Legacies of Funan & Srivijaya by Su Yongshui https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b Create a poem, a song or a comic strip about a legacy of Funan or Srivijaya. en-us 2024-09-13 04:51:38 UTC 2025-02-26 07:29:43 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/8.0/png/2764.png Grouping https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313007731 We chope this Koen And Sze Rui

]]> 2025-02-03 03:15:48 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313007731 Group 2 - Funan https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313010469 Members - Olivia, Sarah-Jane, Andrea, Jing Xuan, Kai Jia

]]> 2025-02-03 03:18:56 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313010469 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313012336 chope by Phillip, Kaydren and Ashton

]]> 2025-02-03 03:21:20 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313012336 Group 4 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313014848 Kayley, Mykaela, Katelyn

]]> 2025-02-03 03:24:38 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313014848 Haiku https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313019759 Rivers weave through time,
Funan's spirit echoes bright,
Trade winds whisper tales.

]]> 2025-02-03 03:29:45 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313019759 Group 3: Benjamin, Aaron and Caelan https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313022195 We are doing Task B: writing a poem about a legacy of Funan.

]]> 2025-02-03 03:32:52 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313022195 EVAN, BLAKE, DECLAN, MICHAEL, SHUYAN https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313025231 2025-02-03 03:37:04 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313025231 Poem https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313028830 Funan's spirit echoes bright.

Use of rivers by traders.

Nothing extinguishes its fire,

And archaeological efforts shall continue.

No one shall forget about this kingdom.

]]> 2025-02-03 03:41:51 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313028830 Yi Ting, Tze Yu, Hayley Winata, Chujin (Srivijaya) https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313028933 2025-02-03 03:42:02 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313028933 "group" https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313030937 choped by qizhen sorry

uh funan

]]> 2025-02-03 03:44:18 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313030937 CHOPE BY US https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313032304 2025-02-03 03:46:10 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313032304 Good job Aaron! https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313032857 2025-02-03 03:46:56 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313032857 one sixth of a sestina of Funan https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313035193 A kingdom stands strong beside a river

In the kingdom stands a temple,

It survives through time making silk

Carving sculptures out of stone,

Resilient through the water and flame

Living through the earth and wind





]]> 2025-02-03 03:49:57 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313035193 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313036899 2025-02-03 03:51:57 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313036899 poem thats haiku https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313036957 funans legacy,

its great network of canals,

will be remembered

]]> 2025-02-03 03:52:04 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313036957 Good job Caelan! https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313037144 2025-02-03 03:52:21 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313037144 Raelynn, Hannah and Alyssa https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313038307 chope by us

]]> 2025-02-03 03:53:53 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313038307 Our lovely songs https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313042247 https://suno.com/song/2e628def-fa7c-4d62-ae35-12179a082b4e

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https://suno.com/song/282818a7-129c-42ce-bb29-15df6c19849c

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THESE ARE COPYRIGHT !!!!!!!


]]> 2025-02-03 03:58:25 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313042247 Liesel, Tan Jing Xuan and Colette https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313042664 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1G9_NCr_IIEU9wAfFJ46jbXrJc4gYE3OXkbWiUTyrONU/edit#slide=id.g32bdd513912_1_0

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]]> 2025-02-03 03:59:35 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313043160 Our Poem https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313043425 2025-02-03 03:59:52 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313043425 Our comic strip https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313043532 2025-02-03 04:00:02 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313043532 hannahyng https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313194294 our poem :)

]]> 2025-02-03 07:00:48 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3313194294 sorry there was a typo in the poem https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321867691 2025-02-10 03:11:44 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321867691 Nice job Caelan Da Pro https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321869135 2025-02-10 03:13:22 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321869135 Jia Kai added into our group https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321869260 2025-02-10 03:13:28 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321869260 Amber:) https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321870277 (Task B: Write a poem about one legacy of Funan or Srivijaya.)

]]> 2025-02-10 03:14:27 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321870277 Yeah I know https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321870658 2025-02-10 03:14:52 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321870658 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321872200 sorry if quality is bad there was not much time

]]> 2025-02-10 03:16:22 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321872200 https://www.canva.com/design/DAGeqxsbCo8/ice-MiLzLLaO3H9AejMhNQ/edit https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321874750 My Poem!

