College English-Lesson 2 Writing by

Flow chart for writing lesson

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-18 09:57:05 UTC

This flow chart serves as a guiding tool for you to navigate thiswriting class. To clarify the symbolism of the shapes within the chart: circles represent instructional activities, rectangles denote the activities that you have to complete, and squares indicate assessments.

Please complete this online game

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-18 11:15:48 UTC

This interactive game aims to reinforce the basic knowledge of argumentative writing.

Collaboratively write the introduction paragraph

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-18 12:48:29 UTC

Please write the introduction paragraph based on the writing prompt "The importance of developing a healthy lifestyle among college students.” After that, please post your team's writing below and you can feel free to edit it till it is satisfied.

Please evaluate your peer group's work

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-19 03:56:15 UTC

After read your peer group's introduction paragraph, please evaluate their work based on the criteria provided.

Craft the body paragraph in pair

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-19 04:02:28 UTC

Please continue to complete the body paragraph of the argumentative writing with the same writing prompt “The importance of developing a healthy lifestyle among college students.”

Please peer review the writing products with Pigai web-site.

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-19 04:06:37 UTC

After finishing the body paragraph, please use the link provided to check your writing.

Please reflect on your learning process

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-19 04:09:36 UTC

Please reflect on your learning process with the dimensions provided above and post them below.

Please watch the video about argumentative writing

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-19 11:48:13 UTC

This lecture aims to demonstrate how to write an argumentative essay

Group 1 (He rui, Wang Xiangyan, Yang Shuyu, and Zhang Yunyan)

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-20 10:10:40 UTC

As college students take off on their academic journeys, the crucial of prioritizing a healthy lifestyle becomes increasingly apparent. This essay seeks to carefully explore the complexities associated with the essential role of developing strong habits. By examining the significant effects on physical well-being, abilities, and academic achievements, this discussion strives to express the subtle importance of a holistic approach to well-being during the college journey.

Group 2 (Lin Shuangshuang, Sun Dan, Zhang Lin, Wang Yi, and Xu Tian)

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-20 10:11:24 UTC

College can be quite busy, and it's crucial for students to consider maintaining their health. In this essay, we will examine why cultivating a healthy lifestyle is highly significant during this period. We will closely examine its impact on their physical well-being, mental health, and academic performance.

Zhang Yunyan & He rui

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-20 11:41:07 UTC

College students often facing the challenge of maintaining physical health due to not normal schedules and increasing stress. Engaging in regular exercise, adopting a balanced diet, and ensuring enough sleep are necessary aspects of a healthy lifestyle that lead to a stronger body, increased energy levels, and a low risk of illnesses.

Wang Xiangyan and Yang Shuyu:

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-20 11:47:13 UTC

In addition to physical health, mental health is deeply influenced by lifestyle choices. Establishing healthy habits can reduce stress, anxiety, and depression, providing students with the support needed to navigate academic challenges. Most important factors such as enough sleep, proper diet, and regular exercise has been linked to enhancing students' ability to cope with the demands of college life.

Lin Shuangshuang and Sun Dan

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-21 02:33:55 UTC

Engaging in activities that emphasize health nurtures social bonds and interpersonal connections among college students. Whether it be attending fitness classes, enjoying regular dinner, or engaging in some helpful actiities, students have chances to build connections with friends and establish supportive relationship. The bond developed through shared healthy experiences adds a positive dimension to the college life.

Zhang Lin, Wang Yi

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-21 02:36:54 UTC

Effective time management is critical for success in college, and maintaining a healthy lifestyle is essential to this skill. Well scheduling time for physical activity, meal planning, and ensuring sufficient sleep contributes to overall productivity. Achieving a balance between academic commitments and self-care activities promotes a more sustainable and prosperous college journey.

Lin Shuangshuang and Sun Dan:

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-21 05:56:31 UTC

Participating in helpful activities improve interpersonal relationships. Whether through fitness classes, having dinner, or some ohter activities, students have the opportunity to connect with peers and form supportive networks. The sense of mutual support which derived from shared healthy experiences will enhance college life expeirience.

Wang Yi

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-21 06:13:51 UTC

Figuring out how to write arguments showed me how to take tricky ideas and turn them into a clear essay. I learned that being super precise is key, kinda like how main idea organized is the backbone of a really awesome essay.

He rui

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-21 06:26:48 UTC

After learning this class, I have got a lot skills about how to write an introduction and body paragraph. It wasn't just about boosting my arguments; it also made me feel responsible for developing writing skills.

Zhang Yunyan

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-21 06:31:52 UTC

Dealing with opposing views felt like a mental exercise, helping me appreciate the advantages of the other side. It wasn't solely about safeguarding my stance; it also brought a open-minded approach to my discussions.

Lin Shuangshuang

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-21 06:34:00 UTC

Sorting out how to organize my essay was pretty crucial. Realizing that my writing needed to flow smoothly from one point to the next made everything make more sense to the reader. Besides, this mode of study is quite interesting because I can try different types of learning materials.

Wang Xiangyan

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-21 06:35:53 UTC

This learning platform is a new channel for me to learn. The learning experienve is very attractive and funny. what's more, I learn a lot about the argumentative writing.

Sun Dan

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-21 06:40:08 UTC

When I look back on argumentative writing, I get that it's not just about throwing out facts. It's about telling a story. In addition, the most striking part of this class desing is the AI-generate lecture which is very impressive.

Yang Shuyu

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-21 06:42:47 UTC

After learning how to write an argumentative essay, I feel a bit more confident in my writing and the learning way is quite interesting. If given more chances, I prefer this way to learn English.

Pair 1 -evaluation result

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-21 07:04:14 UTC

pair 2

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-21 07:04:50 UTC

Pair 3

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-21 07:05:05 UTC

Pair 4

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-21 07:05:20 UTC

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-23 10:18:41 UTC

by playing the game, I not only can master the basic knowledge of argumentative writing but also can gain some pleasure from the quiz

Lin shuangshuang

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-26 09:06:14 UTC

this game is very interesting and I can repeatedly do it till I am satisfied with the results

Xu Tian

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-26 09:13:29 UTC

The game is quite interesting and I can choose different modes to complete the quiz

The feedback results

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-26 09:24:04 UTC

Jin Xin

Jasmine_QiuXiaoting — 2024-01-27 02:27:05 UTC

This lecture is clear and concise. I have a clear mind to come up with an argumentative writing.