Fantastically Crafted Stories from Incredibly Smart Children! (Final Draft) by Mark Giraldi https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018 A collection of our classroom narratives! This is the final draft of our classroom narratives (after self and peer editing)! en-us 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC 2025-12-09 15:50:43 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Drinkingmed.png Narrative Must-Haves markgiraldi https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848786 MUST HAVES
- This is based off your Character/Wants/Why Not cards and rough work; use them to help you!
- Between 250-500 words (1 to 2 pages in length)
- Has your story title and name as the title of your post
- Has your three 'story starters' listed at the beginning of your draft
- Includes a setting (when, where, two descriptive words minimum)
- Includes the main character (name, their role, and descriptive words for appearance and personality)
- Has a conflict, a resolution, and an author's message (what can the audience learn from your short story?)]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848786 The Really Bad Teacher (Mr. Giraldi's Example) markgiraldi https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848787 Story Starters:
- An angry gym teacher
- Wants to build a catapult (to launch slow-moving students)
- But his principal won't let him

Once upon a time in a land far, far away, there was a beautiful little elementary school called Ashmere Cavenue. It was a school filled with happiness and learning, and the students and teachers got along really well with each other. Well, almost all the students and teachers. There was one teacher who just didn't seem to get along with the students and other staff members. He was a very grumpy, very angry, and very smelly teacher. His name was Mr. Heraldo, and he taught gym to Grade 3 and 4 students.  No one knew why he was always so angry; was it because he'd been hit in the head too many times in dodgeball? Was it because he was losing all his hair on top of his head already (and was beginning to look like a big, human pear)? Was it because of all the good treats had already been eaten from the staff room by the time he finally made it over there for lunch? No one knew. However, one split 3/4 class did know that he was up to something positively nefarious. One day (when trying to avoid his bad breath by staying as far away as possible from him) they saw some plans left on a chair. They were plans for a catapult, and even worse, they were labeled as 'PLANS FOR STUDENT CATAPULT - SPEEDING UP WASHROOM TRIPS WITH STUDENT-HATING STYLE'.  

Oh no! What to do? The kids were very worried. They immediately told their amazing principal Ms. Hoble. Ms. Hoble was loved by all the students, and was known to be very kind and fair. She immediately walked into Mr. Heraldo's gym, and told him that launching students through any method ranging from good old-fashioned throwing to a massive catapult was not allowed. Mr. Heraldo muttered under his breath some, but tried to knock over the chair with his dastardly student-launching catapult plans on them. He was trying to hide the evidence! This grade 3/4 class was very perceptive though, and immediately caught on to what he was trying to do. They pointed it out to Ms. Hoble, and she grabbed the plans! Now Mr. Heraldo had to apologize and promise to never, ever build a student-launching catapult.

He did, but just in case, Ms. Hoble had all building materials kept far from his gym from that day forward.

(395 words! All done!)]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848787 Surya the Old Grandpa (Abdullah) 804591 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848793 - An old grandpa
- Wants to win a watermelon seed spitting contest
- But he gets attacked by Hiccups

Once upon a time, there was a old grandpa named Surya. He was a nice guy. He had grey hair, a big tummy and wore a red shirt. He wanted to win a watermelon seed spitting contest, but there was a problem! A guy named Hiccups was attacking him. Hiccups was a bad guy with a strong and huge body. Nobody in that area liked Hiccups because he used to bother everyone.  

Surya was practicing by spitting watermelon seeds with his friend named Abdullah every day. Every day Hiccups came to Surya's house and he stopped Surya to practise. There was one more day until the contest.  Surya was very excited as he was winning in his practise. 

It was the day of contest! Surya started to spit out watermelon seeds. When Surya was about to win, Hiccups started to attack everyone! They were all scared of Hiccups. Everyone ran away, but Surya was brave, and he stood up and started spitting seeds at Hiccups constantly. Hiccups wasn't stopping attacking people though. Surya was thinking hard and then he came up with a plan. Surya decided to ask everyone to spit watermelon seeds at Hiccups. Then everyone started to spit watermelon seeds on Hiccups. He was huge, but he got afraid when everyone was doing this. Hiccups ran away, and he never came back to Surya's house. Everyone was very, very happy! None of them ever saw Hiccups again. THE END

]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848793 Ms.Ladybug And The Forest That Comes To Life (By: Amogh 929082 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848795 - Ms.Ladybug
- Wants to rule the world (to make sure that Mr.Tarantula learns his lesson)
- Forest comes to life

Not so long ago, in a  big, lush, forest not so far away, Ms.Ladybug was taking a peaceful nap on a big, comfortable leaf. She heard some rustling and one word popped into her head. DANGER! She jumped off the leaf she was resting on just in time to escape Mr.Tarantula, who had pounced on to the leaf and tried to eat her!