-Amber

]]> 2025-02-10 03:18:58 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321874750 Our Song https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321879257 2025-02-10 03:23:45 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321879257 deepest apologies https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321882020 Ong Qizen would like to express her deepest apologies for handing in low quality work. She hopes you will forgive her.

]]> 2025-02-10 03:26:48 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321882020 i think this might be counted as a poem https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321884310 Poem about Srivijaya

celebrate the Festival of Srivijaya annually read about the Kingdom of Srivijaya
continue to use the Port of Palembang

Appreciate your southeast asia heritage?

]]> 2025-02-10 03:29:21 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321884310 Nice song!!! https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321907855 2025-02-10 03:55:24 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321907855 Nice "comic" https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321908131 2025-02-10 03:55:42 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321908131 hannahyng https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321908205 really nice poem:)

]]> 2025-02-10 03:55:48 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321908205 Nice https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321908291 2025-02-10 03:55:53 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321908291 SzeRui https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321908427 good job!

]]> 2025-02-10 03:56:03 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321908427 hannahyng https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321908530 nice slides:)

]]> 2025-02-10 03:56:12 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321908530 exeptionally outstanding!!!! https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321908554 2025-02-10 03:56:14 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321908554 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321908610 Thanks!


]]> 2025-02-10 03:56:20 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321908610 great https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321908739 2025-02-10 03:56:30 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321908739 By Phillip https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321908845 Nice song! The lyrics are good.

]]> 2025-02-10 03:56:35 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321908845 Ur just stating facts https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909053 2025-02-10 03:56:53 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909053 hannahyng https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909226 a lot of info n really good slides :)

]]> 2025-02-10 03:57:03 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909226 the beat is fire https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909228 2025-02-10 03:57:03 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909228 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909246 The rhyming words are great!

Good job :D

-Amber

]]> 2025-02-10 03:57:05 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909246 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909294 good job!

]]> 2025-02-10 03:57:09 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909294 Good Job! Creative poem. https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909312 2025-02-10 03:57:11 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909312 Comments https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909317 Very nice slides and the legacies of Srivijaya were very clearly explained.

]]> 2025-02-10 03:57:11 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909317 ur lyris are just stating facts, but the tune melody and singer is great https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909374 2025-02-10 03:57:15 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909374 Great Work! https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909432 2025-02-10 03:57:22 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909432 sheep dude https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909440 whats one sixth of a sestina of funan

]]> 2025-02-10 03:57:23 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909440 Nice song! Very creative and interesting! https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909475 From Andrea


]]> 2025-02-10 03:57:26 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909475 to amber https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909513 I like your poem. very poetic lol

]]> 2025-02-10 03:57:28 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909513 Nice poem https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909635 2025-02-10 03:57:35 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909635 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909639 I like the theme, good job!

]]> 2025-02-10 03:57:36 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909639 Colette https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909719 That was amazing! I really love the transitions! :)

]]> 2025-02-10 03:57:40 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909719 PLS NOTE IM NOT DONE YET https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909744 2025-02-10 03:57:41 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909744 tze yu https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909778 it is very well-written

]]> 2025-02-10 03:57:42 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909778 Michael's comment https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909792 Very nice, creative.

]]> 2025-02-10 03:57:43 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909792 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909805 Well written poem and very nice graphics and background


]]> 2025-02-10 03:57:44 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909805 Kaydren Comment https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909853 Nice acrostic poem, but in my opinion its abit too wordy. Overall, its still a nice poem!

]]> 2025-02-10 03:57:48 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909853 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909896 :) thanks

]]> 2025-02-10 03:57:51 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909896 Chorus was nicely written https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909897 2025-02-10 03:57:51 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909897 Comments https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909950 I really enjoy the uniqueness and the phrases as well as the deliberate rhyming scheme, which gives it a sense of rhythm and originality. The variation in sentences allows the reader to fully immerse themselves in the poem without drifting off. Great job!

