Per 3 - Thoughts Regarding IA Overview, Timeline, and Sample IA Proposal by Seamus Shalman

2023-12-20 21:06:23 UTC

Well thought out, concise yet clearly understands what they want to research

Things

gblaney3375 — 2023-12-20 21:06:34 UTC

Its very well written with lots of details about exactly what is happening and when. The details with exact amounts for everything

Somewhat simple procedure listed out very thoroughly

2023-12-20 21:06:59 UTC

How likely is it that you will have to use the backup idea

2023-12-20 21:07:03 UTC

the procedure is extremely detailed and specific, there is no vagueness

2023-12-20 21:07:09 UTC

well thought out Procedure

2023-12-20 21:07:19 UTC

2023-12-20 21:07:27 UTC

clear procedure and description/sketch of procedure

The author cites a source that is sponsered by big milk.

2023-12-20 21:07:41 UTC

2023-12-20 21:07:59 UTC

The procedure is easy to follow and thorough.

2023-12-20 21:08:04 UTC

contamination of samples, cold/warm temperatures in impacting enzyme

how are they collecting zero-day aged milk?

2023-12-20 21:08:13 UTC

Controlling for the temperature

2023-12-20 21:08:18 UTC

2023-12-20 21:09:14 UTC

Units were expressed clearly for almost all the variables, with uncertainty

this seems pretty attainable, especially if you can find a pre-existing lab relating to your RQ, that you can tweak a bit

2023-12-20 21:09:24 UTC

Everything is well thought out. Every detail is explained all the way down to the quantity of each control, and container they are put into

2023-12-20 21:09:25 UTC

Will Mr. Shalman give a predicted score

2023-12-20 21:09:33 UTC

The sample is confidently worded

2023-12-20 21:09:56 UTC

I feel calmed and soothed and not stressed

2023-12-20 21:10:18 UTC

2023-12-20 21:10:27 UTC

Might have trouble obtaining milk that hasn't been aged at all. How will they account for the fact that the milk has been in the fridge for a week by the time day zero rolls around?

Clarification

2023-12-20 21:10:37 UTC

Is light consensual murder allowed... For Science

I think this is manageable given the amount of time we have.

2023-12-20 21:10:59 UTC

Template

2023-12-20 21:11:43 UTC

Will there be a template for a proposal

I fear big milk

2023-12-20 21:11:45 UTC

2023-12-20 21:11:47 UTC

The amount of little things that it is broken into makes it seem better

2023-12-20 21:12:05 UTC

I feel better about the IA after today, but there is a lot we have to do before march. Not sure how I'm gonna pick a topic

glad to be ahead of the game in terms of choosing our experiments

gmendenhall0033 — 2023-12-20 21:12:06 UTC

2023-12-20 21:12:25 UTC

The procedure is very specific

2023-12-20 21:13:23 UTC

Very manageable deadline. I don't really like all of the mini deadlines but it should be fine

It's concise and walks through the experiment well

2024-01-02 20:55:58 UTC

2024-01-02 20:56:48 UTC

I like the diagram for the experimental proposal

2024-01-02 20:58:19 UTC

I worry about falling behind one deadline and then ending up missing all the point marks