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]]> 2023-09-22 05:15:14 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2715785421 https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723953015 The boys were dumbfounded as the black and white football soared through the air and knocked the vase over, causing the glass to shatter into a million tiny glass pieces. Their eyes widened like saucers and their jaws dropped as they realised the amount of trouble they were going to be in. They had broken their mother’s beloved vintage vase which costs an arm and a leg, it was also their grandmother’s last gift to her before she passed away tragically. Their mother treasured it dearly and did not let anyone go near it, and now it had just been broken by her own children. “We’re dead,” John, the boy that kicked the ball, whispered to his brother, Max. They knew their mother was going to be fuming mad with them the moment she saw the broken vase.]]> 2023-09-28 01:25:17 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723953015 https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723953964 Kicking the shiny ball that was bought yesterday, I swung my leg with full force. “Catch this if you can!” I hollered. We were at the living room, practicing our trick shots. Unfortunately, I missed my friend by a mile! What happened next made us stand rooted to the ground. I was paralysed with fear when it was headed to the glistening vase that was my mother’s cherished favourite.With panic engulfed in me, the vase shattered into smithereens and deafening sound reverberated though the room. “ What have you done?” My friend questioned me with a frown on his face.

]]> 2023-09-28 01:26:29 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723953964 https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723954721 Bob had a wide grin beamed across his face as he kicked the ball with full force towards Daniel. Little did he know, he had accidentally kicked it towards his Moms favourite vase! *BANG!*Daniel eyes gleamed wide with fear as the vase broke into a million pieces. When their Mum heard the ear piercing crash she burst out of her bedroom as fast as a cheetah, when she saw what had happened anger coursed through her veins and reprimanded them for their foolish behaviour.]]> 2023-09-28 01:27:28 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723954721 https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723955325 “Ball incoming!” Johnny squealed in excitement as he kicked the ball with great force. Tommy’s heart missed a beat as he saw the football heading towards their Mothers new ancient glass vase.To my horror, the glass vase dropped on the ground and shattered into a million pieces .seeing the scene in front of  him, he’s face turned pale with fear and he stood rooted to the ground and the sight robbed him from saying any words.” Johnny!” Tommy shouted fume in his eyes. Seeing the million pieces of glass on the floor, the two boys had a mixture of guilt and sadness as they broke out in cold sweat. They thought of what would happen when their mother found out that they broke her ancient glass vase.They could imagine their mother’s face Turning into ominous red.]]> 2023-09-28 01:28:17 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723955325 https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723956101 Kicking intensely, me and my brother  , John were in an epic fight! Showing off our football skills, we were competing fiercely! Just then , John kicked immensely far as if it was going to the other end of the house. Panic engulfed in me.   anxiety overwhelmed me as I thought to myself will it hit something ?Thump!  Both of us eyes were widening in shock. Realisation hit me and John like a twenty pound sledgehammer. Turning my head around, I dare not face the reality. I came face to face with  the broken vase that had shattered into million pieces. Worried was written all over my face , we could not face the music of our parent’s tongue-lashing and berate. We had broken my mother’s most precious and valuable vase! Guilt washed over us .  I could imagine how furious my mother , boiling in rage her face Turning an ominous red Predicting that a storm was brewing , we knew that we are in deep trouble.]]> 2023-09-28 01:29:20 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723956101 https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723956538 “Hahaha!” My maniacal brother giggled as he kicked the big round soccer ball. My face turned pale with fear as I stood rooted to the ground petrified with fear. Seconds felt like hours as I saw the ball heading towards my mother’s favourite vase as fast as the wind. “Crash!” A loud sound reverberated through the air as it hit the vase. Oh no! I am dead meat! I thought to myself. I broke out in a cold sweat as I saw my mother boiling with rage, she was gripping onto a slipper……]]> 2023-09-28 01:29:56 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723956538 https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723956549 “Take that!”Tom said to his brother, John. They both played fiercely as they showed off their soccer skill's. “Crash!” Mother’s favourite vase shattered into  a million of pieces as Tom and John stared in horror as the shadow of their mother could be seen.]]> 2023-09-28 01:29:56 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723956549 https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723956904 I swung my foot, kicking the soccer ball with all my might. “Swish!” The sound echoed throughout the living room. an eerie silence echoed throughout the air that seemed to have filled all the gaps in between the empty household .  This was not good. The soccer ball has hit mother’s favourite vase and it shattered, looking like  irregular jigsaw puzzle piece .  I stood there , mouth agape.” This looks like a crime scene! Mother will surely punish me when she gets back from the supermarket ! Mark , this is all your fault! You should have blocked the ball!” I shrieked at my younger brother who shrunk back in my rage. I bent down , my heart thumping heavily against my ribcage as I tried to pick up the pieces of the vase , a mix of guilt coarsing through my veins when I saw a silhouette towering over me… the person looked oddly familar, he or she was clad in a navy blue shirt , with a furious expression plastered on the persons face. It was mother! Upon seeing her , my face turned a ghastly pale. This day could not get any worse!]]