https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65 MENTOR TEXT EXAMPLE DISCUSSION en-us 2017-09-21 19:29:50 UTC 2023-05-19 05:42:17 UTC hello@padlet.com hamiltonja1 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191225639 An important take I had from the essay lesson on Friday was the re-enforcement that some people don't care about school and are throwing this opportunity away. another take away was that the effort one gives decides their grade.

]]> 2017-09-26 13:17:09 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191225639 hamiltonja1 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191228927 An area of weakness in my writing would be my transition between paragraphs, and longer conclusion paragraphs.]]> 2017-09-26 13:22:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191228927 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191229465 an important take away is that I'm not the worst writer, so that's good. Making good connections, translations, and having good order and structure is, well, good. Also develop your ideas fully!!!]]> 2017-09-26 13:23:30 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191229465 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191229536 I need to work on basically everything because i suck at essays

]]> 2017-09-26 13:23:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191229536 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191231537 They need to make it more organized and explain themselves ]]> 2017-09-26 13:26:53 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191231537 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191233759  I took away that it is important to have clear and strong evidence that you connect with real world applications and also try to use more formal and precise language and have a sentence structure that is varied in a correct manner also keep on topic.]]> 2017-09-26 13:30:24 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191233759 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191235506 Staying on topic and bringing everything back to my central idea and also using more sophisticated words and also get my points across in a better and more precise way ]]> 2017-09-26 13:33:01 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191235506 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191236579 You need to have clear evidence and use formal words. ]]> 2017-09-26 13:34:38 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191236579 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191236590 An important take away, from my perspective, was that to really write more, connect your thoughts, and describe your ideas more thoroughly. Also, Keep your mind on the topic and make sure that the response is detailed and answers all parts to the prompt.]]> 2017-09-26 13:34:40 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191236590 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191237718 An are of weakness that I can see in my writing is my paragraph structure. I need to work on keeping my sentences detailed and use the vocabulary correct for my age group.]]> 2017-09-26 13:36:25 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191237718 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191238159 the order of my writing, which typically is like the first essay, everywhere and going off topic. Appropriate examples and developing/connecting them too.
my essays aren't that bad.]]> 2017-09-26 13:37:05 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191238159 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191238570 I need to work on transitioning paragraphs and using "big kid" words ]]> 2017-09-26 13:37:40 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191238570 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191239126 I learned that writing complex sentences isn't always important. Mixing in language that is easily understood and makes one seem informed and intelligent is good. 

]]> 2017-09-26 13:38:32 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191239126 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191241126 I need to write things that are a little easier understood. Sometimes I try to weave together too much and it turns to garbage. I should write in a way that's best for the reader. ]]> 2017-09-26 13:41:46 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191241126 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191388095 You need to make yourself sound like an intelligent person, as in using a more extensive vocabulary. you need to be easily understood and use more organization while writing.
 ]]> 2017-09-26 17:45:49 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191388095 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191389344 It is important to stay on topic and have a clear mind.

]]> 2017-09-26 17:47:44 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191389344 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191390102 An are of weakness that I need o work on in my own writing is staying on topic and not procrastinating everything. I also need to figure out how to get what is in my mind on the paper in a organized state.]]> 2017-09-26 17:49:03 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191390102 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191390701 I see weakness when i dont use high school words]]> 2017-09-26 17:50:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191390701 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191390977 In our lesson Friday I learned that we need advancement in our vocabulary and that we need to stay on topic when putting our paragraphs together. I need to work on putting more advanced words into my paragraphs and i need to work on making my introduction.]]> 2017-09-26 17:50:33 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191390977 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191393131 My take away from the writing lesson was that you should really use several intelligent words to make the paper you're doing make you seem very smart and also to bs a lot too.  ]]> 2017-09-26 17:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191393131 lucask1 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191394047 2017-09-26 17:55:39 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191394047 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191395492 I need to work on better sentence structure and keeping the essay on topic]]> 2017-09-26 17:57:59 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191395492 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191396341 My take on the lesson on Friday about writing and examples we looked at is that you need to make the reader believe you are intelligant and have a great use of Improved vocabulary. You need to have examples and sources.

]]> 2017-09-26 17:59:13 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191396341 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191399255 An area of weakness that I need to ]]> 2017-09-26 18:04:42 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191399255 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191404107 2017-09-26 18:14:55 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191404107 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191404113 Friday, I learned that it is important to provide examples and explain why those example relate back to your claim. Also, it is a good idea to use advanced vocabulary. ]]> 2017-09-26 18:14:56 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191404113 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191404912 Something my own writing needs work on is a little bit more advanced vocabulary and ]]> 2017-09-26 18:16:32 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191404912 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191815996 I learned that it is important to use good vocab and provide examples. With your examples you should always post the source you got the information from ]]> 2017-09-27 18:20:24 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191815996 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191817248 I need to work on the vocabulary i use ad work on citing evidence]]> 2017-09-27 18:22:29 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191817248 https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191817284 2017-09-27 18:22:33 UTC https://padlet.com/lucask1/asyafvg8am65/wish/191817284