BLOCK 1B: Project Big Picture- Infographic Peer Review by Ryan Rahmiller https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw MadeI can demonstrate RESPONSIBILITY! Peer feedback should be KIND, SPECIFIC, and HELPFUL! Use the attached sentence starters to leave critiques. Format: What is working? (1 celebration/positive) What needs some work? (could be a question OR a suggestion) with magic en-us 2020-12-10 14:01:37 UTC 2026-03-16 19:38:33 UTC hello@padlet.com Sentence Starters rrahmil https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006122195 2020-12-10 14:03:46 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006122195 rrahmil https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006124996 2020-12-10 14:04:23 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006124996 rrahmil https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006127004 2020-12-10 14:04:49 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006127004 What really impressed me was the colors, and the pictures. they all go great with each other. One thing I suggest is make some of your text color black so it stands out more. gallucar https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006363374 2020-12-10 14:53:57 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006363374 You did a superior job on adding the little backgrounds in the blue with the fire and Tobacco Leaf. Did you consider making your resources pop out some more by adding a dark background caroltre https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006364960 2020-12-10 14:54:17 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006364960 You did a good job and I personally like all the colors you did to help it draw to people but did u ever consider making the text a little easier to read? https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006374577 2020-12-10 14:56:15 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006374577 Excellent job on setting the pictures and sentences up great job on that. I was wondering if you would put your websites on there caroltre https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006378813 2020-12-10 14:57:10 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006378813 I really like everything, everything blends well together, thompluc https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006410194 2020-12-10 15:03:57 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006410194 I like the color scheme but the white text doesn't go well with the background. I can barely read it, But I do like that you tried putting a pop of color into so its not so dull. thompluc https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006420031 2020-12-10 15:05:57 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006420031 gallucar https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006797397 2020-12-10 16:22:40 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006797397 Excellent job on the Questions and sources numbering caroltre https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006807303 One Suggestion is take the Answers on the question because the reader should know it ]]> 2020-12-10 16:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006807303 graesale https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006957144 2020-12-10 16:54:27 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1006957144 Mr. Rahmiller rrahmil https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1007485007 What really impressed me was your thoroughness of your information.Don't forget to capitalize the first word in each section title and spell check the document! ]]> 2020-12-10 18:41:56 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1007485007 Mr. Rahmiller rrahmil https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1009930942 The best part of your infographic is your color scheme! Don't forget to add graphics or pictures to this that will draw the eye.]]> 2020-12-11 14:55:05 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1009930942 Emerson bohleeme https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1009933718 I am really impressed with the pictures you have! One suggestion I have is to add some different colors. ]]> 2020-12-11 14:55:45 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1009933718 Xander graesale https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1009937121 I really enjoyed the layout great job! one suggestion is at the bottom you have some room so you could maybe add something or expand your text a little bit. ]]> 2020-12-11 14:56:33 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1009937121 Kylie V https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1009938238 You did an excellent job on getting a lot of information!! One thing you could fix or add to your infographic is more pictures because I also think pictures help decribe too!]]> 2020-12-11 14:56:49 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1009938238 Danica dejondan https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1009943617 I really like that first picture along with the text for title. one thing i would say is too make a color scheme for your info graphic. so everything goes together. ]]> 2020-12-11 14:58:07 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1009943617 Xander graesale https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1010014344 This is great in ways that you answered the three questions, and the amount of pictures you used great job! One thing I suggest is the box that talks about how history would be different change the color of the text or a darker background because the white blends into it a little bit. The way you could do this is by changing the transparency of the picture. ]]> 2020-12-11 15:14:37 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1010014344 payton hadlepay https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1010020635 I love how you have a lot of great pictures. One thing that you could do is fade some of your pictures because its kinda hard to see the text.]]