> 2023-09-28 01:30:21 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723956904 https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723956934 “Catch this!”Jimmy exclaimed gleefully, kicking the soccer ball to his brother, John. John caught it and kicked it back. it flew straight and fast towards the vase on the table. their eyes gleamed with horror, not knowing what to do. By the time they realise it, the soccer ball had hit the vase and it wobbled. they rushed to catch it but to no avail. Crash! The vase shattered into smithereens. Their hearts pounded like a jackhammer in their rib cage. Oh no! That was Mother’s favourite vase. They stood transfixed to the ground, petrified with fear. The figure of their mother appeared in their mind, making their blood run cold. If looks could kill, they would have died there and then at the thought of their mother’s raging face. Knowing that a storm is brewing, they scooted off into the room and shut the door, not forgetting to lock it.]]> 2023-09-28 01:30:23 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723956934 https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723957032 Lester and Tom squealed in delight as their mother went out to buy groceries. Without their mother knowing, they sneakily played soccer inside their house. Lester shouted, a wide beam across his face,” Pass me the ball!” Before Lester could react, the ball flew across his head and smashed onto their mother’s  favourite glass vase. Tom’s face turned pale with fear and Lester’s eyes gleamed in horror. “Oh no! What are we supposed to do?”]]> 2023-09-28 01:30:30 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723957032 https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723959385    A wide grin beamed across our face. We were playing with our soccer ball at home. Just then, Tom accidentally kick the ball too fast and it swerved right across my face. From the corner of my eye, I noticed the flower pot in the distance where the bal is going to. Realisation dawned upon me as I realised that the ball is going to hit the flower pot Grandma gave mother “ oh no !” I hollered .The look of happiness instantly vanish into a ghastly whiteness . If the ball crashes into the pot mother is going to scold us!]]> 2023-09-28 01:33:37 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723959385 https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723961601 “Click“Closing the door,Mother and Father left home. Tom and I grinned like a Cheshire cat .I thought. Yes! we can finally play football.I kicked the football as hard as I could , hoping Tom, the goalkeeper of the game could not catch it .All I knew happened where a strong breeze blew the hair off my face and blown the ball to hit mother’s favourite flower vase.  I remember seeing Tom’s smile fading into a worried face.“Crash!” The vase shattered into smithereens.”Oh no ,that is mother’s favourite vase.”Tom and I started to break out in cold sweat.]]> 2023-09-28 01:36:53 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723961601 https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723963006 Timmy and  bob were having a whale of a time while playing football.all of a sudden , bob kicked the ball too hard and the ball flew towards the vase on the coffee table.at that time,mum was not home ,the boys petrified with fear as  the glass shattered into a million pieces .There was a loud crash, that was  as loud as thunder. The thought of mum made their heart miss a beat. They were in big trouble.
 

]]> 2023-09-28 01:38:49 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723963006 https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723963977               “Let’s play soccer in the living room! I’ll be the goal keeper and you’ll be the striker,” I suggested. It was a mundane morning as our parents had went out to run errands. We were stuck at home with nothing to do, as such I had suggested that we play soccer to my brother, John. As we kicked the soccer ball along the smooth floors of the living room we squealed with joy for something new to do at home. Before long, we had played for an hour, and decide to switch sides. Swiftly I put my leg on the bouncy ball. Quickly, I kicked the ball towards my brother. We could not bear to look as the ball flew towards the million dollar ceramic vase. Soon, as the ball crashed against the vase, we screamed in horror. 
https://padlet.com/dzaariny_koloos/compo-show-not-tell-azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2715785421]]> 2023-09-28 01:40:03 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723963977 https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723964496 Just when I was about to kick the ball, my brother somehow managed to dodge the ball and  it flew away and knocked down  my mother’s precious vase. “CRASH!” The vase landed with a loud crash and the vase shattered into a million pieces. My brother and I thought about my mother’s advice about not playing football in the house. Thinking about the cane landing on the me and my brother’s plams,me and me brother broke out into a cold sweat.Guilt was written all over our faces.I heard my mother’s foot steps coming closer to the door we frantically ran to our room and hid from our mother. “ we are doomed!”]]> 2023-09-28 01:40:43 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723964496 https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723965053 It was a beautiful day John decided to go to his best friend Max’s house to play a fun game of football they decided to play at the living room little did they know it was a bad idea as the ball went towards Max’s mom’s favourite diamond vase their faces turned to a look of horror as glass shattered into a million pieces across the  floor, John and Max’s faces turned pale and both were immobilised with fear, heartbeats thumped rapidly like a galloping horse, eyes gleamed wide with fear.]]> 2023-09-28 01:41:27 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723965053 https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723965107    “Swoosh!” James kicked the ball with such force that it flew high into air towards his brother, Jack. James was playing his dark blue soccer ball at home with his brother, despite many reminders .”Thud!” Jack skilfully stopped the ball with his foot. The ball obediently stopped in front of Jack before flying through the air again. But this time, the ball had a different target - Mother’s favourite vase! “Crash!” Mother’s vase with beautiful intricate designs shattered to smithereens. The two boys were paralysed with fear as the truth dawned on them.]]> 2023-09-28 01:41:30 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723965107 https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723965992 “Take this!”Alan shout as the ball charged at John like a bullet. John tried to kicked it forcefully back to Alan but he missed and the footballl bounced off the wall and charged at mother’s favourite vase given from their grandmother. It was as old as time. And in an instant , the ball collided into the vase as it shattered  into  a million pieces]]> 2023-09-28 01:42:37 UTC https://padlet.com/dzaariny1/azx9g08yyacxgkck/wish/2723965992