https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting WOW! Brainstorming en-us 2020-10-13 22:13:59 UTC 2025-04-05 17:12:41 UTC hello@padlet.com stu42029841 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/826790298 I changed the setting, theme, mood, and color coordination.
Miracle ]]> 2020-10-13 22:16:18 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/826790298 stu42016876 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/826792692 I changed the story]]> 2020-10-13 22:17:54 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/826792692 42016722 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/826793401 Tammy]]> 2020-10-13 22:18:18 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/826793401 joseavalos2 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/843082713 Exposition
We are astronauts

Conflict
There is an alien among us

Rising Action
Somebody is eliminated, we don't know who

Climax
We call a meeting


Falling Action
We vote someone out

Resolution
We kicked the wrong person out.]]> 2020-10-19 23:50:17 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/843082713 stu42030326 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/846774139 The parts i changed from Casted was i made it so the entire empire of Sacrene Kingdom is ruled by a dictator named Harrison Hilford and made a smal settlement where rebels lived]]> 2020-10-20 21:47:45 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/846774139 stu42030326 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/846775850 They meet the Nifo Tribe a tribe of bugs or small half human half critter people

]]> 2020-10-20 21:48:47 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/846775850 stu42029841 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/846776760 In progress all I have are character names, settings, Name of story, and chapter 1’s name my name of the story is the title 
-miracle ]]> 2020-10-20 21:49:23 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/846776760 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/846782802 Exposition: Introducing each character and the setting

Conflict/First Act: 9/11 orphanages Mohammed and his brother. Mohammed is separated from his brother and taken to Iran, his home country, by an elderly couple escaping violence because his brother was reportedly dead to Mohammed. The same thing happened with Ali, except  he turned out homeless

Second Act: Mohammed’s caregivers pass away and he is left by himself. He decides to go to America and sees all the racism present. He then becomes inspired to make a change. After, he becomes a Senator and pushes many reforms.

Third Act: Mohammed is now running for president. He becomes president and reforms many things over an 8-yr span. He faces many enemies and corruption along the way. At the end, Mohammed retires knowing he has made a change in the world.]]> 2020-10-20 21:52:45 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/846782802 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/846785585 I added characters and switched the plot to be more cohesive ]]> 2020-10-20 21:54:26 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/846785585 stu42030326 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/846790223 There was a kingdom in the Eastern Islands in the “Serene Kingdom” also known as the “Peace Kingdom”, where they only knew peace. Due to this peace they were capable of creating significant advancements which benefited for all races and animals. There was no such thing as war just beauty. It flourished with luscious plants and flowers which encased the landscape. The sky and water were always clean and crystal clear. Until One Day there was a mysterious figure who wore a black cloak and a handkerchief. They was swift and stealthy. They sneakily entered the castle through an opened window and assassinated the royal family and overthrew the kingdom by manipulating the guards to kidnap all the babies in the kingdom from villagers. Where he later told them when they were older lies saying that people who adored and followed The former king were bad people and should be exterminated. When they were all in their teen years they were forced to be personal knights and he ordered them to kill anyone who follows the former king. Anybody who followed the former king were considered rebels. Whilst the people who followed the new king were called heroes. The kingdom was broken into regions the top was where the king and nobles lived while the middle region was the home to the poor and was also the war zone, leading to a massacre of many innocent civilians. The survivors and rebels of the mass genocide then fled down south of the Land where they made base and were living as refugees.  -Sunny Lim]]> 2020-10-20 21:57:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/846790223 stu42016876 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/846791472 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1IZ1MvhcbGpdSba7CvV2RvIpkb8ioxijnEW4ZXQq11FU/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2020-10-20 21:57:49 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/846791472 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/846793503 I added a setting,a character and I added personallity

]]> 2020-10-20 21:59:03 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/846793503 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/846794925 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dybzpCZAq2kpP3GxaZ_DwrHps-PjSA5g9Nji4P6y6nI/edit]]> 2020-10-20 21:59:57 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/846794925 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/867713763 it change twice! plot : brotherly loe turned to one sided fam love/ very sad and evil MIDDLE SCHOOL AND UP
i have characters twins, enemies and friends turned evil it is horrible and sad warnig the comic version may be very weird and have bad drwaing pls do not judge the artistry and the way it is set up it is kinda intense for younger viewers again pls DONT JUDGE ME THOSE WHO JUDGE WILL BE EXICUTED!?! ad it is fun to express my feels throgh muh story oof]]> 2020-10-27 21:56:44 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/867713763 stu42016876 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/867713945 I love doing storyboard, and I could upgrade writing. I changed some things in storyboard. I made a mistake in it as you can see here in the link. I really need to upgrade my writing skills because it’s kinda bad.  https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1IZ1MvhcbGpdSba7CvV2RvIpkb8ioxijnEW4ZXQq11FU/edit]]> 2020-10-27 21:56:51 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/867713945 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/867714893 I changed my whole story ]]> 2020-10-27 21:57:20 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/867714893 42016722 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/867715300 writing is the fun part right now even when i don’t have any ideas, when i do have ideas my creativity explodes and i try every thought and scenario in my head