"I'll get you next time," he murmured angrily.

But terrified Ms. Ladybug had flown too far away from Mr. Tarantula to make out what he was saying. She searched for a leaf that was well hidden beneath the canopy and branches. She looked for one that was hidden and was comfortable (mind you,  Ms.Ladybug was always very picky about the comfort of the leaf) and when she found  the one that looked good, she went to sleep on it. As she drifted off to sleep said to herself, "If I want to make sure Mr.Tarantula learns his lesson, I need to rule the world. Well, only for a bit."

The next day, as soon as Ms.Ladybug woke up, she realized that two eyes were staring at her. She jumped off the leaf and realized that those eyes belonged to the leaf! She noticed that the trees and branches around her had eyes too. That's when she knew what was happening. The forest had come to life! Just like what happened before when Mr.Tarantula attacked, Ms.Ladybug had only one response to things that scared her. Flying away! Once she had flown out of the forest, she worked out what to do. 

After thinking for a while, she decided to go and see the wise wizard who lived way up in the mountains. Once she reached there, she would seek his help. Now, Ms.Ladybug wasn't exactly an adventurous type of bug. She would much more rather prefer to stay home and relax. But she knew that she had to be brave. Just this once. So, after eating everything she could find so she wouldn't feel hungry during the journey, little Ms. Ladybug set off on the long trip. In the beginning, she felt just like anyone taking the trip would, that it was going to be short. But after one hour of traveling, she felt just like anyone taking the trip would feel; it went on forever! After flying for two more hours, she saw a peculiar hut in the mountains. She felt great because that meant she was finally there.

Once she reached the hut, she realized that it was shaped like a phoenix. "Are you there Mr.Wizard?" Ms.ladybug inquired. "I'm surprised that you didn't quit halfway through. Most people who seek my help do.  Now hurry up." 

"Can you fly?"  Ms.Ladybug asked. 

"Yes, of course. Why do you ask?" 

"We've got a long way to fly."
 
"Who said anything about flying?", said Mr.Wizard, smiling slightly. 

He snapped his fingers and Ms. Ladybug landed in the forest.  Everything was normal and she had landed in a part she had never seen.  It was  peaceful there, so she decided to live there. 

]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848795 Tiny Meatball Rides a Roller Coaster ( Elizabeth ) 8045743 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848797 -a meatball 
-wants to ride a roller coaster 
-but is allergic to Fun 

Once upon a time lived a red, bumpy, and delicious smelling meatball named Tiny Meatball. She really wanted to ride a roller coaster. She lived in a small, cozy home. Even though it was small Tiny Meatball loved it. But Tiny Meatball was allergic to Fun (her cat). Fun also wanted to come. So Tiny Meatball went to the pet store to get some treats for Fun to make her stay home. But they ran out! Tiny Meatball didn't know what to do. Just then Tiny Meatball saw a meatball with a cage and a cat inside. 

"That`s it," said Tiny Meatball. "I`ll  get a cage for Fun!"

So Tiny Meatball got a cage for Fun. When they got to the roller coaster Tiny Meatball she started to sneeze. 

"Why?" said Tiny Meatball. "I don`t understand. She`s in a cage." 

Then Tiny Meatball saw that the cage had holes in it. 

"Oh no!" said Tiny Meatball. 

Then she saw another meatball with her daughter was in the back.

"Oh I know," said Tiny Meatball. "I will put Fun in the seat behind me."

Next Tiny Meatball and Fun went on the roller coaster and lived happily ever after.]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848797 The Plant Who Wants to Dance 8045861 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848798 - a sunflower
- to dance in the nutcracker
- a bully tries to stop her because she sleeps while dancing.

Once upon a time there was a plant named Lily. She lived in a small house with her parents, sisters and also her dog, baby brother, her grandparents and a baby sister.

She badly wanted to dance in the Nutcracker concert, but she needs to overcomes her sleepiness and a bully who always bullies her because she always dances while sleeping. 

