Shooting Kabul Notice and Note by Lois Smith

Ms Smith

slkiwit1 — 2014-03-24 20:05:02 UTC

I noticed that Fadi again and again puts himself down.

It tells me that he does not have a lot of self confidence

max

2014-03-24 20:06:48 UTC

fadi keeps blameing himself

for mariam loss

Sabrina

2014-03-24 20:06:52 UTC

When Fadi saw the aisle of dolls at toys r us, he remebers Mariam and gets mad at the dolls and starts attacking them. So, my point is this is a memory moment.

KendallB

2014-03-24 20:06:53 UTC

again and again Fadi keeps thinking about Kabul and the photo competition and he takes his anger out on him self and alway does not tell enyone about mariam it helps me under stand because it tells me what he feels

Finn

2014-03-24 20:06:57 UTC

I notice that everyone in Fadi's family always blame themselves for losing Mariam. It realy tells me that they care about each other.

Diego

2014-03-24 20:06:59 UTC

I noticed that Fadi blamed his self again and again.

Natalie

2014-03-24 20:06:59 UTC

i noticed that Fadi always goes back to the days when he lived with Mariam and when he does that puts him down into deep deep deep sorrow.

Devin

2014-03-24 20:07:09 UTC

I noticed that Fadi again and again had memories of mariam and it tells me that he misses mariam.

Luke

2014-03-24 20:07:16 UTC

I noticed that Fadi is so hard on himself about finding Mariam, and I can tell that he really wants his sister to be found. This shows me that he cares about her and wants to make sure she is safe.

Jasper

2014-03-24 20:07:29 UTC

I noticed that Fadi used barbies as a scapegoat

Dominique

2014-03-24 20:07:58 UTC

I notice that over and over again they talk about finding Mariam. so That tells me it is a main part of the story.

chris

2014-03-24 20:08:12 UTC

I noicent that fadi blamed him again and again

Kellan

2014-03-24 20:09:11 UTC

I noticed that Fadi , again and again, trys, to make up plans to save Miriam. It tells me that Fadi really cares about Miriam.

AnaSofia

2014-03-25 18:42:26 UTC

I noticed that the honey tin keeps coming up over and over again. The honey tin coming up over again tells me that this honey tin is important to Fadi because it was important to Mariam. Either that or it has some really important meaning in the story.

Kalia

2014-03-25 18:43:14 UTC

I noticed that Fadi thought of Mariam all the time. Also he blames himself for Mariam.

Luca

2014-03-25 18:45:47 UTC

Fadi has a again and again moment where he keeps thinking about mariam that she had and looked like something she had

Katharine

2014-03-25 18:45:54 UTC

I noticed Fadi attacked the Barbies when he felt bad about himself( Contrasts and Contradictions) It shows me he doesn't want to take the blame

I noticed that Fadi always blames himself for Mariam being lost(Again and again), and would do anything to find her. That shows me that he really loves her.

Chauncey

2014-03-25 18:48:08 UTC

It tells me about the story Fadi wants to win the Photo Club contest but he actually fails Mariam. So that's actually kind of the part why he went in the taxi's trunk. He is trying very hard to find Mariam. They get money and if the do get money they get to pass the border to find Mariam.But he failed,so his friend gave him money.

I noticed that Fadi wants Mariam back. And he went in the taxi so the taxi driver was his dad .He went in thier to find Mariam.I noticed that Fadi's Father is helping him find Fadi.

Jake

2014-03-25 18:48:47 UTC

I noticed that Fadi again and again blames himself for Mariam diaperance. It helps me understand the realationship between Mariam and Fadi.

Elizabeth T.

2014-03-25 18:49:27 UTC

l noticed that Fadi blames himself again and again for losing Miriam. It shows me that he LOVES Miriam and really wants to find her.

posie

2014-03-25 18:49:38 UTC

Fadi keeps putting him self down because of Mariam.

It shows that he isn't strong or doesn't have confidence

kai

2014-03-25 18:50:23 UTC

I noticed that Fadi, again and again, thought about Miriam, that means that Fadi really cares about her.

Jamie

2014-03-25 18:50:36 UTC

I noticed that Fadi always comes back to Mariam .

It shows me that he cares about her.

darius

2014-03-25 18:50:52 UTC

I noticed that Fadi again and again blames him self for losing Marriam in Afghanistan. This tells me that Fadi really cares about Marriam and really wants to find her

Anneke

2014-03-25 18:51:30 UTC

I noticed that Fadi again and again blames himself for losing Mariam. This tells me that he dosen't mind taking the guilt

Nicolai

2014-03-25 18:52:30 UTC

I noticed some memory moments about losing Mariam. I Know that he will keep blaming himself.

Sadie

2014-03-25 18:55:22 UTC

I noticed that Fadi keeps having memory moments. This tells me that in the story he will keep blaming himself for losing Mariam d will keep thinking of her.

Kendall M

2014-03-25 18:57:11 UTC

I noticed that the honey tin keeps coming up in the story.

Kaitlyn

slkiwit1 — 2014-03-26 18:42:44 UTC

Some places Fadi sees things that remind him of Mariam. He starts to say and think how he lost her. He keeps saying it's all his fault.

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2018-05-29 22:18:37 UTC

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2021-11-16 01:40:34 UTC

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