Imogen’s showcase Padlet by Student - Imogen Wong https://padlet.com/iwong35/amm7mirf35owkyde Habitat loss project en-us 2021-11-18 21:38:15 UTC 2025-12-19 13:58:52 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f600.png Ophelia https://padlet.com/iwong35/amm7mirf35owkyde/wish/1901671987 Hi Imogen,
I really liked this topic of habitat loss. It brings back many memories, especially since it has happened not long ago. The bushfires did take an impact on the habitat loss of animals, however, one tip, just make sure to put your bibliography in the right format instead of links. You can use cite this for me, so you don't have to do it individually.
:)]]> 2021-11-19 08:58:12 UTC https://padlet.com/iwong35/amm7mirf35owkyde/wish/1901671987 https://padlet.com/iwong35/amm7mirf35owkyde/wish/1907266619 Welcome to my Padlet!😁]]> 2021-11-23 01:13:42 UTC https://padlet.com/iwong35/amm7mirf35owkyde/wish/1907266619 FeedBack https://padlet.com/iwong35/amm7mirf35owkyde/wish/1907279590 Hello Imogen!! I’m Emma Sugianto from 5B,

The amount of information in your website is insane!!!

As of your paragraphs I think they sort of are over the top and much longer then other Year 6 students. This isn’t a bad thing though (in my perspective).

The second bit of feedback I would suggest you change is in your home page. The last paragraph could transfer into your call to action. Although I understand why you have placed it there as your call to action already has extremely detailed paragraphs, images and even videos.

I think this is a great topic to focus on. It is clear why you are passionate about the environment and specifically habitat loss.

Good Luck!


]]> 2021-11-23 01:22:01 UTC https://padlet.com/iwong35/amm7mirf35owkyde/wish/1907279590 Feedback https://padlet.com/iwong35/amm7mirf35owkyde/wish/1907309021 Hi, my names Taylor and im from 5B

I love your idea about helping Australian animals. Throughout your website, you focus mainly on koalas but in your intro, you talk about helping all native animals. I think maybe you could add some more information on other native animals to help the other readers get a better idea of what animals need to survive.]]> 2021-11-23 01:39:24 UTC https://padlet.com/iwong35/amm7mirf35owkyde/wish/1907309021 Evie Fergus year 5 student :) https://padlet.com/iwong35/amm7mirf35owkyde/wish/1907320390 Good morning Imogen! My name is Evangeline Fergus but i prefer Evie, I’m currently going to give feedback on your web sight! Enjoy :)

Home page:
I love how you added your name and a photo of you! Your second paragraph stating some facts was very intriguing and made me want to know more! All of those facts helped me learn something new! Your home page discusses lots of different problems and issues and i really like how you added a little koala at the top with the title “imogens web sight” adorable, but sad to believe that they are dying :(

Photo Essay:
Your photo essay made me feel bad for all the animals that have to go through that :( i like how you added an explanation to these photos! Your bibliography was really interesting! I don’t know all those facts :o

Research:
WOW! That is a lot of massive paragraphs! Maybe you should split it up in dot points to make it easier to read? I love how you added pictures of animals! Great job :)

Call to action: 
Thats so cool! I never knew you could “adopt” a koala!! You have done many good things to this world that you should be proud of! I love how you added a “donate here” button which will help more people access it!

Bibliography:
It’s good that people add a bibliography, i think it is very important to credit your information. Thank you for making the title “bibliography and Padlet” because another year 6 didn’t add “Padlet” and i couldn’t find it!!

Overall:
Your web sight is AMAZING!!!! I love it so much and it addresses all the problems of animals! You should get the best marks!! Good luck :)
]]> 2021-11-23 01:45:18 UTC https://padlet.com/iwong35/amm7mirf35owkyde/wish/1907320390 https://padlet.com/iwong35/amm7mirf35owkyde/wish/1907436971 Thank you all for your feedback!. Much appreciated!!😁😁😁😁]]> 2021-11-23 02:57:08 UTC https://padlet.com/iwong35/amm7mirf35owkyde/wish/1907436971 Alyssa https://padlet.com/iwong35/amm7mirf35owkyde/wish/1911405103 I think what you have done for the environment is a really good thing you have done.]]> 2021-11-24 22:51:50 UTC https://padlet.com/iwong35/amm7mirf35owkyde/wish/1911405103 Alyssa https://padlet.com/iwong35/amm7mirf35owkyde/wish/1911405117 I think what you have done for the environment is a really good thing you have done.]]> 2021-11-24 22:51:51 UTC https://padlet.com/iwong35/amm7mirf35owkyde/wish/1911405117 Priya M https://padlet.com/iwong35/amm7mirf35owkyde/wish/1911426958 This website really hooked my attention, Imogen. 

This website definitely has the perfect amount of colour, photos and has the perfect layout to really intrigue your audience. It has very many statistics and I certainly think you did well on this website. 

One thing I would say, when presenting, intriguing the audience with emotion would bring your website and presentation together.


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