One day Lily got a note from the dance school. It read 'YOU ARE INVITED IN A DANCE SCHOOL'. Lily was speechless! She jumped up and down, but then the  bully came. The bully said that she couldn't dance, and went out the door. Lily did not care, because she loved to dance. So she quickly packed her stuff and went. She danced while sleeping (it always happened) and her teachers and friends loved it! Her teacher then let her dance in the Nutcracker. Then the bully said that she was a great dancer, and the thing is the bully can't dance so they became friends and Lily taught her how to dance! They both then danced and performed in the Nutcracker.

THE END !]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848798 A Story about an astronaut (Fatima) 811746 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848799 - it's about an astronaut
- who wants to win a race
- but is scared
- the setting is in a race
-( when ) it was in the afternoon

Once upon a time in a beautiful countryside there was an astronaut named Ava. Ava has a helmet, a suit, and brown long hair and green eyes. She acts like a popular girl, but she sounds like a cow smells like milk. 

One day she heard there was a... RACE! She got excited, but then she got scared. She started practicing, then she said to herself, "What if I lose?" 

She kept on practicing, then a few days later... it was the RACE! She was still scared. Her cart was a rocket cart. The race started! 

One of the racers was a girl named Julia. She had black long hair and blue eyes, and she acts shy but she's not really shy. She has a unicorn cart because she like unicorns. The race was starting in 3, 2, 1, GO! They drove off to get to the finish and Julia and Ava were BUMPING into each other, trying to make one of them to crash so that the other could win the race. Ava CRASHED! But then she said to herself, "I will never ever give up!"

Ava got up, but Julia was in the lead and Ava said, "I will use all the speed in my cart!" Then Ava was in the lead and Julia got so MAD that she SMASHED her cart! Ava saw the finish line, then... SHE MADE IT! She was so happy, but Julia was sad. Ava made her cheer up by giving her the trophy instead, then they both were happy, and lived happily ever after.]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848799 The Lazy P.E. Teacher (By Eoghan) 840778 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848802 -A PE teacher
-Wants to build a new home
-Cant get any respect

Once there was a rude and lazy PE teacher. His name was Mr. Maguire. He was a beefy man with big strong muscles. He had hair around the edge of his head but it was shaved in the middle and It was grey. He did not like his job or his students, and his house was disgusting. It looked bad, it smelled bad, it even didn't feel good passing by in the morning. But one way or another he bullied the kids and he lived in his house. One day he was yelling at two of the most mischievous kids in the grade four class.  Their names were Sam and Charlie.   The reason he was yelling at them was because they were hanging off of the v'olleyball net. When all of a sudden he had an idea.  It was a brilliant idea but an awful idea.  The idea was to trick the kids into building a spacious and wonderful home for him.  After all, he couldn't get anyone else to build it.  No one would respect him after he was so lazy.  He didn't even clean his room weekly.  It was a mess!  Sometimes he forgot to put his clothes in the laundry bin and he ate in his room and food stains were on his bed.  He forgot to vacuum all the dust on the ground, too.

On January 16th Mr. Maguire set his idea into action.  he told the kids that he would give them each a brilliant prize. And if you don't accept it no gym for a month! said Mr. Maguire.  Mostly all of the kids went with not having gym for a month since Mr. Maguire was so mean to them.  Then Mr. Maguire yelled so loud it felt like the gym was going to collapse.  So then the kids walked back to Mr. Maguire to change their mind about the plan.  They would be part of it with the few kids that wanted to be part of it from the beginning. He said "you will build me a good house have you got that?" the kids nodded in reply all but one she knew that he would not give them a prize and if he did it would not be more than a penny.  
So the next day she told the other kids what she thought.  She told them that after we finish the house let's set it with traps so that the gym teacher will not bug us again.  so the next day they got to work.  It took a long time to get the outer structure of the house but they completed it.  Then they got to the true building and that was even harder but they still did it.  Then, it was time for placing the traps. So when the gym leader came to the house he said, this house looks amazing...for kids, he murmured. Then he said, it's finally done!  I could never get this done by myself because no one would respect me for my laziness. and the kids started to feel sorry for him so they told him about the traps and he was upset so he stormed  of angry and was never to be seen again. THE END. ]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848802 Bubble wants to make a friend 8045503 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848803 - About a bubble
- Wants to make friends
- Gets distracted by a dance party