i hope that i build up the story well enough that it will be unpredictable yet fun to read]]> 2020-10-27 21:57:34 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/867715300 stu42033097 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/867715321 What I enjoy most about my wow is the thrill of the plot and its a really interesting story I made up. it's a story of a facility of where you can only be happy which I won't say anymore since it's a surprise. I want to improve on the steps my mc has to go through and the struggle he has to face to achieve his new found goal.]]> 2020-10-27 21:57:35 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/867715321 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/867722265 I changed the beginning of the story to be more exposition than event]]> 2020-10-27 22:01:39 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/867722265 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/867723750 I changed the beginning of the story to be more exposition than event]]> 2020-10-27 22:02:31 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/867723750 stu42033097 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/867724958 https://plotfactory.com/app/universes/22160]]> 2020-10-27 22:03:17 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/867724958 stu42030326 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/867725013 What I really like about my story is the plot and the creative abilities that will be unlocked to the characters. The way that the general will adventure to different fantasy lands to recruit a team of strong loyal people who can take on the Dictator of New”. He is really rich and Powerful who uses dark magic the strongest and dangerous magic there is.  ]]> 2020-10-27 22:03:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/867725013 dronilehiraldo https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/888105354 Write 3-5 sentences on:
–Where you are at in your WOW (ex: rising action, conflict, falling action, etc.)
–What is developed so far? (ex: setting, characters, morals, etc.)]]> 2020-11-03 23:03:21 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/888105354 stu42033097 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/888105414 For my wow I am almost finished on revising on my conflict and I am starting to try making it sound right. In addition, I am trying to work out how my story Happy is going to go and what kinds of events the mc has to trigger. As well as making the story more interesting since it seemed really boring.]]> 2020-11-03 23:03:24 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/888105414 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/888106574 I am almost finished with my story I just need to add a few more characters and more clips. I also want to add more characters]]> 2020-11-03 23:04:08 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/888106574 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/888107835 I’m in the conflict and about to get into the juice of things]]> 2020-11-03 23:04:53 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/888107835 stu42029841 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/888109650 I’m about in the middle. It is very tragic and is not for viewers under the age of 13 YEARS OF AGE. If you have had a glimps of it you would know how tragic it is. I believe I am almost done but I will be making and written version and a drawn version.]]> 2020-11-03 23:06:05 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/888109650 stu42030326 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/888110380 I am making a new story because my original one was too long. I have about 16 characters names and personalities finished. So I’m going to make a murder mystery which could have simple concepts. There will be a twist at the end.]]> 2020-11-03 23:06:35 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/888110380 42016722 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/888110539 -still on the first chapter
-did not develop anything yet

i am going to remove a few conflicts and transitions. i might speed up the story a bit so it might be fast paced. it’s not going to be digital anymore.]]> 2020-11-03 23:06:41 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/888110539 stu42019078 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/888119042 I’m in the middle of my story. I am developing my characters and setting. The main event is happening right now and I am letting it have its effect.]]> 2020-11-03 23:12:24 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/888119042 stu42016876 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/888120030 I’m kinda done I might add more story to it. I’m just gonna do one more story then I can complete my WOW project. Also I might fix some bugs in my story because I make errors a lot.]]> 2020-11-03 23:13:04 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/888120030 joseavalos2 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/910891751 Slideshow/lesson:
Your work:]]> 2020-11-10 23:01:34 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/910891751 joseavalos2 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/910891926 link: to your progress]]> 2020-11-10 23:01:39 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/910891926 stu42019078 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/910896290 PlotFactory: https://plotfactory.com/app/stories/50585/]]> 2020-11-10 23:04:03 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/910896290 stu42033097 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/910900884 2020-11-10 23:06:40 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/910900884 stu42030326 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/910901759 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1-L2GUKl9jBFqlKBLT-enAQDsdona6wzKrSvPVv4NOjQ/edit]]> 2020-11-10 23:07:08 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/910901759 stu42019598 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/910904857 2020-11-10 23:08:52 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/910904857 stu42027516 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/910905785 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1GsZ7636kS9nPvrthcojjypUXXdRORPhLdZDZbG5N5Gk/edit]]> 2020-11-10 23:09:22 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/910905785 42016722 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/910908683 diptrus spoiler
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Background drawn by my friend
Everything else is drawn by me]]> 2020-11-10 23:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/910908683 stu42016876 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/910909816 My board :3 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/15LJJ_rAyKK6VBc9h4czfM7zXsSNLFItQLOosLaDwyWo/edit]]> 2020-11-10 23:11:38 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/910909816 dronilehiraldo https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/939122240 LINK TO YOUR PROJECT (Google Slides, Google Doc)