]]> 2025-02-10 03:57:53 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909950 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909978 Nice lyrics!!

]]> 2025-02-10 03:57:55 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909978 Nice! https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909988 2025-02-10 03:57:55 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909988 Good Job https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909998 2025-02-10 03:57:56 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321909998 By Olivia A https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910017 Good song, the lyrics are nice.

]]> 2025-02-10 03:57:56 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910017 DONT COMMENT ME IM NOT DONE YET https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910362 2025-02-10 03:58:03 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910362 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910457 cool :)

]]> 2025-02-10 03:58:10 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910457 kayley (sheepy dude) https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910481 i like the lyrics :)

]]> 2025-02-10 03:58:12 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910481 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910536 Very nicely done comic strip:)


]]> 2025-02-10 03:58:17 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910536 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910548 Creative poem!


]]> 2025-02-10 03:58:19 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910548 Good job dudettes! https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910570 2025-02-10 03:58:20 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910570 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910574 good

]]> 2025-02-10 03:58:20 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910574 great "comic" https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910593 2025-02-10 03:58:22 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910593 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910599 GREAT job!!! You did well!!


]]> 2025-02-10 03:58:22 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910599 Kaydren Comment https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910606 Chorus was well written! :]

]]> 2025-02-10 03:58:23 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910606 Cool! Gooo sheeeps!!! https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910652 2025-02-10 03:58:24 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910652 Tan Jing Xuan https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910663 I like the poem's describing words about Funan as well as the emphasis on certain words.

]]> 2025-02-10 03:58:26 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910663 very good https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910696 2025-02-10 03:58:29 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910696 Nice song https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910704 very interesting

-Sarah

]]> 2025-02-10 03:58:30 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910704 Colette https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910767 I really enjoyed listening to your poem! The words used are really beautiful:)

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]]> 2025-02-10 03:58:44 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910879 interesting and fun slides https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910881 2025-02-10 03:58:44 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910881 Very nice song, lyrics well written. https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910906 2025-02-10 03:58:47 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910906 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321910971 Good job! I like the pictures and stuff :)

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]]> 2025-02-10 03:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911113 Nois Chorus with Nois tuneee by ai https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911119 2025-02-10 03:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911119 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911133 nice

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]]> 2025-02-10 03:59:08 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911213 NIIIIICCEEEE!!!!!!! BYEEE https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911235 2025-02-10 03:59:10 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911235 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911274 whoa your poem is so nice

]]> 2025-02-10 03:59:10 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911274 Comments https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911555 I enjoyed the variation and originality of the lyrics, and although I know the melody wasn't created by you all, the melody and the lyrics flowed seamlessly. Good job!

]]> 2025-02-10 03:59:23 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911555 i like ur comic https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911556 it is interesting

-Sarah-Jane

]]> 2025-02-10 03:59:23 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911556 chujin https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911626 your poem is very good, but maybe you can make the lines closer?

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]]> 2025-02-10 03:59:29 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911664 very nice :) https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911681 2025-02-10 03:59:30 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911681 Kaydren Comment https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911688 Awesome Job!

]]> 2025-02-10 03:59:31 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911688 Very cool! Good job! https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911702 2025-02-10 03:59:33 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911702 Olivia A https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911723 I really like it good job!

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]]> 2025-02-10 03:59:43 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911915 tze yu https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911973 great song with a nice chorus

]]> 2025-02-10 03:59:47 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911973 Kayley https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321911976 slay good jb

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]]> 2025-02-10 03:59:53 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321912059 Colette https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321912075 I like how you used different poetic and descriptive words to show how the kingdoms were like! Great job and keep using these words in future!

]]> 2025-02-10 03:59:55 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321912075 Not bad kid https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321912101 2025-02-10 03:59:57 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321912101 nice:) https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321912200 2025-02-10 04:00:00 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321912200 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321912258 good design!

]]> 2025-02-10 04:00:06 UTC https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321912258 https://padlet.com/su_yongshui/apb0hcg8mg55xn6b/wish/3321912304 To Chujin: that's true... Thanks for the suggestion!

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