Once upon a time there was a bubble named Bubble. She was cute, and small and acts very funny and silly when she dances. She wanted to make a friend, but she kept being distracted by a very loud, fun, dark and flashing lights dance party that was in a very nice Cloud Kingdom. The Cloud Kingdom was a great place to live because it had very lovely flowers and a very pretty castle (the castle was all white and it had flowers all over it). So Bubble thought she would find a friend in the dance party, so she went in. She saw a friend and went over to her. She was determined to not be distracted, and actually talk to this friend! Her friend was a sunflower who was beautiful (she had very colourful yellow peddles). Bubble asked her to be her friend. She said yes, and they were both best friends. 
The End!]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848803 Baby genius becomes good by Marko! https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848805 Story starters-baby genius, wants to change from a bad guy to a good guy, but the internet is unavailible. Once opan a time there was a baby genius named joey. He had a polka-dot hat, a blue shirt, and yellow pants. First Joey was a bad baby but wanted to be a good baby because he didn`t like it when his parents were mad at him. So he decided to read how to be a good baby. But he was a baby so he didn`t have a library card or any money. So he decided to read online. But when he went on the computer, the internet was unavailible. But he knew that his big brother`s school had a computer class. Next he had an idea! Joey would sneak into computer class in his big brother`s school to read on epic! He snuck past the baby-sitter lucy, and went out the door. Then when he was outside, Joey waited for the cars to stop, and then crossed. He went through the legs of the people walking, Saw the elementary school and went inside. Last]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848805 Rencille Saves the Day (Makayla) 7900431 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848809 Once upon a time there lived a scientist who worked in a tiny science lab near the falls.  She was tall and  muscular. She had a nice white jacket and wore glasses. She was kind and caring with a quiet voice.  Her name was Rencille.
Rencille used a tracking device to see if there were any animals in trouble.  The tracking device showed a little circle and she saw a puppy.  She had to zoom in on her tracking device so she looked closer and closer and she saw a big lady bug  taking away the puppy. she is going to make a poison  that opens the  sewers  shrinks the lady bug. ]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848809 Eoghan Saving The Village (Dindar) 879051 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848811 - a pirate
- wants to catch a tasmanian 🤬
- but his magic doesn't work

Once upon a time there was a pirate called Eoghan. Eoghan was a fully grown man with huge muscles and had yellow hair. Eoghan really wanted to catch a Tazmanian 🤬 because they kept sneaking into a nearby village and stealing all the food! 

Eoghan didn't know what to do. How was he going to catch it? He tried to get a wizard, the illustrious and all powerful Mr. G to help him, but the magic wand Mr. G sold him broke on Eoghan's first try casting the Tazmanian 🤬 catching spell. What was he going to do? he ask MR.G how me MR.G i want really strong magic MR.G now Eoghan really strong magic now Eoghan can catch tazmanian all tazmanian all. Die now all village is really happy of Eoghan]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848811 Baby Genius Becomes Good by Marko! 8140931 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848812 Story starters
-Baby genius
-wants to change from a bad guy to a good guy
-but the internet is unavailable.

Once upon a time, there was a baby named Joey. He had a polka-dot hat, yellow pants, and a blue shirt. He also sounded like a rabbit and smelt like a dandelion. First, Joey was a bad baby, but wanted to be a good baby because he didn't like it when his parents were mad at him. So Joey decided to read how to be a good baby. He was a baby so he didn't have a library card or any money. So he decided to read online. When Joey went on the computer, the internet was unavailable! He knew his big brother`s school had a computer class. He had an idea! He would sneak into the computer class in his big brother`s school to read on Epic! 

Joey sneaked past his babysitter Lucy, and went out the door. Then, when he was outside, Joey went through the legs of the people walking on the sidewalk. When he was crossing the road, he made sure that the cars weren't driving before he crossed. When he saw the elementary school, he didn't let the children coming in see him. Joey got to the entrance and went in. He crawled quietly through the halls. The janitor almost saw him, but he quickly hid behind a trash can. Before Joey went in front of the doors of the classrooms, he waited until the teachers stopped looking. Finally, Joey saw the clean computer class and went inside. Joey crawled under the desks of children so they couldn't see him. Then he saw an empty desk, and climbed onto it. He went on the computer, and read how to be a good baby. After that, he went home and he was never bad again.

]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848812 The Allergic Fairy (by Anniyah) 817956 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848816 - Character... is fairy
- Character wanted... to not be allergic  to fun
- Character is allergic to fun

Once upon a time there was a fairy named Sofi. She was sparkly, shiny, and smelled like strawberries. She had long pink hair with matching glitter in it. When she was a baby there was something that her parents wouldn't allow to do and that was having fun, because she was allergic to fun. Her parents tried to find a medicine, but then her parents noticed that none of the medicines in Fairy land would work! 

