T08 Proposal Samples by Grace

T08 Proposal Samples by Grace https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08 Critique of samples en-us 2019-05-14 00:54:19 UTC 2023-03-06 10:00:50 UTC hello@padlet.com Suo Haoran, Kovan, Jared, Jason, Yang Ai, Liu Yaxin https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359719418 2019-05-14 01:35:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359719418 Jia Hui, Zahrah, Jasmine, Puteri, Hui Ting, Zhi Qing https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359719521 2019-05-14 01:36:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359719521 olenzoeu https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359719659 douglas lucas allan
pierre
jiajun

1.Do you think the proposed solutions will work in Singapore?
Yes. Because healthy lifestyle is in trend now.
2. What are your concerns, comments or criticisms?
Not appealing enough to attract customers. People may think that the fruits may be less nutritious and therefore, sales would not be good.
3. What would persuade you to adopt this solution? • innovativeness of the solution • need that it meets
The thought to make the world a better place for you and me.
Help improve the lives of future generations.]]> 2019-05-14 01:37:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359719659 Angel, Nicole, Jeff, Alvin https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359719839 2019-05-14 01:38:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359719839 3. What would persuade you to adopt this solution? https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359719926
Innovativeness of the solution
South Korea has separate bins
to disposed its foodwaste
( volumebased waste
management system )
( pg 2 & 3)

Need that it meets
Its food waste is cut from 5.1m
tonnes in year 2008 to 4.82m
tonnes in 2014. (pg 5)

Potential benefits it brings
The machines can break down
food into a powder that can be
used as a fertiliser or fuel for
open-fire cooking such as
barbecuing.

It is also makes its people to
reduce their food waste as they
have to pay for every food waste
they throw. (pg 5)

Additionally, there will be lesser
waste in landfills so that landfills will not be filled as quickly as
predicted, and fewer or none may be needed in the future (pg 5)

]]> 2019-05-14 01:38:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359719926 1. Will this proposed solution work in SG? https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720140 yes, the UglyFood campaign is working on a zero food wastage campaign and i think that the business is worked hard on the advertising to promote the importance of not waste food that are ugly as they still do have the necessary vitamins etc.]]> 2019-05-14 01:40:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720140 Hong Chuan , Muzzaquar, Keagan, Xin Yu, Zhi Yi, Jun Jie https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720174 2019-05-14 01:40:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720174 3. What would persuade you to adopt this solution? • innovativeness of the solution • need that it meets • potential benefits it brings https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720368 The idea of a food carnival to show that ugly food is good enough to be consume is a very innovative idea. As students and staff from the Diplomas in Food Nutrition and culinary science are given an opportunity to express their creativity true culinary.
People will understand that ugly food is not ugly. it too can be delicious and u should not judge a food by its exterior.]]> 2019-05-14 01:41:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720368 1. Do you think the proposed solutions will work in Singapore? https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720405 2019-05-14 01:41:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720405 2. What are your concerns, comments or criticisms? https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720470 2019-05-14 01:41:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720470 1. Do you think the proposed solutions will work in Singapore? https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720507 No, it will not work in Singapore. Singaporeans are known to be cheapskate. As a result, they might throw their food wastage into regular bins to prevent from paying.]]> 2019-05-14 01:41:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720507 3. What would persuade you to adopt this solution? • innovativeness of the solution • need that it meets • potential benefits it brings https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720523 2019-05-14 01:42:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720523 1. Do you think the proposed solutions will work in Singapore? https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720820 2019-05-14 01:43:41 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720820 2. What are your concerns, comments or criticisms? https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720840 People might throw away their food waste into public bins instead to avoid extra charges.]]> 2019-05-14 01:43:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720840 3. What would persuade you to adopt this solution? • innovativeness of the solution • need that it meets • potential benefits it brings https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720861 2019-05-14 01:43:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359720861 2. What are your concerns,comments or criticisms? https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359721220 The fruits are not fresh, makes people question the quality of the end product.

A survey by Electrolux found that 83 per cent of the 1,000 people surveyed would only buy fruit and vegetables that looked appealing

]]> 2019-05-14 01:46:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359721220 2. The concern is that Singaporeans might not be willing to cooperate by separating their food waste and paying for it as it takes responsibility and integrity which Singaporeans are lacking. It is also a big change and might take some time getting used to. https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359721232 2019-05-14 01:46:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359721232 Q1 https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359721578 2019-05-14 01:48:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359721578 Q1. https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359721580 I think the proposed solution will work. Getting Singaporeans to lead a zero food waste way of life seems possible, with 75 percent of Singaporeans willing to consume ugly food if it is tasty and nutritious, as shown in 2016. The UglyFood, Food Bank campaigns and annual food campaigns to raise awareness to reduce food waste would work.]]> 2019-05-14 01:48:31 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359721580 Q2 https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359721762 I think that Singaporeans will not be open-minded to the idea about managing food waste because of their kiasu and cheapskate mentality. Therefore they would just throw it into the nearest bin and avoid the charges.

]]> 2019-05-14 01:49:38 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359721762 1. https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359722614 Replacing rubbish chutes with trash bins is going to be troublesome and expensive. By implementing the RFID system, it is going to change the habit of throwing rubbish all around Singapore. Many people may be angry about that and most of the Singaporeans may not accept the fact that they are charged by throwing rubbish.

]]> 2019-05-14 01:54:32 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359722614 2 https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359722631 I personally feel that not everyone or even myself will accept the charges because I myself also produce waste everyday. Maybe it is more considerate to set a limit of how much rubbish you are allowed to throw without being charged.]]> 2019-05-14 01:54:41 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359722631 Q https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359722849 2019-05-14 01:56:03 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359722849 Q3 https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359722850 In order to persuade Singaporeans to adopt the solution, we can perhaps from young, host walks/tours/exhibitions mainly in schools, so that we can be educated with more information about the problem and how particularly this solution will work. ]]> 2019-05-14 01:56:03 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359722850 3. https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359723177 There has been a positive outcome of the food waste program as food waste reduced by 24% from 2008 to 2014 and the food waste can also be recycled into fertilizers and fuel.]]> 2019-05-14 01:57:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359723177 3. cont'd https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359727641 The chip is encrypted to protect user's data which is very innovative and considerate of user's privacy.]]> 2019-05-14 02:21:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/359727641 Anne ajohnn https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/361958513 2019-05-21 01:21:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/361958513 1) Sample 2, p. 2 Weakness in the description of the 1st paragraph of the Solution section --Suggestion:The proposed solution to discourage food waste is to implement a two-pronged (dual) approach which consists of a Campaign and a Food Carnival. This approach will help to motivate teenagers to gradually make zero food waste a way of life. ajohnn https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/361958637 2019-05-21 01:22:32 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/361958637 Anne ajohnn https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/361958916 1) From Sample 2, p.2:
Weakness in describing the Solution [Not clearly explained]
-The 1st sentence of the proposed solution could be improved..
Suggestion:
The proposed solution to discourage food waste is to implement a two-pronged (or dual) approach of a Campaign and a Food Carnival.
[in addition, the writer should not have started the first sentence with "To".)]]> 2019-05-21 01:24:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/361958916 2) Sample 1, p. 3 ajohnn https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/361959163 Strength (Language):
The verbs 'identifies'; 'activates'; 'is weighed'; 'transmits'; 'analyses'; 'assesses' describe how each component of the solution works. Thus enabling readers to visualise the system and process and will persuade the reader that the solution is workable. ]]> 2019-05-21 01:25:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ajohnn/Proposal_T08/wish/361959163