> 2020-12-11 15:16:10 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1010020635 Xander Graeser graesale https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1010022754 You did a really good job on where you put the questions and you labeled the questions. One thing I suggest is that where you have the blue back ground bring the words to the front more and push the picture back you can do this by two finger clicking on the background and clicking push back. ]]> 2020-12-11 15:16:40 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1010022754 Carson gallucar https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1010299607 great work on using the same colors throughout the whole infographic. Think about adding some more picture! ]]> 2020-12-11 16:20:15 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1010299607 Klaire Kirby KlaireKirby https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1010304297 Your format choices are phenomenal! I suggest bringing in some of the other colors from the picture. Maybe you could add more visuals such as pictures, graphs, etc.]]> 2020-12-11 16:21:19 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1010304297 Klaire Kirby KlaireKirby https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1010755698 I really liked how you put individual paragraphs specifically for the questions! I would try adding some other color to make it pop! You could try changing the background, the text, etc!]]> 2020-12-11 18:01:23 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1010755698 Klaire Kirby KlaireKirby https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1011768093 I loved your choice of pictures! I think they go together very nicely. I suggest changing the color of the numbers, I dont think they match to the color pallet]]> 2020-12-12 01:22:47 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1011768093 Klaire Kirby KlaireKirby https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1011769774 I love how the organ trail game picture really draws the eye! I think you should change some of the text to match, it would help to even it out.]]> 2020-12-12 01:24:57 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1011769774 caroltre https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1016299904 2020-12-14 15:24:29 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1016299904 KlaireKirby https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1018299723 2020-12-15 00:03:13 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1018299723 Klaire Kirby KlaireKirby https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1020214472 I love how the pictures contrast! Two of them are green and bright colored and the others are black and white! I suggest adding some sort of number or graph to break up the big opening paragraph, to add more visuals! ]]> 2020-12-15 14:58:35 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1020214472 Klaire Kirby KlaireKirby https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1020223513 You did a fantastic job with your color choices! I think they go together very nicely! I suggest fixing the text or background color because some of the text is harder to read because of the light blue background and white text!]]> 2020-12-15 15:00:25 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1020223513 https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1020504270 2020-12-15 15:54:36 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1020504270 Mr. Rahmiller rrahmil https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1020568828 The graphic you found in the background sets yours apart from any others. ]]> 2020-12-15 16:06:53 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1020568828 Emerson bohleeme https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1020584570 2020-12-15 16:09:46 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1020584570 https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1021646763 2020-12-15 19:39:09 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1021646763 https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1021922342 2020-12-15 20:54:42 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1021922342 Saint-Pierre- I really liked the pictures you choose to use and the overall template. I think you should of continued with the black and white because of of the pictures and fonts don't math https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1021971385 2020-12-15 21:10:10 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1021971385 loftukay https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1024258707 2020-12-16 15:12:33 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1024258707 Trevor Carolan caroltre https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1024264377 What Really impressed me was that you didn't put much pictures on it One thing you could fix is maby put a little bigger font size.]]> 2020-12-16 15:13:44 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1024264377 Trevor caroltre https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1024308109 What Really impressed me was how you found that template really cool. One thing is make that Declaration of Independence a little bigger]]> 2020-12-16 15:22:29 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1024308109 Trevor caroltre https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1024317289 What really impressed me was that it is very readable Dont forget your other 2 questions]]> 2020-12-16 15:24:26 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1024317289 Trevor caroltre https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1024325918 I really like your template good choice]]> 2020-12-16 15:26:18 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1024325918 Trevor caroltre https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1027948535 I was really impressed with the layout Maybe next time you could put some sort of background]]> 2020-12-17 14:55:35 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1027948535 Christopher Columbus thompluc https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1028072570 2020-12-17 15:23:57 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1028072570 Kaylee Loftus loftukay https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1028089075 2020-12-17 15:27:37 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1028089075 Kylie Vance https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1030355027 Nice job with the color choices and picture choices. Something that you could fix is try to make it not so busy.]]> 2020-12-18 05:19:32 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1030355027 bohleeme https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1038659348 2020-12-22 19:18:21 UTC https://padlet.com/rrahmil/b15znqen8y0dkhqw/wish/1038659348