Panorama Landscape Critique by Ms Elizabeth Palmer https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik Period 1 en-us 2017-03-16 12:47:18 UTC 2024-12-04 10:06:16 UTC hello@padlet.com In the TITLE, name your three scenes in order from left to right elizabeth_palmer1 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160546755 Write what advice you would like here.]]> 2017-03-16 14:33:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160546755 Line all of your work up from left to right in a single line starting here elizabeth_palmer1 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160548056 ------------------------------------>>>]]> 2017-03-16 14:36:48 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160548056 San Francisco, St Louis, New York City tph191 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160549852 Water needs work, I will add clouds, any suggestions on how to make the transitions blend more?

]]> 2017-03-16 14:40:24 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160549852 Summer Tree, Fall Tree, Winter Tree eka201 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160549963 What should I do to improve my transitions? ]]> 2017-03-16 14:40:40 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160549963 Lighthouse Scene, Mountain Scene, City Scene https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160550157 What should I add to the background in the lighthouse scene?]]> 2017-03-16 14:41:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160550157 Flying Bird, Lion on a hill, Fish in water https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160550176 Don't know what else to add]]> 2017-03-16 14:41:03 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160550176 Forest, River, City https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160550221 Should I make the trees more realistic or keep it like a cartoon? Also what could I add to the river section?]]> 2017-03-16 14:41:08 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160550221 Summer, Fall, Winter https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160550549 I am not sure what else to add to it]]> 2017-03-16 14:41:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160550549 Underwater, Beach, Spongebob https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160550708 2017-03-16 14:42:01 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160550708 Tricolor Mountain Range (Orange, Green, Blue) https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160550714 I'm not sure how the transitions look and I'm not really sure what else to do to differentiate the different scenes, or how to change the POV of the blue scene. I also plan on incorporating a river or any general water at the bottom but I'm not sure how. Any more problems or suggestions you find are welcome.]]> 2017-03-16 14:42:02 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160550714 Mountains, Forest, City pjf191 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160550723 I don't know what to add to the last frame.]]> 2017-03-16 14:42:03 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160550723 Airplane, Lighthouse, Ocean https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160550758 I need to make a clear color scheme and also add something the airplane part.]]> 2017-03-16 14:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160550758 City, sand, beach https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160551526 What else should I add? How else do I make the smooth transitions. ]]> 2017-03-16 14:43:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160551526 Forest, Bridge, Space https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160551759 How should I Transition from the bridge to space ]]> 2017-03-16 14:44:11 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160551759 Houses next to the city https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160551890 I was wondering if I should put something else too. Like mountains or the beach]]> 2017-03-16 14:44:26 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160551890 Beach (not done) to Forest to Mountains https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160552167 2017-03-16 14:45:00 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160552167 sunset to night time https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160552180 How is it looking???

]]> 2017-03-16 14:45:02 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160552180 Building and Ship https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160552653 Any idea what I should change/ do for my final scene?]]> 2017-03-16 14:45:59 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160552653 City landscape day to night https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160552969 Still have to work on afternoon and night]]> 2017-03-16 14:46:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_palmer1/axudgx3jd4ik/wish/160552969