When it was the first day at school for Sofi she was really shy, scared, and nervous. She thought that nobody would like her because she was allergic to fun, and when she came in the classroom she was really shy, scared, and nervous. When she came in she saw some kids talking about her and she was sad. "I think that those kids are talking about me because I'm allergic to fun," said Sofi. 

When it was recess she had nothing to do, she could not even have fun because she was allergic to it, and all she could do is just sitting at the corner of the school and do nothing. Sofi was really bored. When Sofi came home she asked her parents, "Did you guys find any medicine that won't make me allergic to fun any more?"

Her parents said no. Sofi replied, "Let's go to the human world and get a medicine from there!" Sofi asked if she could go, but then her parents told her it was too dangerous.

Sofi went to her room. When her parents were asleep Sofi got ready to go to the human world. She packed everything that she needed in her backpack. Sofi was excited, but scared to go to the human world. In Sofi's house there was a teleporter. Sofi went in the teleporter. She made it go to the human world by typing 'human world' on the screen.

When Sofi was at the human world she did not know where to go, but she had put a compass in her bag. The compass showed Sofi where North, South, East, and West were. "Now the compass is telling me to go North" said Sofi, and then Sofi went North...

There was an earthquake! Well, it's really not a earthquake, because it was just a human walking, but to Sofi it's an earthquake because Sofi is just a fairy. Sofi tried to fly away, but then Sofi bumped in to a human. The human looked like a giant to Sofi. The human's name was Anniyah. She was in 3rd Grade and 8 years old.

Anniyah  thought that Sofi was a butterfly, so Anniyah got tweezers from her pocket and caught Sofi by her wings and put Sofi in a cage.  

Back at Sofi's house when it was morning, Sofi's mom  said, "Wake up sleepy head, you are going to be late for school. Sofi? Sofi wake up!" Sofi's mom checked if Sofi was in her room. Sofi's mom noticed she was missing, and then quickly got ready and went to the human world to find her daughter. Sofi's mom went in the teleporter and typed 'human world' on the screen and went to the human world. When Sofi's mom got there she was really worried Sofi got lost or something wrong happened to her. She was able to track Sofi down to the cage Anniyah had put her in! 

When Sofi's mom got Sofi out, they both sneakily got out of the room and went outside. Sofi's mom told Sofi what the plan was. "Sofi, I have a plan that we could use. First what we do is go to the doctor's office, get the medicine then go to the teleporter then go back to our fairy land, oh! and I forgot to tell you this" said Sofi's mom "what are you going to say mom" said Sofi "you are grounded" said Sofi's mom. "Oh well, I knew that you were going to say that mom" said Sofi.

"Hey, remember the plan sofi"? said Sofi's mom "oh yeah, I did" said sofi and they went on with there adventure. When they came at the doctor's office they both went  to shelves filled with medicine's, and they both started searching and searching and searching until Sofi found the right medicine for her. And then Sofi told her mom that she found the medicine, and then they both got out of the doctor's office and went back to the teleporter and then they both got back to the fairy land. When they got back home Sofi took the medicine and she was good again and also at school she made new friends the end.


]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848816 The small cookie 790167 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848817 Goowy the cookie 
wants to be big 
an epic water gun fight starts 

Once upon a time, there was a cookie named Goowy. Goowy was a small cookie and she hated that because she would get bullied for being so small. So one day Goowy made an oven that would make her bigger then every one she did' t care if she was being selfish or not she just wants to be big.But when someone shot water at the oven it all changed! Goowy was being shot from all corners and it wasn' t water at all it was milk! So she ran to get her umbrella but in the panic, she dropped it. Goowy was soaked in milk from head to toe. So one-day Goowy made a laser oven and went inside the oven was dirty like someone was there before but no one was it was a shiny silver oven. On the inside, it was a trashy dirty oven. Goowy didn't care if anyone told her no don't do it she did it anyway. It was hot but Goowy didn't care at all. So she set the oven temperature to 50 degrees. When she came out everyone was scared of her the cookie s that once bullied her are now scared half to death. But they wanted to be big to so they all jumped in the oven and set it to 1000 degrees. So the oven exploded! All the cookies were now crumbs all because of Goowy. The end.]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848817 The Catapult (Surya) 801467 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848818 - A super hero or super villain called Super Stink Boy
- Wants to build a catapult
- But his minions quit
 
 Once a upon a time there was a super villain called Super Stink Boy. He wanted to build a catapult in Jump City to destroy Surya and Abdullah's awesome, epic mansion. The mansion had a flat screen TV, Xbox, PS3, PS4 and a Lamborghini. However, before the attack could happen the Super Stink Boy’s minions quit! Now he could not destroy the mansion.