Make sure to share it with: dronilehiraldo@citizenschools.org]]> 2020-11-18 22:29:54 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/939122240 stu42019078 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/939131068
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/18IpIIKn_C3-NZBidl_m_Wgs3Ve0S-372xHIbF93_VM0/edit  (Ps I’m still in the process of transferring from plot factory)


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(Not done)]]> 2020-11-18 22:38:58 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/939142852 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/939152807 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1YSb8mLm1ttYgJlo64HnMqvnSc1OaF-8sRjyKG8-MvT0/edit#slide=id.p]]> 2020-11-18 22:43:32 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/939152807 42016722 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/939210452 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1PaM6py1IhqVXU9YlUriXnWKPrz0OyzjJ9Ulh85TWwyE/edit
it won’t make sense right because i’m not done with the story yet 😅]]> 2020-11-18 23:11:32 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/939210452 joseavalos2 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/977901908 Title of your WOW
LINK TO YOUR WOW

]]> 2020-12-01 22:27:48 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/977901908 stu42029841 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/977904326 “Brothers Forever”
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/10okp-neWOONUf-GWRHkCvsG1zq7INYNVOF7eEpD94o8/edit]]> 2020-12-01 22:29:01 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/977904326 stu42019078 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/977905990 2001
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1To-Y7KUBOqKOyHhgkXi_rIk3Qxqd8mpelq_0leumLfU/edit]]> 2020-12-01 22:29:49 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/977905990 stu42033097 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/977909915 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m4rFFOZQyg7qQUCHDHhFdxetIgz9YYMeXHGeuCe_C_0/edit?usp=sharing


]]> 2020-12-01 22:31:49 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/977909915 42016722 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/977910574 spoo & friends a
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1Qq1GJrzyCYmnXpxn-kpPw2TlCR5hapZGvxosLKUQ4gI/edit

i need help with:
-fly’s character development
-using the word “flew” less]]> 2020-12-01 22:32:11 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/977910574 stu42027516 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/977910717 Among us (not done)
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1elY8elt0QZmKyqdz5sT-T1wgEpQwK8rn5HBBR60KHO4/edit
Spellings and grammar (if there is any)]]> 2020-12-01 22:32:16 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/977910717 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/977910805 Ollie the Panda and Lola the Lion
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1YSb8mLm1ttYgJlo64HnMqvnSc1OaF-8sRjyKG8-MvT0/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2020-12-01 22:32:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/977910805 stu42016876 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/977912584 Wow project (done) https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1uFB3QbkO32S78oh4saTLZwwwJLSBC6ufknyKW-7isuA/edit]]> 2020-12-01 22:33:14 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/977912584 joseavalos2 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/996751042 What did you like about your time with us?

Who's work did you see and what did you like about it?]]> 2020-12-08 02:54:53 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/996751042 42016722 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/1000296058 i saw yen’s work and it was very fun and funny to read :D

it was fun talking about spoo and friends to other people without feeling embarrassed

edit: hi]]> 2020-12-08 22:24:00 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/1000296058 stu42030326 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/1000300629 My favorite moment in creative writing is the amount of support and encouragement that the staff and other students in it have given me. 

One of the work I found interesting was Tammy’s. Hers is a story about bugs who have simple designs but really detailed stories or plots.]]> 2020-12-08 22:26:32 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/1000300629 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/1000343875 When you needed to turn in your wow projects early so that you still have more time to fix the things you did wrong and fix it. 

I really likes Miracles project because she shows a lot of details. and explains what the characters prespective is about.]]> 2020-12-08 22:51:17 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/1000343875 stu42016876 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/1000370975 I like doing my WOW project, and I like sharing my opinion with other people.

I like Angelina’s story because it has the same style “cartoony”
I like cartoony story’s: ]]> 2020-12-08 23:07:42 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/1000370975 stu42027516 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/1000374381 Well to be honest I didn’t see much of other people’s Wow but I really like Tammy’s Wow slide I read it a bunch of times if something get change over time also I really like a the memes and the art work

Probably the part when I got encouraged (sorry if I was always silent I didn’t want to say much 😅I am trying to be more confident please no hate ^-^ I also love how we always say such random things that is funny at the end of the day lol ]]> 2020-12-08 23:09:58 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/1000374381 stu42019078 https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/1000382490 It was a great experience in Creative Writing. I got to communicate and it was fun doing my wow.

I checked Niko’s work and it was really creative and it looked like it took a lot of work.]]> 2020-12-08 23:14:50 UTC https://padlet.com/dronilehiraldo/creativewriting/wish/1000382490