1/6 period website comments by Michelle Cearley https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9 Double click to open a box. Type your first and last name where it says "title." Then, once you have read through another person's website, leave them comments under their name by clicking the pencil icon to add a comment for them. en-us 2015-11-30 16:12:48 UTC 2026-02-15 22:16:47 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.storage.googleapis.com/portrait/sticky.jpg Mrs. Cearley user_1412638330 https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/83951217 You have a spelling error on homepage. "lets" needs to be "let's"

nice graphics

Try to enlarge the font size on the benefits page as it is hard to read

]]> 2015-11-30 16:22:56 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/83951217 Wilkes https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84232314 your words are mispelled. And your grafics are good. Easy to use.

Its easy to use. Needs more graphics on disadvantages. Has mispelled words.

-Paige

needs mor facks]]> 2015-12-01 16:30:53 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84232314 Kaitlyn McMahan https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84232409 You need to rewrite the first piece of information on benefits and you need to add capitols on some of your information pieces

]]> 2015-12-01 16:31:04 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84232409 Paige https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84232594 Some of your pictures on the home page ae blurry. On "What networks and cities are tending?" doesn't have puncutation on last scentence.

]]> 2015-12-01 16:31:25 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84232594 Paige https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84232612 I LOVE your website...just maybe not paragraphs on home page.

Paige, you have an amazing website! -Erica

Good job on the website i have yet to find anything wrong with it -Logan Vandiver

]]> 2015-12-01 16:31:27 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84232612 Jolene Huber jolenehuber https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84232655 add intro on home page. You did great! -sabrina

on the benifets page of

It's a little hard to see the words on the home page. But other than that I loved it! -caitie

I thought it was hard to find your other main pages

iTs So CuTeeeeeee - secret human

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I KNOW

]]> 2015-12-01 16:31:31 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84232655 jac https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84232887 you need more facts and you spelt benefits wrong

]]> 2015-12-01 16:31:57 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84232887 Sophie  https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84233635 - add info on home page (intro)

- View button isn't working on cons page

- parental tips page, "birthdate" is not a

- change the labels on the button text

Some of your parental tips are not tips

Your website needs more graphics

On pros you spelled lose "loose"  Needs more graphics. Love the layout. - anonomous person

]]> 2015-12-01 16:33:12 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84233635 Logan Vandiver https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84233669 On your pros page you put "There" as in a place when you need.-Paige

On your pages, maybe use bullet points instead because it looks like they are long paragraphs. -Caitie

]]> 2015-12-01 16:33:16 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84233669 Connor Andrews https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84233912 i think you might want add a few more pictures

]]> 2015-12-01 16:33:41 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84233912 logan holmes  https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84234685 Great website + great graphics -Erica

awsome grafic

]]> 2015-12-01 16:35:18 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84234685 Jade Vasquez https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84234686 you need more graphics

I love your website but it needs more graphics and the title on the home page is really hard to see.

]]> 2015-12-01 16:35:18 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84234686 Sabrina https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84234705 You spelled giving wrong

]]> 2015-12-01 16:35:21 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84234705 Maaaaaatttttttthhhhhheeeeeewwww N. https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84234935 Why is your home page paris?

wat is rong wd dah home pAge?

]]> 2015-12-01 16:35:53 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84234935 Braxton Bowen https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84236207 - You spelled properly wrong it only has 1

- On the parental tips page your first sentece has a lot of run on's
-your questions don't have anything to do with the question
]]> 2015-12-01 16:38:43 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84236207 Roman https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84236215 On your pros page the 1st and 5th bullet points don't have punctuation at the end of the lst scentence. Great home page picture. Yours is very good with lots of facts.

]]> 2015-12-01 16:38:44 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84236215 Colton Jones https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84236757 I like your homescreen videos.

]]> 2015-12-01 16:40:19 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84236757 Tsion https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84236808 - Love poll on home page

- Make text a little bigger on every page

- More graphics on parental help

-good job

]]> 2015-12-01 16:40:27 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84236808 Connor  https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84237271 You need more grphics and you only have two sources

Good layout and facts.

]]> 2015-12-01 16:41:42 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84237271 Robbie https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84240224 Good and i like your backround.

You need a source page You need to get rid of the IM a paragraph stuff

Where is your pictures.

you need to make your text more visible -Erica

yur text is blurry and hard two read]]> 2015-12-01 16:48:53 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84240224 Brandi https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84240485 like  the poll

You need to add more facts. D

If your not finish i can understand the lack of information but if your finished you need more benifits.-Logan Vandiver

Your not finished but I really like the layout so far. Didn't catch any misspelled words.

-Paige

i really dont understand what Haps with snaps means, i woul reccomend add mor questions to poll.

Other ten tatt it loks vey good.

i coughtt 1 mispelled wword witch was benefits. its supposed to be B-E-N-E-F-I-T-S

]]> 2015-12-01 16:49:34 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84240485 Caitie: https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84240604 Your website is great but on your home page you  basically have 2 subtitles. You should also make most of your pictures the same size.

Paige R.

Your website on the pros and cons have good facts but some of the facts are very short but beside that

]]> 2015-12-01 16:49:50 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84240604 Cam Grantham https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84240907 You need to but more pros and information on your pros page and on the home page it sounds professional with our website will help parents with tips about texting and driving but i didn't see anything about texting and driving. -Logan Vandiver

I LOVE you graphics but your Patrick Driessen quote is hard to read

]]> 2015-12-01 16:50:35 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84240907 Matthew Duffy https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84244891 maybe add a few more pictures on your slides. -Caitie

Very quickly i already found a problem with the view more button which does not do anything at all what is the point of it. -Logan Vandiver

Also on the cons of your website you need to add more information. -Logan Vandiver

]]> 2015-12-01 17:01:52 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84244891 Mathew: https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84246890 On the pros of social media page it says "sovial" instead of social. Like the layout and graphics.

]]> 2015-12-01 17:07:27 UTC https://padlet.com/user_1412638330/b3watgdyujz9/wish/84246890