https://padlet.com/24slasluisadiaz/aua8l4hh3tbh Leave some love!! en-us 2018-11-30 13:52:49 UTC 2019-04-01 12:17:53 UTC hello@padlet.com 24jkearney https://padlet.com/24slasluisadiaz/aua8l4hh3tbh/wish/311342211 Sammy , Awesome piece you did really good i love how you used Alternation the the right spots .One thing I feel like in the climax you were going a little bit fast you could of went i little bit slower .Either than that awesome job !]]> 2018-12-05 13:42:26 UTC https://padlet.com/24slasluisadiaz/aua8l4hh3tbh/wish/311342211 24jkearney https://padlet.com/24slasluisadiaz/aua8l4hh3tbh/wish/333162348 hey Sammy, Your piece is really good you persuade me pretty well it was interesting . Your composition risk here well written but you could of been stronger with them and the thesis needs to be edited a little bit either than that good job.]]> 2019-02-20 13:37:20 UTC https://padlet.com/24slasluisadiaz/aua8l4hh3tbh/wish/333162348 24astellakis https://padlet.com/24slasluisadiaz/aua8l4hh3tbh/wish/333603380 Great job on your Persuasive editorial! You did a really good job supporting your data. You made the data clear to understand. Your claims were also really good! One thing you could do to make your writing even better is make sure you are not being too repetitive in some places.]]> 2019-02-21 13:13:12 UTC https://padlet.com/24slasluisadiaz/aua8l4hh3tbh/wish/333603380 24eadiamond https://padlet.com/24slasluisadiaz/aua8l4hh3tbh/wish/333612599 Hey Sammy, great job! I really liked your topic, and your title as well! One thing you could improve on is maybe to look at your counterarguments, as the formatting wasn't all correct. Another thing you could improve on is maybe to elevate your word choice, as I noticed you could have done that in some places! Other than that, great job! ]]> 2019-02-21 13:37:23 UTC https://padlet.com/24slasluisadiaz/aua8l4hh3tbh/wish/333612599 24aalce https://padlet.com/24slasluisadiaz/aua8l4hh3tbh/wish/333614648 Hey Sammy! Great job on your persuasive editorial! One of the things that I liked was how throughout your essay, you had very stong word choice! Another thing that I liked was how most of your data surronded around Scotch Plains recycling issues and not just articles about recycling articles in general. One thing you may want to work on is not being repetive in your warrants, but overall, great job!]]> 2019-02-21 13:41:55 UTC https://padlet.com/24slasluisadiaz/aua8l4hh3tbh/wish/333614648 https://padlet.com/24slasluisadiaz/aua8l4hh3tbh/wish/339993208 Hey Sammy! I loved your persuasive editorial and it was so detailed and interesting. Your hook was really good and I loved how you connected your data back to your claim! I can't wait for more!]]> 2019-03-11 14:58:55 UTC https://padlet.com/24slasluisadiaz/aua8l4hh3tbh/wish/339993208