't suppress it's people.]]> 2020-11-18 22:59:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939186158 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939186186 clearly, This means that Harrison had to wear handicaps to make him equal to everyone because in their society they had to all be the same, or else they will be killed. this is connected to government control because the government required the more athletic people to wear handicaps.]]> 2020-11-18 22:59:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939186186 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939186259  clearly, If you were better looking than others, you would be required to wear and do certain things that would make you look ugly, like Vonnegut made Harrison do. In their community if they were more good looking than others they would have to wear things to make them look ugly, and uncomfortable. ]]> 2020-11-18 22:59:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939186259 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939186428 Clearly, the musicians were very  talented in their society which meant that they were better than everyone else and was not equal. Due to them being more talented than everyone else without their handicaps, they were forced and threaten to put their handicaps back on by Diana Moon Glampers holding a gun against them. This shows how strict the government is about everyone being equal.]]> 2020-11-18 22:59:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939186428 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939186806 If anyone had a good looking appearance just like Harrison then they would have to wear irrelevant piece of clothing to hide their good looking appearance ]]> 2020-11-18 22:59:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939186806 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939187774 If the musicians didn't put the handicaps back on then they'll be shot and killed on the spot. This shows government control because they won't hesitate to kill the people if they break a law.]]> 2020-11-18 23:00:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939187774 2291301561 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939187816 The community seems off because they are taking people away. For example, they are taking Harrison Bergeron from Hazel and George, who are the parents of Harrison. The is an example of government control because they are controlling who gets to be in the community.]]> 2020-11-18 23:00:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939187816 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939187886 The ear radio is a way of ensuring that the government has control. And when George thinks of something that is prohibited they automatically send a noise to stop his thoughts. For example, lets say your searching up drugs. your mom prohibits that so she takes your phone away. That's "government control" a way they can sure know they have control. ]]> 2020-11-18 23:00:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939187886 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939189212 Clearly,  Their society didn't like April and could be the reason why the H-G men took Harrison away. This connects to government control because they are controlling the H-G men  ]]> 2020-11-18 23:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939189212 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939195907 It is clearly shown how the society is so uptight about laws she was going to kill the musicians if they did not put there handicaps back on in time. This shows that there government is so in control that they will kill people because of it. ]]> 2020-11-18 23:04:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939195907 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939197608 Clearly, George has to wear a handicap to stop thinking of something more. Which means that the government is controlling him.]]> 2020-11-18 23:05:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939197608 2571300098 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939205380 Clearly, the "behavior" of the society is caused from the H-G men taking people away. Which shows that they go hand in hand. In result, nobody can be their self or it will lead to being taken away. (Sorry...I understood but I didn't understand how to write it). ]]> 2020-11-18 23:09:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/939205380 https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/940230434 This means that Diana is clearly quick about punishing citizens from their society. This is connected to surveillance because you can see how quick the government responds to these things thanks to the cameras and advanced technology they have.]]> 2020-11-19 07:45:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jyoshimi/b4qc6rwb7x8qv6ca/wish/940230434