GCSE English paper 1 June 2019 by BAES Staff https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019 en-us 2021-05-08 13:58:33 UTC 2023-03-29 23:36:45 UTC hello@padlet.com List four things about the motor-van (lines 1 to 5) coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505035131 2021-05-08 14:01:52 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505035131 coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505036756 2021-05-08 14:03:29 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505036756 How does the writer use language to describe the Hartop family? (lines 6 to 12) coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505044880 2021-05-08 14:10:55 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505044880 The text is from the beginning of a short story. How has the writer structured the text to interest you as a reader? coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505046078 2021-05-08 14:12:01 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505046078 From line 34 to the end. A student said, 'This part of the story where Alice is sent back along the road to find the chrysanthemums, shows how hard and cruel Hartop is, so all of our sympathy is with Alice.' To what extent do you agree? coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505048016 2021-05-08 14:13:30 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505048016 Marking Q1 coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505051213 answers must:
  • be from the correct lines
  • relate to the topic (motor van)
  • make sense on their own
]]> 2021-05-08 14:15:54 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505051213 Marking Q2 coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505054368 answers must:
  • give an interpretation of the topic (a member of the family)
  • give a quote as evidence of the interpretation (from the correct lines)
  • analyse the effect of the language in the quote (keyword or language device)

]]> 2021-05-08 14:18:33 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505054368 Marking Q3 coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505057954 answers must:
  • discuss the development of the piece as a whole (break it down using sections)
  • use subject terminology (structural terms and devices)
  • explain the effects of the writer's choices of structural features (effect on the reader)



]]> 2021-05-08 14:21:17 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505057954 Marking Q4 coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505067787 answers must:
  • respond to the statement and give their own interpretation
  • give a quote as evidence
  • analyse the effects of the language in the quote 
  • challenge the statement


]]> 2021-05-08 14:29:03 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505067787 Answer A coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505077374 1 - Old
2 - The van is streaky
3 - Hartop is driving
4 - The van is slow
WHICH ANSWERS ARE CORRECT? WHICH ARE INCORRECT AND WHY? ]]> 2021-05-08 14:37:39 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505077374 Answer B coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505080788 1 - It's a Ford
2 - It's been repainted green
3 - It has a flattened-out biscuit tin nailed to the side
4 - Rain hailed on the windscreen 
WHICH ANSWERS ARE CORRECT? WHICH ARE INCORRECT AND WHY? ]]> 2021-05-08 14:40:54 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505080788 Answer A coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505086479 Hartop is thin. This is shown in, 'a thin, angular man, starved-faced.' Thin has connotations of slim and slight.
HOW COULD THIS ANSWER BE IMPROVED?]]> 2021-05-08 14:45:24 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505086479 Answer B coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505090598 The writer implies that the daughter is not comfortable.  This is evident in, 'arms flat as though ironed against her side'. Being ironed would not be a comfortable experience.
HOW COULD THIS ANSWER BE IMPROVED?]]> 2021-05-08 14:49:03 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505090598 Answer A coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505460073 The text begins by describing Hartop’s van and the three members of the family, so that we know who they are. Then the van is moving with the women squashed up inside. Later, Alice leaves the van to find what has dropped off the roof. 
 WHAT COULD BE ADDED TO THIS ANSWER?
]]> 2021-05-08 20:15:26 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505460073 Answer B coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505462490 At the beginning, the focus is on the outside of the old van which is a bit battered and is travelling slowly through the ‘squally November half- darkness’. Then we move inside the van where Hartop is sprawled in the driver’s seat and his wife and daughter are squashed up together. The writer then moves the action forward as Hartop drives the old van carefully through the rainy night until it stops because he thinks something has fallen from the roof. The focus then switches to the outside where Alice ‘with the rain full in her face’ looks for the lost item. She watches the van disappear into the distance and is left alone. Later, the writer uses dialogue as a way of reuniting Alice with her father but in an aggressive way, so that she ‘walked away and vanished’ at the end of the text.
WHAT IS EFFECTIVE ABOUT THIS ANSWER?]]> 2021-05-08 20:17:42 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1505462490 Can you make a better point? coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1506915596 2021-05-09 20:11:52 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1506915596 Answer A coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1513704550 I agree to an extent that Alice is treated cruelly.  She, the child, is made to get out of the van as shown in, ''Alice, you get out,' Hartop said.''  Without much thought and in quite a short and sharp way Hartop gives the order to his daughter.
WHAT IS EFFECTIVE ABOUT THIS ANSWER AND WHAT NEEDS TO BE CHANGED?]]> 2021-05-11 14:58:40 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1513704550 Answer B coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1513728963 I agree to some extent that we do sympathise with Alice.  This is because it appears that she is quite hopeless and maybe even depressed with her life as shown in,  'She cold see nothing.'  In the literal sense, she could see nothing at that moment as she was left alone on an unlit road. However, the quote can also be viewed as a representation of her life and imply that she can see no future with her current situation.  This makes us feel sorry for Alice.
WHAT IS EFFECTIVE ABOUT THIS ANSWER AND WHAT NEEDS TO BE CHANGED?]]> 2021-05-11 15:03:36 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1513728963 Hartop cares more about his business than his daughter. Do you agree? Is there any evidence of this? coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1513780451 2021-05-11 15:13:53 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1513780451 Do we have any sympathy for Hartop? coachingteam https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1513806305 2021-05-11 15:18:27 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1513806305 Answer C lisa071269 https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1517260973 "The Hartops faces seemed moulded in clay"]]> 2021-05-12 13:00:44 UTC https://padlet.com/coachingteam/paper1June2019/wish/1517260973