Elaboration Strategies (3C) by Sneha Madgaonkar

Adopting strategy from 'National Geographic readers, deadliest animals

2022-01-03 05:47:11 UTC

I am going to adopt the strategy of though elaborating, adding excitment(ex jokes) so the reader doesnt get BORED to death

National Geographic Readers: Deadliest Animals

nt0696 — 2022-01-03 05:49:25 UTC

_{*Weird but true}

_{*Fun chapter names}_{*add jokes}_{*make the conclusion fun.}_*_{make it very fun}_{so kids don't get sooooooooo BORED that they sleep}

Azad deadliest animals book

nt0678 — 2022-01-03 05:51:56 UTC

They added longer sentences and put facts and jokes to make the reader stay happy and not bored . They also added lots of punctuation

I would like to elaborate my writing by asking questions to the readers and telling them amazing facts,make it very fun so kids can enjoy it and not think it as if it’s never ending.I would also edit it by making the conclusion fun.

2022-01-03 05:52:39 UTC

Aarika

nt0653 — 2022-01-03 05:53:45 UTC

They added facts, and long sentences and excitement which makes the reader want to keep reading, and fun facta.

Vihaan

Vihaan_Jhunjhunwala — 2022-01-03 05:54:25 UTC

_{*Weird but true}

_{^{*Fun chapter names}}

_{^{I am going to adopt the strategy of though elaborating, adding excitement so the reader doesn't get BORED to death}}

Saina

2022-01-03 05:54:26 UTC

if there is a importent word or a complicated word you should explain the meaning of that word also to intract with the reader also to make things more exiting for the readers . Also to add a lot of examples. Also add so many details that the reader can see what you have written in their mind

Skanda

2022-01-03 05:55:11 UTC

They just gave all the information they had and the they gave examples and many facts and important words. They also added many adjectives

living things

2022-01-03 05:55:11 UTC

i like how keerat added ms gren and keerat knows abouts living things and i like how detaild the information was, he used alot of describing words

My adaptation for a Mini Encyclopedia On Living Things

2022-01-03 05:55:15 UTC

I am going to adapt the strategy, make my paragraphs long and I want to add sparkly words and emotion to make my writing more detailed and neat and to make my readers excited and to read on.

Mini encyclopedia of living things

nt0664 — 2022-01-03 05:55:46 UTC

To make it longer, she added examples to make it clear about what she was talking about. she also added fun facts to prevent boredness. even sentences like 'Did i forget to tell you _____?'

Vaanya

nt0780 — 2022-01-03 05:56:03 UTC

I would really like to use the elaboration strategy in the book "A mini-encyclopedia on living things written and illustrated by Keerat 3B I will adapt it by adding a lot of information so that the readers visualize and enjoy the book

Shivansh

2022-01-03 05:56:12 UTC

A statrage you could facts

nt0644 — 2022-01-03 05:58:09 UTC

In the book Living things by Keerat Singh.
She/He used MRS GREN and made his/her book fun but at the same time she/he made me visualize what she was saying, she/he used adjectives to describe objects, she/he added jokes and riddles but at the same time added relevant information. So I am also going to add that to my work to make my book interesting.

Aradhya

2022-01-03 06:00:33 UTC

Deadliest Animals
- In the book there were many facts.
- The deadly animals were discribed properly.
- There were fun chapter names It made the reader keep reading.
- There was some riddles to make the book fun.
- The did you know facts was helpful too.

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snehamadgaonkar — 2022-01-03 06:00:49 UTC

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snehamadgaonkar — 2022-01-03 06:01:01 UTC

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snehamadgaonkar — 2022-01-03 06:02:00 UTC

Disshank: Gems

2022-01-03 06:02:39 UTC

They made it easy to read, they added details that made it exiting to see the next page. Even though there were small sentences, they still made sense. And it also has true facts

FEEDBACK ON DEADLY ANIMALS

2022-01-03 06:02:59 UTC

* to make it more fun she added picture
*but on every page she can add jokes

Reyansh

2022-01-03 06:03:28 UTC

Some of the elaboration strategies I found in the book I read are to add suspece like 'Come on, let's find out...', add a few new and ecxiting words and add some jokes when I can

Vidaar Narayan Vaidyanathan

nt0648 — 2022-01-03 06:04:27 UTC

I will add suspense on one page and cover it on the other page then my reader will be more interested in reading other than saying this is boring so I am going to not read this.