https://padlet.com/jleong17/b4fttb1o14ivnvwf Helping Local Businesses Affected by Lockdown en-us 2021-11-18 21:38:32 UTC 2021-11-28 23:15:36 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/jleong17/b4fttb1o14ivnvwf/wish/1907270611 Hi I’m Megan I’m in year 5 and I’m 10 years old. I like how you write about what you can do to help and examples of what you can do to help. You also aren’t only suggesting it but you’re actually taking action which I can see by the email you wrote to Fiona Martin about the issue. The sections are also very organised and I know where to find everything and you keep the right information in the right areas not making them separated and confusing.]]> 2021-11-23 01:16:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jleong17/b4fttb1o14ivnvwf/wish/1907270611 https://padlet.com/jleong17/b4fttb1o14ivnvwf/wish/1907305846 Hi Janice my name is Kaliya I looked at your showcase and yeah I agree with you whenever I walk past a close shop or a shop with no customers I want to help them . a lot of new places open and then close due to COVID and lockdown . I think you should add next time is pictures because you could put pictures of what happing and what shops are close or have no customers . I think you really done a fantastic job with your topic I have no problems with your topic all I think you should do is add pictures to make it look more detail but good job ]]> 2021-11-23 01:37:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jleong17/b4fttb1o14ivnvwf/wish/1907305846 https://padlet.com/jleong17/b4fttb1o14ivnvwf/wish/1911400578 Hi Janice, every time when i walk past a shop which is close. I would feel really sorry or sad for the owners. It’s very important to raise awareness about this specific topic. I really liked your photo essay because It explained what it looks like and what It feels like for your business to be closed. Good job Janice!]]> 2021-11-24 22:45:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jleong17/b4fttb1o14ivnvwf/wish/1911400578 https://padlet.com/jleong17/b4fttb1o14ivnvwf/wish/1911401095 I really enjoyed reading your website. I really liked reading your information page. I also like the way it is put together. Great Job! :)]]> 2021-11-24 22:46:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jleong17/b4fttb1o14ivnvwf/wish/1911401095 https://padlet.com/jleong17/b4fttb1o14ivnvwf/wish/1911407437 Hi Janice! I thoroughly enjoyed this website! Firstly, I loved how you included personal experiences and antidotes in your introduction. You said you’ve personally been to restaurants that had to close down, and seen many business owners that have suffered. This makes the first part of the website more engaging and makes us sympathise. As all of the context is amazing, the only feedback I have is maybe to check the website format. Adding bold writing to key information, rearranging the font size and adding some charts may be a great way to add some information in an engaging format. I also loved the way you added stats and facts but also personal opinions and statements. This gave the website great aspects of both the facts and your opinion, which made the website much better. Overall, I loved this website as well as learning about local businesses affected by Covid restrictions.]]> 2021-11-24 22:54:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jleong17/b4fttb1o14ivnvwf/wish/1911407437 https://padlet.com/jleong17/b4fttb1o14ivnvwf/wish/1911415281 Hi Janice! I really enjoyed your website! I like how you included you personal experience in your introduction. All the information was interesting and your photo essay was very understandable. ]]> 2021-11-24 23:05:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jleong17/b4fttb1o14ivnvwf/wish/1911415281 https://padlet.com/jleong17/b4fttb1o14ivnvwf/wish/1916697507 Janice I did the same topic showcase as you but it was cool to see how we did such different call to actions. I liked your information and how you talked about how the government is helping.]]> 2021-11-28 23:15:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jleong17/b4fttb1o14ivnvwf/wish/1916697507 https://padlet.com/jleong17/b4fttb1o14ivnvwf/wish/1916697632 Hello Janice!
I loved your website and how formal/professional it looked! Some feedback is that for your poster, try to add some photos related to your case, in order to make it relevant and eye catching. For your bibliography, don’t just put links and use the actual way. ]]> 2021-11-28 23:15:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jleong17/b4fttb1o14ivnvwf/wish/1916697632