https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb Please leave a detailed response for Araceli in response to her presentation! en-us 2017-04-03 18:18:32 UTC 2018-04-09 12:44:58 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164442522 The story was filled with content, and seemed to be pieced together very well. A]]> 2017-04-03 18:34:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164442522 maddiehrrs https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164442790 The story was well written, and I liked that it showed that she definitely took something away from the book. The format was good, and well organized and you could tell that she took time in polishing her story.]]> 2017-04-03 18:35:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164442790 https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164442793 Since it is one of the most creative selections, it being the story, it was already really creative. But the writing introduced a larger layer of creativity. ]]> 2017-04-03 18:35:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164442793 https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164443153 The story was well written and tied the object into the story very well, didn't feel clunky . A]]> 2017-04-03 18:36:13 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164443153 https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164443369 Fairly nice, there was a balance between formal and non formal , for this category I'd say a high B ]]> 2017-04-03 18:36:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164443369 https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164443658 Well polished, flowed well, A ]]> 2017-04-03 18:37:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164443658 https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164444591 Seems well written. There is character development so the story is not boring. There's a nice flow. Interesting character.]]> 2017-04-03 18:39:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164444591 https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164444644 Well written, well thought out. The character has a good background and I like the story. Really good ]]> 2017-04-03 18:39:59 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164444644 https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164446446 The writing was excellent, definitely can tell it wasn't last minut. The character is semi relatable with high school problems, which pretty much we all have giving the readers us a better connection, the story of his tragic end also is sad, but also joyous knowing he died for a good and reasonable cause, that his family still looks up to him today. AAAAAAAA++++++]]> 2017-04-03 18:45:22 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164446446 https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164447821 Well written, followed great and well thought out story ]]> 2017-04-03 18:49:02 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164447821 https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164447939 Her story didn't name it NYC. Sense but I liked the plot nonetheless. ]]> 2017-04-03 18:49:22 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164447939 https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164451195 Araceli's story was different by the background of the main character. I was not expecting him to die and I liked how the family felt like he was a protector even though he was killing innocent men. Also, I liked how you made up the war instead of doing the Vietnam war. ]]> 2017-04-03 18:57:22 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164451195 https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164451515 Story was well written and it was intriguing because it was very different from anything else I saw in the book and in other projects, but she was somehow still able to tie it in to the theme of the project. Overall I thought it was beautiful, marvelous, magnificent. ]]> 2017-04-03 18:58:18 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164451515 https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164455179 I really enjoyed how she read her story, it kept me interested. Also I enjoyed her summarization of the story. I also enjoyed how ]]> 2017-04-03 19:10:28 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164455179 https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164457070 Your story was really interesting and unique. I like how it showed the emotional issues soldiers go through. You explained the story well and I like how the item was used in the story. ]]> 2017-04-03 19:18:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/b1f4usi07pqb/wish/164457070