 Super Stink Boy dressed up as a magician to trick the minions and to get them back. It worked! They tried, but could not destroy the mansion because the boys had Killer Robots to defend it. These Killer Robots fought everyone with tea, soda and coffee! The Killer Robots then went out of control and began dumping tea and coffee over everybody! Super Stink Boy escaped and flew away. He went to a Yoga School in India and meditated. He then started doing good things and became a super hero. He wanted to become a great and good leader to bring all the countries and people together. He worked hard on being elected as the President and Prime Minister of every country, and he became the leader of the world! He then got all the army forces to fight the now-evil Killer Robots and saved the world.
  
The End
 

]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848818 Mohammed's Story 906932 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848819  
- Blob of goo
- To save the world
- Doesn't have the right change of clothes

Once upon a time there was a blob of goo named Messi. He really wanted to save the world and play on a soccer team in the World Cup. A new, evil team was in the World Cup this year... it was a team of teachers! If they won, the World would be taken over by teachers and everyone would be forced to do extra Math homework! He was a really good soccer player (for a piece of goo), but he didn't have the right clothes to wear! 

Messi went home and changed into the right clothes to wear. He was now ready to save the world! His team went to the finals, and the played the teachers. His team won! He scored ten goals (the game was not even close). The world was saved from lots of extra homework! 
]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848819 The dragon who wants to bend water. character a dragon. Problem his water powers don't work. He wants to bend water. 785987 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848820  The story is a dragon wants to bend water his water powers are broken. Once there was a dragon who Had the strongest water powers in all of the world.he all of sudden lost his water powers. His plan was to bend water if he did he would get his water powers back as well. So he found an ocean so he tried but it did not work. because it needed to be salt water. So looked over islands trying to find salt water. It took days months years until he found it. it was a salt water ocean. So he hovered over the ocean. He went into the ocean. but nothing happened.but it finally worked. so he started to breathe water. The ocean shook it had huge waves. But then he finally bent water. the water waves got bigger there were more waves than imaginal. So he was bored so he went to look for the person who stopped his powers. He looked at a magical ball that he could see the future so he went to the city. until he found him his name was Abdullah Abdullah he took my powers the dragon told himself. he said I took your powers I will destroy you he said I will banish you from the world so they had a war. It went on for months until he finally destroyed him. He banished him to dragon island. He let all of the dragons get revenge. So they had their payback /revenge and they realize after a while he broke out of the elemental cage he took over the earth so they went over to earth to destroy him they saved the whole world with his dragon friends. They had a big party to celebrate the victory over Abdullah Abdullah if you are wondering what happened to him the blasted him off into the galaxy. THE END]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848820 Marshy the marshmallow (rencille) https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848821 Marshy is a cute little marshmallow she  like a baby or sweet. Marshy try's to hard to do things she can't do. Marshy want to bake a cake but her plans never work out right that is why her plans never work out right and a mean Kylah is trying to make the cake be bad and eat Marshy!!! Kylah and Marshy have plans to get each other.Marshy made a little home to get her defense from Kylah.Kylah was plan when marshy was sleeping was seting up salt trap.One night Kylah was all done then she fell in her own trap(yay!!).Slat fell all over her body. In her mind she said if it is going to go like so Kylah stoped and went to the store and got some sweet marshmallows to not living one and a good ever after the end


]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848821 The Great Alien Escape 874784 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848822 A alien that wants to travel to a new planet but a grumpy alligator

Once upon a time, a very small and tiny, but very smart alien named spike decided to run off and find a new home. Specifically, somewhere he belonged, somewhere he felt at home. Spike had moved to various planets no of which he liked. He was always the weird one, the kid who no one played with. Finally, spike decided to give one more try, live on one more planet. However, the very grumpy alligator named Gregory had other plans. He wiped long and pointy tail up into the air and knocked the UFO down onto the ground. Spike began to cry wondering if he could ever get somewhere he could call home. However Gregory was not affected by this at all, in fact, he began to laugh. Suddenly Spike, stopped crying but why? Spike had realised that he was going to make it he just had to find a different way. He went to the dump and collected every piece of metal he could find. He built his own rocket! Gregory was shocked. How could such a small weird alien create something so amazing in a matter of hours? “ I could build something bigger and way more cool than that”. He went to the dump and collected as much metal as possible he tried and tried but he was no match for spike, he did not know anything about building rockets. Finally, Spike was able to leave, he looked and looked and finally found the perfect place. Once he landed he decided to look around. He walked and finally, he found something….., more like someone. He looked at this person, thing, alien. He looked exactly like him, no green skin, no eyes above his head. It was a human. Turns out he wasn't an alien at all he was a human, he wasn't weird he just wasn't in the right place. But now he is, and he is going to take every chance at being himself that he can.THE END 




