https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf What are some strengths in the story and weaknesses? Also, what’s your general opinion of the story. Be honest, but not cruel! :) en-us 2020-10-06 13:55:52 UTC 2020-10-07 17:17:37 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811130300 Strength: The story was really descriptive and provided rich details about the plot/scene of the story.  
Weakness: The story was EVERYWHERE.  For example the writer would be on one topic and out of nowhere she would switch it up. 
Conclude: Near the end of the story the author finally showed the readers Judes true desire. ]]> 2020-10-07 17:11:57 UTC https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811130300 https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811130638 The strengths of this story are how good the author uses imagery is the story.]]> 2020-10-07 17:12:02 UTC https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811130638 https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811131107  A strength of the story would but that it had a lot of twists which could keep readers interested but it was also pretty long which could be a weakness ]]> 2020-10-07 17:12:09 UTC https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811131107 https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811131508 jude is a very smart kid]]> 2020-10-07 17:12:15 UTC https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811131508 22mdonascimento https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811132322 I think the story did a good job at giving really goo detailed descriptions but I think they overdid it because it felt like there was a lot of unnecessary information in his story

]]> 2020-10-07 17:12:27 UTC https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811132322 https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811135608 I think it was a pretty good, pretty realistic story.]]> 2020-10-07 17:13:16 UTC https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811135608 https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811136265 The story provided very good details of the character but i feel like all lot of things couldve been cut down. ]]> 2020-10-07 17:13:26 UTC https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811136265 21hharchaoui https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811139040 One of the strengths is the words and phrases he used to describe his experiences. It gives them a strong tone .]]> 2020-10-07 17:14:07 UTC https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811139040 https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811143369 Jude faces a lot of hardships throughout his adolescence. It shapes him to the person that he becomes at the end of the story.]]> 2020-10-07 17:15:11 UTC https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811143369 https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811144569 a strength from the story is that they gave a lot of details so we could really understand that character and a weakness of the story was that it was way too long. overall i didn’t like the story it was kind of boring]]> 2020-10-07 17:15:30 UTC https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811144569 21hharchaoui https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811146972 One of the strengths is also the personification which gives life to a lot of the events he desribes.]]> 2020-10-07 17:16:06 UTC https://padlet.com/hfifield/arxchxhmpw9pc5yf/wish/811146972