https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj Think about your writing experiences: what were effective & ineffective feedback? en-us 2017-02-27 04:32:53 UTC 2017-03-30 20:36:01 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578509 Just writing "good job" tells me nothing about my writing and what improvements I need to make or what was actually good.
Effective feedback always has more description and detail that will help improve writing. 
-Ethan]]> 2017-02-27 21:57:20 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578509 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578548 2017-02-27 21:57:40 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578548 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578587 Specific information and examples ]]> 2017-02-27 21:57:55 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578587 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578620 Specific feedback by offering alternative ways of wording something (semantics),  or other vocab to use in a sentence, etc.]]> 2017-02-27 21:58:08 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578620 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578622 Peer review papers in 364 was helpful.  We shared papers and then specifically addressed one paragraph in the paper.  Then switched partners and did it again. - Donald


]]> 2017-02-27 21:58:09 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578622 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578630 "good"
well what was good]]> 2017-02-27 21:58:11 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578630 santo061 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578642 Giving specific feedback about the content of my writing

Teresa]]> 2017-02-27 21:58:16 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578642 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578643 Teacher would list strengths and would give specific areas of improvement at the end of a paper. She also would give suggestions of resources to use or add to the paper.]]> 2017-02-27 21:58:17 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578643 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578664 Show me what I did well on, and what I need to improve. At minimum, use a Rubric. -Jennifer

]]> 2017-02-27 21:58:28 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578664 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578685 "Expand"
What do I need to expand on? -Casey]]> 2017-02-27 21:58:36 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578685 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578698 Feed back is typically not explicit enough ]]> 2017-02-27 21:58:43 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578698 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578717 Written feedback is great to keep and return to when working on future assignments, make sure to improve on the feedback provided in the past]]> 2017-02-27 21:58:49 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578717 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578723 Finding examples within our writing and explaining if that is good or needs to be revised. 
-Michael

]]> 2017-02-27 21:58:52 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578723 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578726 Using a rubric is effective to give feedback for projects ]]> 2017-02-27 21:58:53 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578726 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578743 Just writing "good" or a "+" doesn't really tell me anything. Or when they just put a grade and no feedback at all.

]]> 2017-02-27 21:59:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578743 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578749 thorough comments (positive and negative - as long as they were constructive)

]]> 2017-02-27 21:59:06 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578749 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578784 Comments on strengths and follows up with questions on what/how to expand on next time.
-Nicole]]> 2017-02-27 21:59:21 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578784 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578796 2017-02-27 21:59:31 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578796 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578826 "Explain why"
Asking to clarify.
- Alyosha]]> 2017-02-27 21:59:46 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578826 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578842 Get rid of the "fluff"
What do you consider fluff?
Exactly...That was all they would write and I did not know what they considered to be fluff.
Jessica]]> 2017-02-27 21:59:52 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578842 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578871 "You're a good writer"

...Why? ]]> 2017-02-27 22:00:06 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578871 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578934 Effective feedback is specific and continual. ]]> 2017-02-27 22:00:33 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578934 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578961 giving someone feed back, but not in detail with what they can improve on

]]> 2017-02-27 22:00:44 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156578961 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156579030 Using a rubric. gives students clear guidelines of teachers expectations.
jessie ]]> 2017-02-27 22:01:11 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156579030 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156579145 going over a test and shouting out answers: a, d, c... that doesnt mean anything 
jessie]]> 2017-02-27 22:01:46 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156579145 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156579151 When teachers give feedback to the whole class on individual assignments because "most" people did or did not do something]]> 2017-02-27 22:01:50 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156579151 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156579291 giving support with your feedback]]> 2017-02-27 22:02:55 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156579291 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156579308 feedback from classmates 

]]> 2017-02-27 22:03:04 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156579308 santo061 https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156579698 Ineffective: Just correcting my grammar and giving me a grade 
Teresa]]> 2017-02-27 22:05:57 UTC https://padlet.com/lstowell/amqulw8zxbdj/wish/156579698