]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848822 809470 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848824 Once upon a time, there was a shark named Adam. He was thinking of what to do on this beautiful day. It is so sunny it feels just awesome, but he has some differences from another type of Once upon a time, there was a shark named Adam. He was thinking of what to do on this beautiful day. It is so sunny it feels just awesome, but he has some differences from another type of fish. Adam looks big and acts like a maniac, but he's nice. Adam looks big and acts like a maniac, but he's nice. Adam  smells pretty fishy. He was  differences from another type of fish. Adam looks big and acts like a maniac, but he's nice. Adam sounds like a big WWE wrestler and smells pretty fishy. He was about to relax, but suddenly he got stuck to the ground, so he tried to get up from the floor. He tried and tried and t to do on this beautiful day. It is so sunny it feels just awesome, but he has some differences from another type of fish. Adam looks big and acts like a maniac, but he's nice. Adam sounds like a big WWE wrestler and smells pretty fishy. He was abotried, but he couldn't get up. So he found some crabs that could help him, but the good thing is that gravity does not affect the crabs. He got out, but the crabs had to drag him across to his lab, but he was so heavy. The crabs called more and more crabs to help drag him across to the lab, but before they helped him, they put him in a small tank, as he could not breathe on land. Then, they got to the laboratory, and he started to do some research of all the worst fish who would make the gravity stronger. It was Yasser the octopus! The crabs were going on an adventure now to find Yasser. Let's search the city! It was hard as they had to stay undercover because the crabs and the shark were in a small tank, and it would be too obvious. What does that say “octopus headquarters quarter”. “We found Yasser the octopus. Yeah, let's go in because we need to stay cover.”. “Let’s split up into small groups, you go right, you go left, you will go forward, and everybody else is coming with me.” After a while, they could not find him. After they went to the top floor together and they found Yasser. He was planning something but there was a paper in a drawer that had looked important because he put a lock on it. After a lot of pulling and punching, we managed to break the lock that said: “Strong Gravity Forever”. The octopus came back and saw the crab and the shark. “Well well well, looks like you figured out my code, what are you going to do now?” “We have crabs and there are a lot of them behind us. The crabs are going to beat you up with their pin sirs.” “Pinch pinch pinch pinch.” The octopus had no chance of winning, so they took Yasser the octopus to jail and they got a worker to fix the gravity, so they went back into the water and said goodbye to each other. So after all, the shark did have a very lazy. The End.]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848824 Hajile's Test (Elijah) markgiraldi https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848825      Once upon a time there was a crazy student named Hajile who went to Cashmere Avenue. Hajile was a big, strong Grade 5 boy who was always annoying his teacher. His teacher’s name was Mr. Auston! Mr. Auston was a pretty mean teacher, and on purpose he picked the hardest questions to give to Hajile. He really wanted Hajile to fail.
 
     It’s summertime, and Hajile is still in school because Mr. Auston forced him to do a lot of extra work, including a crazy Science, Math, Language, Drama and Phys. Ed test all rolled into one! Hajile doesn’t do well on the test. It’s not his fault, because a Science, Math, Language, Drama and Phys. Ed test isn’t supposed to be a thing for kids to do! Mr. Auston is really mean though, and he doesn’t care. Hajile bursts out of the classroom, and runs down the hallway. He was really mad! 
 
     Hajile was feeling pretty bad, but then he ran into someone awesome! He ran into an amazing male teacher named Mr. B Knight! Mr. B Knight was liked by all the kids because he was strong and kind. A little known fact was that Mr. B Knight was also a magician. He knew magic that could make Hajile complete even the most difficult of tests. He waved his arms, and then said “Abracadabra, please let Hajile finish his work for the absolutely crazy Mr. Auston!”
 
     Hajile felt something weird happen. His brain was growing! It grew two times its size! Hajile returned to Mr. Auston’s class, and demanded to take the test again. He was ready! He completes the test in only 5 minutes. Mr. Auston was so surprised that he quit his job. Mr. B Knight became Hajile’s fulltime teacher afterwards, and twenty years later, Hajile was even teaching alongside Mr. B Knight at Cashmere Avenue.
 
The end!
]]> 2018-12-12 14:32:07 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313848825 929082 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313880953 2018-12-12 15:26:53 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/313880953 The Catapult (Surya) 801467 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/314265137 A super hr villain called hero or super Super Stink Boy
 - Wants to build a catapult
 - But his minions quit
 
 Once a upon a time there was a super villain called Super Stink Boy. He wanted to build a catapult in Jump City to destroy Surya's and Abdullah's awesome, epic mansion. The mansion had a flat screen TV, Xbox, PS3, PS4 and a Lamborghini. However, before the attack the Super Stink Boy’s Minions quit so he could not destroy the mansion. Super Stink Boy dressed up as a magician to trick the minions and to get them back. It worked! They tried, but could not destroy the mansion because the boys had  Killer Robots. This Killer Robot fought everyone with tea, soda and coffee! Super Stink Boy escaped and flew away. He went to a Yoga School in India and meditated. He then started doing good things and became a super hero. He wanted to become a great and good leader to bring all the countries and people together. He worked hard on being elected as the President and Prime Minister of every country, and he became the leader of the world!
He got all the army forces to fight the Killer Robots and saved the world.
  
The End
 

]]> 2018-12-13 14:39:51 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/314265137 The dragon and the sunflower 7943722 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/314267287 One day a little sunflower had an idea.She thought she could make disco clothes fashionable again,but she dosen't know how.Suddenly  pirates came Sunny the sunflower started to panic .Sunny ran and ran when the pirates cought her they discoverd she's magical."Help! help"! said Sunny.The pirates had a deal.If you make us rich we well help you make disco clothes fashionable.Sunny agreed, the  pirates                 took her to the ship.Sunny span around three times .Suddenly gold! The pirates gave her material. One day a storm came."ROAR"DRAGON"! The dragon broke the ship and grabbed Sunny."Noooo!" yelled the captain.The dragon took Sunny to her den. The dragon told Sunny that the pirates are bad.Sunny asked what your name?"Emerald"."Can you help me?,"said Sunny."With what"?said Emerald." I want to make disco clothes fashionable again".Ok, i'll be happy to help.Emerald gave some ideas."What if you show your work to a celebearty if they like it ask to tell others"."Ok"
"It worked.


THE END!]]> 2018-12-13 14:43:14 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/314267287 The Shark and the Crab's Adventure 809470 https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/314488607 -Shark wants to have a lazy day
-Gravity got so much stronger
-Crabs help him

Once upon a time, there was a shark named Adam. He was thinking of what to do on this beautiful day. It is so sunny it feels just awesome, but he has some differences from another type of fish. Adam looks big and acts like a maniac, but he's nice. Adam sounds like a big WWE wrestler and smells pretty fishy. He was about to relax, but suddenly he got stuck to the ground, so he tried to get up from the floor. He tried and tried and tried, but he couldn't get up. So he found some crabs that could help him, but the good thing is that gravity does not affect the crabs. He got out, but the crabs had to drag him across to his lab, but he was so heavy. The crabs called more and more crabs to help drag him across to the lab, but before they helped him, they put him in a small tank, as he could not breathe on land. Then, they got to the laboratory, and he started to do some research of all the worst fish who would make the gravity stronger. It was Yasser the octopus! The crabs were going on an adventure now to find Yasser. Let's search the city! It was hard as they had to stay undercover because the crabs and the shark were in a small tank, and it would be too obvious. What does that say “octopus headquarters quarter”. “We found Yasser the octopus. Yeah, let's go in because we need to stay cover.”. “Let’s split up into small groups, you go right, you go left, you will go forward, and everybody else is coming with me.” After a while, they could not find him. After they went to the top floor together and they found Yasser. He was planning something but there was a paper in a drawer that had looked important because he put a lock on it. After a lot of pulling and punching, we managed to break the lock that said: “Strong Gravity Forever”. The octopus came back and saw the crab and the shark. “Well well well, looks like you figured out my code, what are you going to do now?” “We have crabs and there are a lot of them behind us. The crabs are going to beat you up with their pin sirs.” “Pinch pinch pinch pinch.” The octopus had no chance of winning, so they took Yasser the octopus to jail and they got a worker to fix the gravity, so they went back into the water and said goodbye to each other. So after all, the shark did have a very lazy. The End.]]> 2018-12-13 22:14:54 UTC https://padlet.com/markgiraldi/narrativefinal2018/wish/314488607